Comments received on poems by shadowbones
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Poetic Licence said:
Strong message in a clever write, and i think we all seek forgiveness in one form or another, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
Strong message in a clever write, and i think we all seek forgiveness in one form or another, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 06:10
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sorenbarrett said:
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58
Dissipating
Poetic Licence said:
Though sad words it gives an impression you have found a way out of the darkness, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:56
Poetic Licence said:
Though sad words it gives an impression you have found a way out of the darkness, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 03:56
Dissipating
Cassie58 said:
I felt the sadness in your words. I felt darkness but also a smile on the face, signified a change of circumstances. There is release.
January 29th, 2025 02:54
Cassie58 said:
I felt the sadness in your words. I felt darkness but also a smile on the face, signified a change of circumstances. There is release.
January 29th, 2025 02:54
Puddles of rain
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and paper from this your poem was created. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 18:36
Cranial decay
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving gray matter. Nicely written
August 6th, 2024 17:00
Waves
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13
Reacting to change
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14
Sinking again
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
David A Liebermann said:
Today will be a better day. It is nicely written. Thanks
June 27th, 2024 22:39
Lost you
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
sunshine777 said:
This is a sad poem, still very well written. Emotions are felt, I had a dear friend commit suicide. Prayers to you and your brother
March 25th, 2024 20:54
The cat
Parisab said:
Youβre building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
Parisab said:
Youβre building up into a great day of promise which is inevitable to end lonely and cold, either a predator or prey, good write
January 19th, 2024 23:08
Boy
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of imagery and language to paint your scene with words.
December 12th, 2023 10:17
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of imagery and language to paint your scene with words.
December 12th, 2023 10:17
Take it back
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Grim. I hope you find some peace.
October 22nd, 2023 12:53
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Grim. I hope you find some peace.
October 22nd, 2023 12:53
Terra firma
Bobby O said:
The resilient are forgotten. A freaking great line that serves as a demarcation thrusting a great phrasing forth w a grin born of power.
Nice write good read. Bones in the shadow no longer!!
June 29th, 2023 01:36
Bobby O said:
The resilient are forgotten. A freaking great line that serves as a demarcation thrusting a great phrasing forth w a grin born of power.
Nice write good read. Bones in the shadow no longer!!
June 29th, 2023 01:36
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