Comments received on poems by Lorenz
The little old lady
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Ellen Marsell said:
La vie montre que les gens décents ont une vie plus dure et partent plus vite.
February 23rd, 2024 08:32
Santa Muerte
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general tenor.
Enjoyed muchly your comment:
\" Poetry isn\'t about admiring our little pink buttocks in the mirror of our sobs !\"
Not my pink buttocks either.
February 20th, 2024 18:34
Santa Muerte
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
The saddest day in our long history of existence, is the day we decided we owned everything, and we could judge everyone. The shame is on us. Great write my friend, it digs deep into our illusion of ownership.
February 20th, 2024 14:12
Guitar in the clouds
Alan R said:
lost in a never caressed face ... beautiful expression
February 17th, 2024 08:19
Alan R said:
lost in a never caressed face ... beautiful expression
February 17th, 2024 08:19
Guitar in the clouds
2781 said:
For the birds of the air
Come to the feast.
February 17th, 2024 07:05
2781 said:
For the birds of the air
Come to the feast.
February 17th, 2024 07:05
Mother
Ellen Marsell said:
We take more from the earth than we can give back to it, and that debt resounds in the sobs of the wind and the sounds of smoldering forests...
February 16th, 2024 10:58
Ellen Marsell said:
We take more from the earth than we can give back to it, and that debt resounds in the sobs of the wind and the sounds of smoldering forests...
February 16th, 2024 10:58
Mystical colors
2781 said:
\"And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:.
February 16th, 2024 00:58
2781 said:
\"And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:.
February 16th, 2024 00:58
Mystical colors
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful work... An exotic journey through amazing symbolic imagery. Very inspiring!
February 14th, 2024 12:01
Ellen Marsell said:
Beautiful work... An exotic journey through amazing symbolic imagery. Very inspiring!
February 14th, 2024 12:01
Cabaret
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done a remarkable job of contrasting life in Berlin, before and after the Nazi\'s gained power. I would say a difficult task, and one you\'ve done it admirably!
February 11th, 2024 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve done a remarkable job of contrasting life in Berlin, before and after the Nazi\'s gained power. I would say a difficult task, and one you\'ve done it admirably!
February 11th, 2024 14:47
Cabaret
Ellen Marsell said:
The atmosphere of the city with its cultural contradictions and historical legacy. The multifaceted nature of the past and present, eloquently and profoundly reflecting both glitter and shadows.
February 11th, 2024 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
The atmosphere of the city with its cultural contradictions and historical legacy. The multifaceted nature of the past and present, eloquently and profoundly reflecting both glitter and shadows.
February 11th, 2024 11:51
He\'s back !
Thoughtless said:
The end is always a beginning rather than an end.
February 10th, 2024 11:14
Thoughtless said:
The end is always a beginning rather than an end.
February 10th, 2024 11:14
Is she ?
Bella Shepard said:
The face, seared into the mind of the lover, haunting memory that lingers on the edge of reallity. Incredible verse!
February 9th, 2024 15:10
Bella Shepard said:
The face, seared into the mind of the lover, haunting memory that lingers on the edge of reallity. Incredible verse!
February 9th, 2024 15:10
Hours
Ellen Marsell said:
Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?
February 8th, 2024 11:54
Ellen Marsell said:
Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?
February 8th, 2024 11:54
A ritual
Bella Shepard said:
There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!
February 6th, 2024 16:40
Bella Shepard said:
There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!
February 6th, 2024 16:40
A ritual
Ellen Marsell said:
When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.
February 6th, 2024 11:51
Ellen Marsell said:
When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.
February 6th, 2024 11:51
Gospel of imposture
Bella Shepard said:
There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!
February 5th, 2024 15:02
Bella Shepard said:
There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!
February 5th, 2024 15:02
I , the Angel
2781 said:
Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?
Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?
February 4th, 2024 08:04
2781 said:
Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?
Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?
February 4th, 2024 08:04
I am the wind
2781 said:
\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:48
2781 said:
\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:48
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