Shadowman
Poetic Licence said:

That is a clever and enjoyable piece of writing, Thank you

January 27th, 2025 17:02

I\'m a wanderer
Introverted Sage said:

Great write!

April 25th, 2024 00:53

Forest of friends
Neilton said:

I wish everyone loved nature ! Great poem

February 26th, 2024 15:45

Fabricated harmony
Cloie said:

Your poem beautifully captures the struggle with mental fog and the longing for clarity. The imagery of the black smog and deep fog conveys the weight of confusion and the journey toward finding light and remedy. Well done!

February 25th, 2024 07:26