Comments received on poems by Orions pen
Fabricated harmony
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the struggle with mental fog and the longing for clarity. The imagery of the black smog and deep fog conveys the weight of confusion and the journey toward finding light and remedy. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 07:26
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the struggle with mental fog and the longing for clarity. The imagery of the black smog and deep fog conveys the weight of confusion and the journey toward finding light and remedy. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 07:26