Shifting Sands and Milky Way
ironmaiden_81186 said:

its almost utopic in some sense....the perfect kind of poem that can be..
i love it for its elegance..

December 24th, 2010 10:37

As it may see
Cheeky Missy said:

It is almost bittersweet, but it is sweet. I quite like your similes. It's a delightful poem, in spite of the sorrow.

December 15th, 2010 23:05

Beyond These Star
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. It is very sweet. I like it very well....sadly it is sorrowful. I so wish the recipient of the love would not reject it but return forever to it. Again, your poetry is very pleasant, rhyming and etc.

December 14th, 2010 00:21

Shifting Sands and Milky Way
Cheeky Missy said:

To explain further.....your end-rhyming is very pleasant, your rythm nearly perfect, and your symbolism delightfully appropriate! If I only could've edited this into my initial comment, I wouldn't have put it here. Again, I much enjoyed this piece!

December 12th, 2010 11:53