Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Relationship
NafisaSB said:
I hope the relationship takes a better turn and you both find peace and comfort with each other again- situation described wwll
March 29th, 2026 00:44
NafisaSB said:
I hope the relationship takes a better turn and you both find peace and comfort with each other again- situation described wwll
March 29th, 2026 00:44
Cold hands
sorenbarrett said:
So interesting that one would assume the worst elements it is hard to believe. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
So interesting that one would assume the worst elements it is hard to believe. Nicely written
March 23rd, 2026 14:05
Dead Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of an end and finish to flame be it passion, love, life. It has a sad feel
March 22nd, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of an end and finish to flame be it passion, love, life. It has a sad feel
March 22nd, 2026 04:07
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sorenbarrett said:
A day full a night for poetry and sleep. Poem rest the mind sleep the body. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
A day full a night for poetry and sleep. Poem rest the mind sleep the body. Nicely written
March 9th, 2026 18:03
Forget the day
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view presented in this poem of life, love and the world. It cries to be heard. Well written
March 6th, 2026 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view presented in this poem of life, love and the world. It cries to be heard. Well written
March 6th, 2026 16:02
Relationship
sorenbarrett said:
The push pull of relationships in their ups and downs and the decision of when enough is enough. Some vacillate and some can not make up their minds. Well written
February 26th, 2026 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
The push pull of relationships in their ups and downs and the decision of when enough is enough. Some vacillate and some can not make up their minds. Well written
February 26th, 2026 19:25
Im alright
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear that look forward to hearing more from you.
February 25th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear that look forward to hearing more from you.
February 25th, 2026 04:38
Alone in this shell, I die
sorenbarrett said:
Memories melt for time to time. Nicely written
February 23rd, 2026 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
Memories melt for time to time. Nicely written
February 23rd, 2026 19:45
Wine upside down
Friendship said:
Your poem is very dark. The imagery of a crawlspace serves as a metaphor for hiding from the world and grappling with one\'s inner demons. The mention of wine suggests a desire to escape reality, while the presence of spiders evokes feelings of discomfort and neglect.
February 12th, 2026 08:46
Friendship said:
Your poem is very dark. The imagery of a crawlspace serves as a metaphor for hiding from the world and grappling with one\'s inner demons. The mention of wine suggests a desire to escape reality, while the presence of spiders evokes feelings of discomfort and neglect.
February 12th, 2026 08:46
Wine upside down
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that seem like they would occur during a drunken spell. Nicely done
February 12th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that seem like they would occur during a drunken spell. Nicely done
February 12th, 2026 04:09
Someone needs to read this
Friendship said:
Well written. Sorry for your loss. I don\'t think we could ever understand .dead.
February 7th, 2026 07:42
Friendship said:
Well written. Sorry for your loss. I don\'t think we could ever understand .dead.
February 7th, 2026 07:42
Someone needs to read this
Doggerel Dave said:
And I did... How and why was the bootcamp? Sounds fascinating......
February 7th, 2026 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
And I did... How and why was the bootcamp? Sounds fascinating......
February 7th, 2026 04:34
Someone needs to read this
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting voice in this poem reaching out into the beyond. Well written
February 7th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting voice in this poem reaching out into the beyond. Well written
February 7th, 2026 03:49
Madness from decay
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that cries out with joy. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that cries out with joy. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 17:29
Hell
sorenbarrett said:
One eternal truth and that is we all must die. A lovely write. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
One eternal truth and that is we all must die. A lovely write. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:42
Ego Death
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:07
Child like daze
sorenbarrett said:
A positive thought that advocates for peace. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A positive thought that advocates for peace. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 19:50
Slow burn
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I liked the simplicity of expression. Which paradoxically amplified the discomfort. Nice work 👍
November 15th, 2025 03:02
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I liked the simplicity of expression. Which paradoxically amplified the discomfort. Nice work 👍
November 15th, 2025 03:02
Slow burn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds as if hope is going out. It sounds of darkness or at least impending darkness. Well written
November 13th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds as if hope is going out. It sounds of darkness or at least impending darkness. Well written
November 13th, 2025 17:05
Look at myself
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotions that have been controlled for too long now coming out. Nicely written
November 6th, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotions that have been controlled for too long now coming out. Nicely written
November 6th, 2025 20:45
Boss dont know
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is easy in form taking a smooth and simple meter. It seems mellow but the content is stressed and sad. This conflict leaves a tension in the poem. The last line attempts to resolve the tension but the line (Cuz the boss dont know that im stoned) only appears to postpone it. Well done
November 5th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is easy in form taking a smooth and simple meter. It seems mellow but the content is stressed and sad. This conflict leaves a tension in the poem. The last line attempts to resolve the tension but the line (Cuz the boss dont know that im stoned) only appears to postpone it. Well done
November 5th, 2025 03:36
Football
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
Better way
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
The worst dream ever
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
Furry steering wheel
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
Pulp
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
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