Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Wine upside down
Friendship said:
Your poem is very dark. The imagery of a crawlspace serves as a metaphor for hiding from the world and grappling with one\'s inner demons. The mention of wine suggests a desire to escape reality, while the presence of spiders evokes feelings of discomfort and neglect.
February 12th, 2026 08:46
Friendship said:
Your poem is very dark. The imagery of a crawlspace serves as a metaphor for hiding from the world and grappling with one\'s inner demons. The mention of wine suggests a desire to escape reality, while the presence of spiders evokes feelings of discomfort and neglect.
February 12th, 2026 08:46
Wine upside down
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that seem like they would occur during a drunken spell. Nicely done
February 12th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts that seem like they would occur during a drunken spell. Nicely done
February 12th, 2026 04:09
Someone needs to read this
Friendship said:
Well written. Sorry for your loss. I don\'t think we could ever understand .dead.
February 7th, 2026 07:42
Friendship said:
Well written. Sorry for your loss. I don\'t think we could ever understand .dead.
February 7th, 2026 07:42
Someone needs to read this
Doggerel Dave said:
And I did... How and why was the bootcamp? Sounds fascinating......
February 7th, 2026 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
And I did... How and why was the bootcamp? Sounds fascinating......
February 7th, 2026 04:34
Someone needs to read this
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting voice in this poem reaching out into the beyond. Well written
February 7th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting voice in this poem reaching out into the beyond. Well written
February 7th, 2026 03:49
Madness from decay
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that cries out with joy. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that cries out with joy. Nicely done
January 7th, 2026 17:29
Hell
sorenbarrett said:
One eternal truth and that is we all must die. A lovely write. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
One eternal truth and that is we all must die. A lovely write. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 15:42
Ego Death
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:07
Child like daze
sorenbarrett said:
A positive thought that advocates for peace. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A positive thought that advocates for peace. Lovely
December 11th, 2025 19:50
Slow burn
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I liked the simplicity of expression. Which paradoxically amplified the discomfort. Nice work 👍
November 15th, 2025 03:02
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I liked the simplicity of expression. Which paradoxically amplified the discomfort. Nice work 👍
November 15th, 2025 03:02
Slow burn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds as if hope is going out. It sounds of darkness or at least impending darkness. Well written
November 13th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sounds as if hope is going out. It sounds of darkness or at least impending darkness. Well written
November 13th, 2025 17:05
Look at myself
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotions that have been controlled for too long now coming out. Nicely written
November 6th, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of emotions that have been controlled for too long now coming out. Nicely written
November 6th, 2025 20:45
Boss dont know
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is easy in form taking a smooth and simple meter. It seems mellow but the content is stressed and sad. This conflict leaves a tension in the poem. The last line attempts to resolve the tension but the line (Cuz the boss dont know that im stoned) only appears to postpone it. Well done
November 5th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is easy in form taking a smooth and simple meter. It seems mellow but the content is stressed and sad. This conflict leaves a tension in the poem. The last line attempts to resolve the tension but the line (Cuz the boss dont know that im stoned) only appears to postpone it. Well done
November 5th, 2025 03:36
Football
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how serious some people take things, I thought that only children fought over whose dad had a bigger dick. Good write
November 1st, 2025 04:08
Better way
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Take adversity and mold it into dreams of opportunity. Very nice.
October 27th, 2025 15:23
The worst dream ever
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in brief short phrases is like images from a dream. Very nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 20:24
Furry steering wheel
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and pledge of importance that is well done
October 22nd, 2025 16:12
Pulp
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Go with the crowd in this poem of mass excitement and emersion. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 16:29
Scarred mind
sorenbarrett said:
Mistreatment the core of this short piece produces anger, pity, disgust. Poetry is about emotions in words conveyed to a reader and this does it well
October 16th, 2025 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
Mistreatment the core of this short piece produces anger, pity, disgust. Poetry is about emotions in words conveyed to a reader and this does it well
October 16th, 2025 16:12
Scarred mind
NinjaGirl said:
This poem ends with such a shock...it feels like there should be more but there isn\'t. Very well done for such few words!
October 16th, 2025 15:15
NinjaGirl said:
This poem ends with such a shock...it feels like there should be more but there isn\'t. Very well done for such few words!
October 16th, 2025 15:15
Cradle
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with feelings of mans arrogance nicely said
October 13th, 2025 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with feelings of mans arrogance nicely said
October 13th, 2025 18:45
Relative drifting
sorenbarrett said:
When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left vague and open ended so that the reader can imagine what they wish. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left vague and open ended so that the reader can imagine what they wish. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 20:18
Fade
sorenbarrett said:
It is an interesting poem that blames a god a taunt toward the nonexistent or if existent a suicidal plunge of anger. Well worded it seems drunk with rage. Great images fill its lines.
October 2nd, 2025 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
It is an interesting poem that blames a god a taunt toward the nonexistent or if existent a suicidal plunge of anger. Well worded it seems drunk with rage. Great images fill its lines.
October 2nd, 2025 18:24
Trees
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective metaphor where one can\'t see the forest for the trees or maybe can\'t see the tree for the forest.
September 28th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective metaphor where one can\'t see the forest for the trees or maybe can\'t see the tree for the forest.
September 28th, 2025 11:16
Riot
sorenbarrett said:
Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
September 20th, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
September 20th, 2025 13:16
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