My Shoes
sorenbarrett said:

I love this poem it speaks of what is most personal there is a reason that shoes have a sole just as people have a soul. Like people they have a tongue and only if they could speak. Your words resonated with me my shoes carry me and protect me what more could a guy want.

January 27th, 2025 12:23

My Shoes
Poetic Licence said:

A clever piece of writing underlined with a serious message, enjoyed the read

January 27th, 2025 11:43

I Just Want to Swim
RSM0812 said:

The fight of the species. Food, sex and space. Even in the Ocean. I really liked this one also.

January 25th, 2025 07:47

I Was Blind
RSM0812 said:

The hypocrisy of people can sometimes be unbelievable. Lol. Great write. Lol

January 25th, 2025 07:38

I Was Blind
Swarovski20 said:

Nice poem

January 24th, 2025 09:54

I Was Blind
sorenbarrett said:

This was a carefully worded work with a wonderful message and I loved the last line.

January 24th, 2025 04:11

I Was Blind
Michael Edwards said:

Super lines - I am involved in several activities in my village - its not much but everything makes a difference.

January 24th, 2025 03:22

I Was Blind
Teddy.15 said:

A huge sense of gratitude, just what I love, I made me, I made who I am, and I too give back because it makes me feel happy.

So powerful joyful and honest.

Sometimes, acquaintances will say
that I\'ve grown soft
as they turn to green jello, right
before my eyes

Such brilliant lines. 🌹


January 24th, 2025 02:13

I Was Blind
Mutley Ravishes said:

I was blind too
I better not waste the rest of my days
On the Rue!

Great write, Thomas

January 23rd, 2025 22:26

Young, but Once
Kevin Hulme said:

Lovely Words . We look back at our youthful days and realise we took so much for granted.
‘Happy like a kid with a kite’ indeed.

January 23rd, 2025 20:39

Young, but Once
arqios said:

Yet always young at heart, when we allow 😊👍🏻🕊

January 23rd, 2025 04:45

The Pull of the Streets
Doggerel Dave said:

Grovelled in the grueling grot... A well painted picture..

January 23rd, 2025 00:05

Young, but Once
Poetic Licence said:

A romantic vision in a beautiful setting, enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 22:00

Young, but Once
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful image and thought

January 22nd, 2025 17:24

The Pull of the Streets
Cheeky Missy said:

Besides being exquisitely eloquent herein, I almost crazily think you\'re reminiscent of O. Henry\'s work, yet not. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, I love how this takes the reader in hand until we\'re vicariously the speaker, feeling and tasting every single thing. Thank you very much for sharing.

January 22nd, 2025 13:07