Comments received on poems by shadowbones
The homeless
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of how the world is at present. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of how the world is at present. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 20:14
Android radio
sorenbarrett said:
Very electronic, digital, metallic technology where current is the currency. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very electronic, digital, metallic technology where current is the currency. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 04:25
Reality bites
sorenbarrett said:
To speak of pain one must have felt it. The shutting down as one comes close to death where perception is no longer necessary. A most graphic and sad poem.
August 16th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
To speak of pain one must have felt it. The shutting down as one comes close to death where perception is no longer necessary. A most graphic and sad poem.
August 16th, 2025 04:25
Reality bites
Tylove1 said:
beautiful poem but also sounds that you are in pain
August 15th, 2025 22:28
Tylove1 said:
beautiful poem but also sounds that you are in pain
August 15th, 2025 22:28
Reality bites
Poetic Licence said:
When we are drowning and buried in pain, it feels like everything has died, nicely expressed and written write
August 15th, 2025 21:25
Poetic Licence said:
When we are drowning and buried in pain, it feels like everything has died, nicely expressed and written write
August 15th, 2025 21:25
Just me again
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of darkness and deepening depression in this write, withdrawing into themselves in order to survive every day, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 13:27
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of darkness and deepening depression in this write, withdrawing into themselves in order to survive every day, nicely expressed and written
August 7th, 2025 13:27
Just me again
sorenbarrett said:
Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
August 7th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
August 7th, 2025 13:04
Her
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write, the warmth of closeness, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
A tender write, the warmth of closeness, enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 05:36
Her
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem is tactil and one can feel its warmth. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem is tactil and one can feel its warmth. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2025 04:45
Wake Up
Xander_Kaine said:
Depression is a difficult thing to deal with been coming out of a deep one now I know how difficult it is to live with that oppressive shadow just behind you. Take care and do the best you can its all anyone can in this life.
July 29th, 2025 19:58
Xander_Kaine said:
Depression is a difficult thing to deal with been coming out of a deep one now I know how difficult it is to live with that oppressive shadow just behind you. Take care and do the best you can its all anyone can in this life.
July 29th, 2025 19:58
Wake Up
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
Dirty love
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
With Friends
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
With Friends
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguities, change in heart, opposites, a new start. A wonderful poem of mixed messages. Well done.
July 23rd, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguities, change in heart, opposites, a new start. A wonderful poem of mixed messages. Well done.
July 23rd, 2025 03:56
I love her so much
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:28
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:28
I love her so much
sorenbarrett said:
This one required a second reading and a little thought. Nicely and most cleverly stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This one required a second reading and a little thought. Nicely and most cleverly stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:08
Knowing, loving and feeling
sorenbarrett said:
A short that might be called a quickie. Well written
July 12th, 2025 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
A short that might be called a quickie. Well written
July 12th, 2025 20:38
Again letting go
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
Pain hurts
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
Pain hurts
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Little Rain Drop
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
Something new
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Something new
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
Wasting time in heaven
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Wasting time in heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
Energy
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
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