Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Centrifugal
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of liberation from ones inner self from the outer self, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of liberation from ones inner self from the outer self, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Centrifugal
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in more than one way. It is labeled erotic and so it may well be as self stimulation is in contrast to that with another but it may also be a separation between inner self and outer self. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in more than one way. It is labeled erotic and so it may well be as self stimulation is in contrast to that with another but it may also be a separation between inner self and outer self. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:20
Sin?
sorenbarrett said:
In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by mortal coils. Well worded
April 5th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by mortal coils. Well worded
April 5th, 2025 04:52
Days are dead
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling to be understood and having difficulty displaying their true self, nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling to be understood and having difficulty displaying their true self, nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 02:13
Days are dead
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this poem. Well written
March 31st, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this poem. Well written
March 31st, 2025 16:45
Fire
Poetic Licence said:
We are stronger through unity then division, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
We are stronger through unity then division, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:53
Fire
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater than a stronger force. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater than a stronger force. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 20:46
Ruined mind
Poetic Licence said:
Very well expressed pain and suffering in this sad and dark write, well written
February 16th, 2025 17:48
Poetic Licence said:
Very well expressed pain and suffering in this sad and dark write, well written
February 16th, 2025 17:48
Ruined mind
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30
Shell
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the the ember of a dying fire where hope exists in its burnt out coals. Nice
February 15th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the the ember of a dying fire where hope exists in its burnt out coals. Nice
February 15th, 2025 05:07
Open again
Poetic Licence said:
Strong message in a clever write, and i think we all seek forgiveness in one form or another, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
Strong message in a clever write, and i think we all seek forgiveness in one form or another, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:10
Open again
sorenbarrett said:
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58
Dissipating
Poetic Licence said:
Though sad words it gives an impression you have found a way out of the darkness, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:56
Poetic Licence said:
Though sad words it gives an impression you have found a way out of the darkness, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:56
Dissipating
Cassie58 said:
I felt the sadness in your words. I felt darkness but also a smile on the face, signified a change of circumstances. There is release.
January 29th, 2025 02:54
Cassie58 said:
I felt the sadness in your words. I felt darkness but also a smile on the face, signified a change of circumstances. There is release.
January 29th, 2025 02:54
Puddles of rain
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
Cranial decay
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
Waves
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
Reacting to change
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
Sinking again
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
Lost you
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
The cat
Parisab said:
Youβre building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
Parisab said:
Youβre building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
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