Comments received on poems by bobfallon



All You Have
2781 said:

\"And there was a great famine in Samaria: and, behold, they besieged it, until an ass\'s head was sold for fourscore pieces of silver, and the fourth part of a cab of dove\'s dung for five pieces of silver.\"

December 29th, 2023 23:48

Scenery
Thomas W Case said:

Great microcosm. Well crafted.

October 22nd, 2023 00:16

Well, Come In
2781 said:

I often wonder what our forefathers would think if they came back?

August 22nd, 2023 05:22

Bless Me Father
Parisab said:

Amen! Please keep writing to aid an awakening-

July 26th, 2023 09:24

In Fact
Pop64 said:

I found this to be quite a fact laden read. It makes this reader recognize the very politics I believe this to be based upon. Very well written...and that\'s a fact

July 24th, 2023 09:39

In Fact
L. B. Mek said:

\'it turns out to be a bottomless pit,
like a sewer with voting rights,
and by all reports, sleeps very well at night.\'
acute imagery, the rage is palpable
what can we do
but share and hope more people
recognise it, too
thank you!

July 24th, 2023 04:49

Certified
bobfallon said:

correct

July 18th, 2023 06:51

It Landed Here
Neville said:


what a fine introduction to your ink my friend .. thoroughly enjoyed from end to end .. Neville

July 18th, 2023 02:25

Certified
2781 said:

The two shall become one. Or that was the intention.

July 13th, 2023 23:53

Come On
Eugene S. said:

An interesting poem with a unique concept. It pulls you in. Well written.

June 11th, 2023 07:32

No Gravitational Pull
bobfallon said:

I had a dream.

June 5th, 2023 20:59