Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Again letting go
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
Pain hurts
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
Pain hurts
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Little Rain Drop
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
Something new
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Something new
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
Wasting time in heaven
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Wasting time in heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
Energy
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
Energy
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
Only 1
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Only 1
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
Kingdom of God
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Kingdom of God
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
The Highway Men
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
The Highway Men
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
Trash glass
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
Get better with you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship and the decision to stay in its comfort. A wonderful write
June 7th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship and the decision to stay in its comfort. A wonderful write
June 7th, 2025 13:55
Following
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling trapped in the confines of your own thoughts and mind is a dark place, scary, lonely and difficult to get out of, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:11
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling trapped in the confines of your own thoughts and mind is a dark place, scary, lonely and difficult to get out of, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:11
Following
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped inside one\'s mind is the worst type of solitary confinement. A dark write. Well done
June 4th, 2025 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped inside one\'s mind is the worst type of solitary confinement. A dark write. Well done
June 4th, 2025 18:44
Dead everywhere
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to be sexual or emotional and the form of a cross in the text seems to indicate death and a sacrifice. Powerful words of rawness here. Nicely done
May 26th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to be sexual or emotional and the form of a cross in the text seems to indicate death and a sacrifice. Powerful words of rawness here. Nicely done
May 26th, 2025 04:28
Dead everywhere
Poetic Licence said:
A raw write of the slow death of a relationship and the feeling it left behind, nicely done
May 26th, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
A raw write of the slow death of a relationship and the feeling it left behind, nicely done
May 26th, 2025 02:34
Lurking darkness
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and entertaining write, I got the feeling not just of aliens but how the night time brings out the worse behaviour in some people, nicely done
May 21st, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and entertaining write, I got the feeling not just of aliens but how the night time brings out the worse behaviour in some people, nicely done
May 21st, 2025 02:26
Lurking darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Alien fantasy runs through this poem quite different. Nice
May 20th, 2025 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Alien fantasy runs through this poem quite different. Nice
May 20th, 2025 18:06
Linear transgressions
sorenbarrett said:
Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 16:16
Rotting fingers
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that like waves speaks loudly and softly, powerfully and tenderly. Well done
April 19th, 2025 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that like waves speaks loudly and softly, powerfully and tenderly. Well done
April 19th, 2025 03:17
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