Comments received on poems by A piece of luggage
Every So Often
sorenbarrett said:
A story of supernatural involvement with death of a mother and visits to the netherworld. Well written
January 27th, 2026 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
A story of supernatural involvement with death of a mother and visits to the netherworld. Well written
January 27th, 2026 12:20
Amongst The Water
sorenbarrett said:
A lover\'s world where words mean less than silence. Nicely written
January 20th, 2026 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
A lover\'s world where words mean less than silence. Nicely written
January 20th, 2026 19:48
Amongst The Water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I connect with this deeply. The slipping, the loss of feeling, and the repeated hope of meeting again capture how relationships fracture without fully letting go. It feels painfully honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 20th, 2026 15:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I connect with this deeply. The slipping, the loss of feeling, and the repeated hope of meeting again capture how relationships fracture without fully letting go. It feels painfully honest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 20th, 2026 15:54
In The Pink
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem moves gently between healing and remembrance. The repetition creates a soft orbit around love, absence, and invitation…never forcing closure. It’s intimate, restrained, and emotionally honest. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem moves gently between healing and remembrance. The repetition creates a soft orbit around love, absence, and invitation…never forcing closure. It’s intimate, restrained, and emotionally honest. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 10:20
In The Pink
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of romance and a plea to return to that state. Well done
January 18th, 2026 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of romance and a plea to return to that state. Well done
January 18th, 2026 10:13
Midlife Horror Recollection
NinjaGirl said:
I love the mix of reflection and description, well done!
January 11th, 2026 23:46
NinjaGirl said:
I love the mix of reflection and description, well done!
January 11th, 2026 23:46
Midlife Horror Recollection
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this poem is heavy. The numbness is palpable, and the honesty of it makes the poem linger. For that you get a fave, my friend! Well done.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friend, this poem is heavy. The numbness is palpable, and the honesty of it makes the poem linger. For that you get a fave, my friend! Well done.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 17:47
Midlife Horror Recollection
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of what appears to be a bad dream
January 11th, 2026 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of what appears to be a bad dream
January 11th, 2026 17:40
Every So Often
MendedFences27 said:
Dark and lonely. A description of self-inflicted torment. \"Every so often,\" becomes closer to always. If this is fiction, you\'ve created an excellent image of self-deprecation. If not, then perhaps it expresses a cry for help. Either way, your words are moving and powerful. An eerie and frightening poem that delivers, - Phil A.
January 8th, 2026 12:07
MendedFences27 said:
Dark and lonely. A description of self-inflicted torment. \"Every so often,\" becomes closer to always. If this is fiction, you\'ve created an excellent image of self-deprecation. If not, then perhaps it expresses a cry for help. Either way, your words are moving and powerful. An eerie and frightening poem that delivers, - Phil A.
January 8th, 2026 12:07
Every So Often
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being and acceptance of that sharing with those that approach nicely done
January 8th, 2026 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being and acceptance of that sharing with those that approach nicely done
January 8th, 2026 11:40
Chalk Cliff
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of opposition between the happiness and lightness of the beginning and the dark bitterness of the end. All framed with the sea. Well done
December 7th, 2025 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of opposition between the happiness and lightness of the beginning and the dark bitterness of the end. All framed with the sea. Well done
December 7th, 2025 15:49
Time Passes By
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, melancholic, nostalgic and wistful it sings plaintively for union that never comes. Very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, melancholic, nostalgic and wistful it sings plaintively for union that never comes. Very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:44
Statue
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor after metaphor layered in this poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor after metaphor layered in this poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 11:16
Place road
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of separation due to death and now a shadow wandering and waiting for reunion. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem of separation due to death and now a shadow wandering and waiting for reunion. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 08:44
Summer
sorenbarrett said:
A truly beautiful poem of loving memories and so well imaged. A fave
August 23rd, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A truly beautiful poem of loving memories and so well imaged. A fave
August 23rd, 2025 14:54
Grey Girl
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the transformation of a person, stepping out from their shadow into a bright new world, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 07:39
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the transformation of a person, stepping out from their shadow into a bright new world, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 07:39
Grey Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and yet unknown this poem speaks of desire and lack of familiarity of that grey area of love that is passion. Nicely written
June 9th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive and yet unknown this poem speaks of desire and lack of familiarity of that grey area of love that is passion. Nicely written
June 9th, 2025 06:16
Only Love Will Keep Us Together
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around past memories having the ability to bring back different feelings and emotions, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around past memories having the ability to bring back different feelings and emotions, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 06:01
Only Love Will Keep Us Together
sorenbarrett said:
Identifying with a past memory can be a trigger that sets off old feelings and if these were good memories then the trigger may be sought out. Nice write
May 23rd, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Identifying with a past memory can be a trigger that sets off old feelings and if these were good memories then the trigger may be sought out. Nice write
May 23rd, 2025 05:29
A Plain Out of Existence
sorenbarrett said:
Life is an issue of timing and chance and it does not always work out to our favor. A lovely write
May 3rd, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Life is an issue of timing and chance and it does not always work out to our favor. A lovely write
May 3rd, 2025 09:20
Pretty Colours
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write with a sense of loss and the feeling of they are now stuck in the dark, nicely expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 13:32
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write with a sense of loss and the feeling of they are now stuck in the dark, nicely expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 13:32
Pretty Colours
sorenbarrett said:
Loss in this poem leaves feeling hopeless and dark. Sad
March 20th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loss in this poem leaves feeling hopeless and dark. Sad
March 20th, 2025 12:57
Universe
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Your words have captured where I am at in life, though different situations. You\'ve helped me realize that, your/my universe is yours/ours alone. Life is too short to be lonely with someone just hanging on to hang on to you.
Thanks for writing this
January 3rd, 2025 08:02
AmIAPoet-QuestionMark said:
Your words have captured where I am at in life, though different situations. You\'ve helped me realize that, your/my universe is yours/ours alone. Life is too short to be lonely with someone just hanging on to hang on to you.
Thanks for writing this
January 3rd, 2025 08:02
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