Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Wake Up
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Poetic Licence said:
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
July 29th, 2025 18:20
Wake Up
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
July 29th, 2025 17:44
Dirty love
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of love with distinctive wording. Well done
July 25th, 2025 18:11
With Friends
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
Priya Tomar said:
Opening lines are cleverly woven in....
Very well
July 23rd, 2025 10:49
With Friends
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguities, change in heart, opposites, a new start. A wonderful poem of mixed messages. Well done.
July 23rd, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguities, change in heart, opposites, a new start. A wonderful poem of mixed messages. Well done.
July 23rd, 2025 03:56
I love her so much
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:28
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 22nd, 2025 04:28
I love her so much
sorenbarrett said:
This one required a second reading and a little thought. Nicely and most cleverly stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This one required a second reading and a little thought. Nicely and most cleverly stated
July 22nd, 2025 04:08
Knowing, loving and feeling
sorenbarrett said:
A short that might be called a quickie. Well written
July 12th, 2025 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
A short that might be called a quickie. Well written
July 12th, 2025 20:38
Again letting go
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of pain comes with this poem leaving me feeling there was a loss and the last lines tell me there was a gain.
July 11th, 2025 20:31
Pain hurts
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
What seems at first an inane statement upon reflection becomes a statement of wisdom where the fool becomes the sage, Nicely written
July 1st, 2025 05:20
Pain hurts
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of some pain you can become numb to but some pain will always hurt, nicely expressed write
July 1st, 2025 01:37
Little Rain Drop
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
Tender and light hearted this poem speaks to me of love and care. A lovely piece
June 29th, 2025 12:04
Something new
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of wisdom, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:38
Something new
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme in a poem of wisdom. Tomorrow is forever. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:22
Wasting time in heaven
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Poetic Licence said:
The eternal question, can it be answered, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 19:52
Wasting time in heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
June 22nd, 2025 13:59
Energy
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
Poetic Licence said:
A collection of sayings reflecting the more unsavory side if life, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 05:26
Energy
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
Only 1
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Only 1
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
Kingdom of God
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Kingdom of God
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
The Highway Men
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
The Highway Men
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
Trash glass
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
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