Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Puddles of rain
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
Cranial decay
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
Waves
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
Reacting to change
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
Sinking again
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
Lost you
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
The cat
Parisab said:
You’re building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
Parisab said:
You’re building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
Boy
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of imagery and language to paint your scene with words.
December 12th, 2023 10:17
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of imagery and language to paint your scene with words.
December 12th, 2023 10:17
Take it back
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Grim. I hope you find some peace.
October 22nd, 2023 12:53
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Grim. I hope you find some peace.
October 22nd, 2023 12:53
Machiavellian box
L. B. Mek said:
above all i\'m loving the purposed
rage
ha! poetic eloquence inclusive
of data dumps and maths logic
a deep dive of tictok logistics
trailblazing a worded pathway
to our embrace of technology
designed to dumb-down its users
with callous indifference
to its inevitable consequences
and yes, history dictates
so far, our species have overcome
and adapted
so for most, with a hopeful hat
and a reasoning intellect
it may seem, all the fearmongering
being projected to our western society
is a little unfounded, maybe..
but my wise friend, try to picture
the future, where all those
with fingers on those nuclear
red buttons
will have grown up indoctrinated
by degenerate videos
(mostly)
and believing, the only thing
that matters
in this world, is what they think
and want, like a spoilt five year old
child
...
yeah, that\'s gonna be a fun ride
for our future generations
to \'easily\' overcome
lol
(thanks for sharing, such
a thought provoking read
and please
forgive me if I sound a little
sarcastic
i\'m just a foolish pessimist)
June 30th, 2023 07:07
L. B. Mek said:
above all i\'m loving the purposed
rage
ha! poetic eloquence inclusive
of data dumps and maths logic
a deep dive of tictok logistics
trailblazing a worded pathway
to our embrace of technology
designed to dumb-down its users
with callous indifference
to its inevitable consequences
and yes, history dictates
so far, our species have overcome
and adapted
so for most, with a hopeful hat
and a reasoning intellect
it may seem, all the fearmongering
being projected to our western society
is a little unfounded, maybe..
but my wise friend, try to picture
the future, where all those
with fingers on those nuclear
red buttons
will have grown up indoctrinated
by degenerate videos
(mostly)
and believing, the only thing
that matters
in this world, is what they think
and want, like a spoilt five year old
child
...
yeah, that\'s gonna be a fun ride
for our future generations
to \'easily\' overcome
lol
(thanks for sharing, such
a thought provoking read
and please
forgive me if I sound a little
sarcastic
i\'m just a foolish pessimist)
June 30th, 2023 07:07
Machiavellian box
Bobby O said:
I get what you’re saying. I’m a math guy myself. When it’s new it’s out there for chaos to reign. It’s takes awhile to corral the shit that’s bad so the harm is less than the benefits. It took some cities almost thirty years to realize traffic control and laws were gonna have to be part of the way things would be. So many unnecessary deaths occurred and really didn’t abate until Ralph Nader got seatbelt laws passed in the sixties. The list if burdens and problems w the automobiles were just as significant as the list yiu just gave us. We weren’t gonna abandon cars and we won’t abandon technology. It’s here and it might be slow but it get adjusted. Always that way. Firv2099 years.
June 30th, 2023 04:33
Bobby O said:
I get what you’re saying. I’m a math guy myself. When it’s new it’s out there for chaos to reign. It’s takes awhile to corral the shit that’s bad so the harm is less than the benefits. It took some cities almost thirty years to realize traffic control and laws were gonna have to be part of the way things would be. So many unnecessary deaths occurred and really didn’t abate until Ralph Nader got seatbelt laws passed in the sixties. The list if burdens and problems w the automobiles were just as significant as the list yiu just gave us. We weren’t gonna abandon cars and we won’t abandon technology. It’s here and it might be slow but it get adjusted. Always that way. Firv2099 years.
June 30th, 2023 04:33
Terra firma
Bobby O said:
The resilient are forgotten. A freaking great line that serves as a demarcation thrusting a great phrasing forth w a grin born of power.
Nice write good read. Bones in the shadow no longer!!
June 29th, 2023 01:36
Bobby O said:
The resilient are forgotten. A freaking great line that serves as a demarcation thrusting a great phrasing forth w a grin born of power.
Nice write good read. Bones in the shadow no longer!!
June 29th, 2023 01:36
