The polish girl
Dev Parth said:

🌌💔 A haunting reflection on loss and the unfulfilled potential of a life. Vivid imagery, from emaciated lines to a red triangle, paints a poignant picture. The interplay of elements like the burning road to heaven and the devil\'s affairs adds depth. The gentle doctor symbolizes both care and the march of time. The inclusion of \"Czesława\" personalizes the narrative. A bittersweet contemplation of life\'s fleeting moments and enduring memories. 🌟📝💔

Dev

January 5th, 2024 10:17

Belgium
Tom Dylan said:

You really paint a picture. Really enjoyed this poem.

January 4th, 2024 03:29

Belgium
2781 said:

I like your beer.

January 3rd, 2024 04:35

Belgium
Ellen Marsell said:

A wonderful poem from a Belgian!

January 2nd, 2024 12:33

The chatmer (chat gpt scammer)
Hey! said:

This is amazing.

January 1st, 2024 15:16

The clock of the end
2781 said:

I am ready.

December 30th, 2023 09:32

Fortitude
Ellen Marsell said:

Enjoyable flow of your writing, smooth and contemplative, reflecting a meditative experience.
The nature of existence is dual...
Thanks for sharing.

December 22nd, 2023 10:53

Window on the void
Ellen Marsell said:

Ce n\'est pas un destin qu\'elle a choisi, mais dans ses derniers instants, elle semble avoir réussi à l\'accepter.


December 15th, 2023 13:39

Poetry
Muse Gong said:

Great

December 9th, 2023 06:53

santa mafia
AuburnScribbler said:

I read this out loud like a disstrack rap, and wow do your words deliver some punch Darkfragrance.

I wholeheartedly agree about you calling the upcoming festival a red and green monster, as the chosen stresses that come with it, are to a massively damaging scale.

I also very much like the accompanying picture, very apt indeed.

Thanks for sharing this, bravo, and I hope that all is well.

December 6th, 2023 10:01

santa mafia
Ellen Marsell said:

I think it\'s really cool!

December 5th, 2023 12:10

The eternal return
John Lee said:

Until they searched to parade the dead dog\'s body just to find it unfound. The lies begin to cover the truth in it\'s grave but it won\'t stay dead. Only after the world has it\'s run into a dead end, it looks up. The cloud descending without rain but with the one who reigns.

December 1st, 2023 22:28

Something is missing
Ellen Marsell said:

This is impressive stuff... Well written.

November 28th, 2023 09:21

Poetry
aDarkerMind said:

I didnt read this work of art...

I lived and breathed it!!

November 27th, 2023 11:24

Turn off the lights !
2781 said:

Interesting, we had opposing views but not necessarily opposing thoughts.
Provoking, cheers.

November 26th, 2023 09:36