Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Football
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
Better way
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
The worst dream ever
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
Furry steering wheel
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
Pulp
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
Scarred mind
sorenbarrett said:
Mistreatment the core of this short piece produces anger, pity, disgust. Poetry is about emotions in words conveyed to a reader and this does it well
October 16th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
Mistreatment the core of this short piece produces anger, pity, disgust. Poetry is about emotions in words conveyed to a reader and this does it well
October 16th, 2025 16:12
Scarred mind
NinjaGirl said:
This poem ends with such a shock...it feels like there should be more but there isn\'t. Very well done for such few words!
October 16th, 2025 15:15
NinjaGirl said:
This poem ends with such a shock...it feels like there should be more but there isn\'t. Very well done for such few words!
October 16th, 2025 15:15
Cradle
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with feelings of mans arrogance nicely said
October 13th, 2025 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with feelings of mans arrogance nicely said
October 13th, 2025 18:45
Relative drifting
sorenbarrett said:
When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left vague and open ended so that the reader can imagine what they wish. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left vague and open ended so that the reader can imagine what they wish. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 20:18
Fade
sorenbarrett said:
It is an interesting poem that blames a god a taunt toward the nonexistent or if existent a suicidal plunge of anger. Well worded it seems drunk with rage. Great images fill its lines.
October 2nd, 2025 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
It is an interesting poem that blames a god a taunt toward the nonexistent or if existent a suicidal plunge of anger. Well worded it seems drunk with rage. Great images fill its lines.
October 2nd, 2025 18:24
Trees
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective metaphor where one can\'t see the forest for the trees or maybe can\'t see the tree for the forest.
September 28th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective metaphor where one can\'t see the forest for the trees or maybe can\'t see the tree for the forest.
September 28th, 2025 11:16
Riot
sorenbarrett said:
Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
September 20th, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
September 20th, 2025 13:16
The homeless
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of how the world is at present. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of how the world is at present. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 20:14
Android radio
sorenbarrett said:
Very electronic, digital, metallic technology where current is the currency. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very electronic, digital, metallic technology where current is the currency. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 04:25
Reality bites
sorenbarrett said:
To speak of pain one must have felt it. The shutting down as one comes close to death where perception is no longer necessary. A most graphic and sad poem.
August 16th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
To speak of pain one must have felt it. The shutting down as one comes close to death where perception is no longer necessary. A most graphic and sad poem.
August 16th, 2025 04:25
Reality bites
Tylove1 said:
beautiful poem but also sounds that you are in pain
August 15th, 2025 22:28
Tylove1 said:
beautiful poem but also sounds that you are in pain
August 15th, 2025 22:28
Reality bites
Poetic Licence said:
When we are drowning and buried in pain, it feels like everything has died, nicely expressed and written write
August 15th, 2025 21:25
Poetic Licence said:
When we are drowning and buried in pain, it feels like everything has died, nicely expressed and written write
August 15th, 2025 21:25
Just me again
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of darkness and deepening depression in this write, withdrawing into themselves in order to survive every day, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 13:27
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of darkness and deepening depression in this write, withdrawing into themselves in order to survive every day, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 13:27
Just me again
sorenbarrett said:
Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
August 7th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
August 7th, 2025 13:04
Her
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write, the warmth of closeness, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write, the warmth of closeness, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:36
Her
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem is tactil and one can feel its warmth. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem is tactil and one can feel its warmth. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:45
Wake Up
Xander_Kaine said:
Depression is a difficult thing to deal with been coming out of a deep one now I know how difficult it is to live with that oppressive shadow just behind you. Take care and do the best you can its all anyone can in this life.
July 29th, 2025 19:58
Xander_Kaine said:
Depression is a difficult thing to deal with been coming out of a deep one now I know how difficult it is to live with that oppressive shadow just behind you. Take care and do the best you can its all anyone can in this life.
July 29th, 2025 19:58
Wake Up
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
Dirty love
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
With Friends
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
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