Comments received on poems by shadowbones



Pain hurts
sorenbarrett said:

What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written

July 1st, 2025 05:20

Pain hurts
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write

July 1st, 2025 01:37

Little Rain Drop
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 29th, 2025 14:15

Little Rain Drop
sorenbarrett said:

Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece

June 29th, 2025 12:04

Something new
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read

June 26th, 2025 21:38

Something new
sorenbarrett said:

Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely

June 26th, 2025 16:22

Wasting time in heaven
Poetic Licence said:

The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read

June 22nd, 2025 19:52

Wasting time in heaven
sorenbarrett said:

Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written

June 22nd, 2025 13:59

Energy
Poetic Licence said:

A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written

June 22nd, 2025 05:26

Energy
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 21st, 2025 20:26

Energy
sorenbarrett said:

A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done

June 21st, 2025 13:27

Only 1
Poetic Licence said:

Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read

June 14th, 2025 06:39

Only 1
sorenbarrett said:

There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done

June 14th, 2025 04:50

Kingdom of God
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read

June 12th, 2025 21:08

Kingdom of God
sorenbarrett said:

I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done

June 12th, 2025 15:59

The Highway Men
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

June 12th, 2025 09:18

The Highway Men
Poetic Licence said:

A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written

June 12th, 2025 00:18

The Highway Men
sorenbarrett said:

Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.

June 11th, 2025 21:34

Trash glass
RSM0812 said:

This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.

June 11th, 2025 13:36

Trash glass
sorenbarrett said:

Real life incident turned metaphor. Very nice

June 9th, 2025 15:45

Get better with you
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship and the decision to stay in its comfort. A wonderful write

June 7th, 2025 13:55

Following
Poetic Licence said:

Feeling trapped in the confines of your own thoughts and mind is a dark place, scary, lonely and difficult to get out of, nicely expressed

June 5th, 2025 00:11

Following
sorenbarrett said:

Trapped inside one\'s mind is the worst type of solitary confinement. A dark write. Well done

June 4th, 2025 18:44

Dead everywhere
sorenbarrett said:

This could be taken to be sexual or emotional and the form of a cross in the text seems to indicate death and a sacrifice. Powerful words of rawness here. Nicely done

May 26th, 2025 04:28

Dead everywhere
Poetic Licence said:

A raw write of the slow death of a relationship and the feeling it left behind, nicely done

May 26th, 2025 02:34

Lurking darkness
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting and entertaining write, I got the feeling not just of aliens but how the night time brings out the worse behaviour in some people, nicely done

May 21st, 2025 02:26

Lurking darkness
sorenbarrett said:

Alien fantasy runs through this poem quite different. Nice

May 20th, 2025 18:06

Linear transgressions
sorenbarrett said:

Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely

May 3rd, 2025 16:16

Rotting fingers
sorenbarrett said:

The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that like waves speaks loudly and softly, powerfully and tenderly. Well done

April 19th, 2025 03:17

Centrifugal
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of liberation from ones inner self from the outer self, enjoyed the read

April 15th, 2025 04:26

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