Comments received on poems by anna_x_life
butterflies in glass prisons
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach. By using scattered bits and pieces you join together the initial idea of the butterfly and its beauty in ending it. The very theme of this poem is incorporated in its form (ingenious) Brilliant!
August 22nd, 2024 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach. By using scattered bits and pieces you join together the initial idea of the butterfly and its beauty in ending it. The very theme of this poem is incorporated in its form (ingenious) Brilliant!
August 22nd, 2024 04:27
contemplation of a broken heart
sorenbarrett said:
Angst, existential crisis, confusion and just plain being a teen. Nice
August 18th, 2024 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Angst, existential crisis, confusion and just plain being a teen. Nice
August 18th, 2024 13:02
contemplation of a broken heart
Thoughtless said:
A nice write on teen angst. Well done. Don\'t wish on others what you don\'t wish for yourself.
August 18th, 2024 12:38
Thoughtless said:
A nice write on teen angst. Well done. Don\'t wish on others what you don\'t wish for yourself.
August 18th, 2024 12:38
time
sorenbarrett said:
So many thoughts. We are all young enough to sleep. A fun write.
August 9th, 2024 18:05
sorenbarrett said:
So many thoughts. We are all young enough to sleep. A fun write.
August 9th, 2024 18:05
the rain
sorenbarrett said:
Bitter sweet this poem but a great sense of unity with nature and full of metaphor it reads as if from a child view and pulls at the heart strings.
August 8th, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Bitter sweet this poem but a great sense of unity with nature and full of metaphor it reads as if from a child view and pulls at the heart strings.
August 8th, 2024 06:53
when you want to cry
Thomas W Case said:
Wow, so sad. I hope writing helps you get your feelings out.
October 24th, 2023 15:59
Thomas W Case said:
Wow, so sad. I hope writing helps you get your feelings out.
October 24th, 2023 15:59
when you want to cry
NinjaGirl said:
So so sad. I\'m glad you can express your feelings here. much love
October 23rd, 2023 21:34
NinjaGirl said:
So so sad. I\'m glad you can express your feelings here. much love
October 23rd, 2023 21:34
no way home
Thomas W Case said:
I\'ve been there. You will get out. Great metaphor for rough times.
October 23rd, 2023 00:18
Thomas W Case said:
I\'ve been there. You will get out. Great metaphor for rough times.
October 23rd, 2023 00:18
are you ok?
Thomas W Case said:
We say fine when our world is falling apart. You capture that well here.
October 21st, 2023 11:41
Thomas W Case said:
We say fine when our world is falling apart. You capture that well here.
October 21st, 2023 11:41
windows to the soul
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this a timeless truth
good to remind us all
thanks for sharing
October 16th, 2023 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, this a timeless truth
good to remind us all
thanks for sharing
October 16th, 2023 05:51
glad to be alive
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
cherish breath
nothing like it..
no really
... nothing!
thanks for sharing, a lovely read
October 13th, 2023 08:06
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
cherish breath
nothing like it..
no really
... nothing!
thanks for sharing, a lovely read
October 13th, 2023 08:06
I am a boy
peto said:
Stunning write Anna
Rhyme and flow are spot on
Last 2 verses turn it around
I\'ve tried the opposite
Leaves me wondering the true colour of your eyes
Looking forward to reading more
October 11th, 2023 07:45
peto said:
Stunning write Anna
Rhyme and flow are spot on
Last 2 verses turn it around
I\'ve tried the opposite
Leaves me wondering the true colour of your eyes
Looking forward to reading more
October 11th, 2023 07:45
are you ok?
NinjaGirl said:
Such a beautiful story. This hit me hard I can feel your emotion through it.. wonderful write.
October 8th, 2023 14:04
NinjaGirl said:
Such a beautiful story. This hit me hard I can feel your emotion through it.. wonderful write.
October 8th, 2023 14:04
