Comments received on poems by shadowbones
Energy
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
sorenbarrett said:
A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun at institutions. Well done
June 21st, 2025 13:27
Only 1
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Poetic Licence said:
Live for now and not let the past control your today, enjoyed the read
June 14th, 2025 06:39
Only 1
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of carpe diem in this poem live for the moment in that happiness is all that matters in life. Nicely done
June 14th, 2025 04:50
Kingdom of God
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely crafted write of something the world is full of today, hypocrisy, enjoyed the read
June 12th, 2025 21:08
Kingdom of God
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful speech. Well done
June 12th, 2025 15:59
The Highway Men
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark but interesting write, nicely expressed and written
June 12th, 2025 00:18
The Highway Men
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
sorenbarrett said:
Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed it builds to a climax.
June 11th, 2025 21:34
Trash glass
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
RSM0812 said:
This could mean so many things. I really appreciated the darkness of the piece. Nice imagery.
June 11th, 2025 13:36
Get better with you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship and the decision to stay in its comfort. A wonderful write
June 7th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of decisions about staying or leaving a relationship and the decision to stay in its comfort. A wonderful write
June 7th, 2025 13:55
Following
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling trapped in the confines of your own thoughts and mind is a dark place, scary, lonely and difficult to get out of, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:11
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling trapped in the confines of your own thoughts and mind is a dark place, scary, lonely and difficult to get out of, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:11
Following
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped inside one\'s mind is the worst type of solitary confinement. A dark write. Well done
June 4th, 2025 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped inside one\'s mind is the worst type of solitary confinement. A dark write. Well done
June 4th, 2025 18:44
Dead everywhere
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to be sexual or emotional and the form of a cross in the text seems to indicate death and a sacrifice. Powerful words of rawness here. Nicely done
May 26th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken to be sexual or emotional and the form of a cross in the text seems to indicate death and a sacrifice. Powerful words of rawness here. Nicely done
May 26th, 2025 04:28
Dead everywhere
Poetic Licence said:
A raw write of the slow death of a relationship and the feeling it left behind, nicely done
May 26th, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
A raw write of the slow death of a relationship and the feeling it left behind, nicely done
May 26th, 2025 02:34
Lurking darkness
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and entertaining write, I got the feeling not just of aliens but how the night time brings out the worse behaviour in some people, nicely done
May 21st, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and entertaining write, I got the feeling not just of aliens but how the night time brings out the worse behaviour in some people, nicely done
May 21st, 2025 02:26
Lurking darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Alien fantasy runs through this poem quite different. Nice
May 20th, 2025 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Alien fantasy runs through this poem quite different. Nice
May 20th, 2025 18:06
Linear transgressions
sorenbarrett said:
Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Very original using the typos in the poem to play off the theme. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 16:16
Rotting fingers
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that like waves speaks loudly and softly, powerfully and tenderly. Well done
April 19th, 2025 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that like waves speaks loudly and softly, powerfully and tenderly. Well done
April 19th, 2025 03:17
Centrifugal
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of liberation from ones inner self from the outer self, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of liberation from ones inner self from the outer self, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:26
Centrifugal
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in more than one way. It is labeled erotic and so it may well be as self stimulation is in contrast to that with another but it may also be a separation between inner self and outer self. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in more than one way. It is labeled erotic and so it may well be as self stimulation is in contrast to that with another but it may also be a separation between inner self and outer self. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:20
Sin?
sorenbarrett said:
In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by mortal coils. Well worded
April 5th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by mortal coils. Well worded
April 5th, 2025 04:52
Days are dead
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling to be understood and having difficulty displaying their true self, nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of struggling to be understood and having difficulty displaying their true self, nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 02:13
Days are dead
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this poem. Well written
March 31st, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this poem. Well written
March 31st, 2025 16:45
Fire
Poetic Licence said:
We are stronger through unity then division, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
We are stronger through unity then division, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:53
Fire
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater than a stronger force. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meaning of this poem. It to me speaks of unity being greater than a stronger force. A lovely write
March 16th, 2025 20:46
Ruined mind
Poetic Licence said:
Very well expressed pain and suffering in this sad and dark write, well written
February 16th, 2025 17:48
Poetic Licence said:
Very well expressed pain and suffering in this sad and dark write, well written
February 16th, 2025 17:48
Ruined mind
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30
Shell
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the the ember of a dying fire where hope exists in its burnt out coals. Nice
February 15th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem there is the the ember of a dying fire where hope exists in its burnt out coals. Nice
February 15th, 2025 05:07
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