Comments received on poems by terriblesoul977
Hear
jarcher54 said:
Beautiful and painful. A very insightful account of those dark thoughts... I love how you rhymed violence and nihilist. Brilliant.
August 7th, 2023 13:37
jarcher54 said:
Beautiful and painful. A very insightful account of those dark thoughts... I love how you rhymed violence and nihilist. Brilliant.
August 7th, 2023 13:37
Try
jarcher54 said:
There is nothing like a bittersweet love poem to make my day! Thanks!!
Yes, some of us do not know how to love... it goes against our self-centered instincts!
August 7th, 2023 13:34
jarcher54 said:
There is nothing like a bittersweet love poem to make my day! Thanks!!
Yes, some of us do not know how to love... it goes against our self-centered instincts!
August 7th, 2023 13:34
Gullible
paperjam said:
The contrast of your deep yearning for a profound, ethereal connection while acknowledging the fleeting nature of your intimacy with the line, \"Our souls only connect in my bed.\" really conveys that stark realization, or even self-deception, from being reminded of the physical constraints of your relationship. I love it; a really well-done piece.
June 11th, 2023 03:54
paperjam said:
The contrast of your deep yearning for a profound, ethereal connection while acknowledging the fleeting nature of your intimacy with the line, \"Our souls only connect in my bed.\" really conveys that stark realization, or even self-deception, from being reminded of the physical constraints of your relationship. I love it; a really well-done piece.
June 11th, 2023 03:54
Hear
Poetic Dan said:
Marilyn Monroe said it best \"if you can\'t handle me at my worst, then you don\'t deserve my best\"
Dr Seuss is next \"for those that mind don\'t matter, those that matter don\'t mind\"
This is such a powerful and beautiful release from the soul and as I shared my tears from my own darkness that tells me to just leave this world alone.
You inspire more people than you\'ll ever know!
Just be water my friend and keep filling with the flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 10th, 2023 06:33
Poetic Dan said:
Marilyn Monroe said it best \"if you can\'t handle me at my worst, then you don\'t deserve my best\"
Dr Seuss is next \"for those that mind don\'t matter, those that matter don\'t mind\"
This is such a powerful and beautiful release from the soul and as I shared my tears from my own darkness that tells me to just leave this world alone.
You inspire more people than you\'ll ever know!
Just be water my friend and keep filling with the flow.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
June 10th, 2023 06:33
Gullible
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! Now that\'s keeping it real! How we have all walked this path or made that bed.
It\'s so easy to take our clothes off but that\'s not what being truly naked is! Mind, body and soul all need to flow.
Keep up the write
June 10th, 2023 06:22
Poetic Dan said:
Ha! Now that\'s keeping it real! How we have all walked this path or made that bed.
It\'s so easy to take our clothes off but that\'s not what being truly naked is! Mind, body and soul all need to flow.
Keep up the write
June 10th, 2023 06:22
Hear
bobfallon said:
Sorry that you feel that bad, don\'t give up, always let go, pretend that we would hold your hands if we could reach that far, but use your imagination, dream of another lover and let that one go. bobfallon
June 9th, 2023 14:02
bobfallon said:
Sorry that you feel that bad, don\'t give up, always let go, pretend that we would hold your hands if we could reach that far, but use your imagination, dream of another lover and let that one go. bobfallon
June 9th, 2023 14:02
Hear
Bobby O said:
That passion that here is displayed is predictive of an eventuality that strides and glides ,defines what soon will be your pleasure , and if you listen to every measure you might wanna groove w my tracks cuz I’m about to get fresher. !!
June 9th, 2023 03:17
Bobby O said:
That passion that here is displayed is predictive of an eventuality that strides and glides ,defines what soon will be your pleasure , and if you listen to every measure you might wanna groove w my tracks cuz I’m about to get fresher. !!
June 9th, 2023 03:17
Hear
NewWolf said:
Love the poem , I hope it gets easier faster for you. picking up and pushing forward and living that is.
June 9th, 2023 03:06
NewWolf said:
Love the poem , I hope it gets easier faster for you. picking up and pushing forward and living that is.
June 9th, 2023 03:06
Gullible
Bobby O said:
That’s a good write. Was a nice enough read to draw me back to read again and andorf. A bit more. Great phrasing and a message of both pathos and stern reality. We walk that path and maybe we learn to SHRUG?
June 8th, 2023 22:12
Bobby O said:
That’s a good write. Was a nice enough read to draw me back to read again and andorf. A bit more. Great phrasing and a message of both pathos and stern reality. We walk that path and maybe we learn to SHRUG?
June 8th, 2023 22:12
Gullible
Peter Gates said:
We\'re but actors on a stage.
We play no part as best we can.
I have nothing left but rage,
Searching for an honest man.
June 7th, 2023 13:05
Peter Gates said:
We\'re but actors on a stage.
We play no part as best we can.
I have nothing left but rage,
Searching for an honest man.
June 7th, 2023 13:05
Gullible
jarcher54 said:
You are not the first to have made this mistake... bittersweet and haunting.
June 7th, 2023 11:24
jarcher54 said:
You are not the first to have made this mistake... bittersweet and haunting.
June 7th, 2023 11:24
