Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Cassie58 said:

Haven’t you done well. The sonnet is the least of your worries. Keep up with the free verse, you have fans.

April 20th, 2024 10:49

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Teddy.15 said:

Some serious reflection my dear Thomas, I have one sonnet and it took me 3 years to write, I am super proud of it but I don\'t think I will ever write another the rules being incredibly strict this work that you post with us always brightens my day Sir, be very proud of who you are today.🌹leaps and bounds. 🌹

April 20th, 2024 04:16

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Neville said:



write on brother, you done good ..

April 20th, 2024 04:14

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Goldfinch60 said:

Just keep writing your good words Thomas.

Andy

April 20th, 2024 01:42

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Parisab said:

procrastination and sobriety.
Such fuzzy black miracles.

Great double meaning about how these miracles (your cars and sobriety)save you even from procrastination…very succinct

April 19th, 2024 22:42

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
Alan R said:

The last stanza is very peaceful

April 19th, 2024 13:09

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Are they comforting cats?

April 19th, 2024 12:28

Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
aDarkerMind said:

brilliant!!!!

April 19th, 2024 12:22

Frozen Love
orchidee said:

Good write T.

April 19th, 2024 02:27

Frozen Love
Neville said:



mental health, homelessness and addictions (the trilogy) have been my bread and butter for **** long years .. having said that, if I had faves, then this post of yours would surely be at least two of them .. With much respect sir .. Neville

April 19th, 2024 01:16

Frozen Love
sorenbarrett said:

From the sad and morbid to the humorous poetic in its contrast. The imagery adds to the structure. Well done.

April 18th, 2024 20:57

Frozen Love
David Wakeling said:

Wonderful story.I enjoyed reading.Well done

April 18th, 2024 18:20

Frozen Love
Teddy.15 said:

Wow magnificent in imagery and emotion, I could not only see it but I could hear it all, all the silliness the dog the laughter and even the water, well done Teddy, I hope you made it to Boston, 🌹

April 18th, 2024 17:31

The Pierced Dreamer
Teddy.15 said:

I can only hope she made it to be an architect. 🌹

April 18th, 2024 03:28

The Pierced Dreamer
Goldfinch60 said:

Sounds like good times were had Thomas.

Andy

April 18th, 2024 01:41

The Pierced Dreamer
sorenbarrett said:

Short but with a message. I loved the line
\"Some dreams are
best left
unsaid\"
True and applies to many things.

April 17th, 2024 15:53

The Pierced Dreamer
Neville said:



A most enjoyable encounter I imagine

April 17th, 2024 15:25

The Pierced Dreamer
orchidee said:

Good write T.

April 17th, 2024 14:27

The Pierced Dreamer
Mason Vollman said:

So dearly short but special. Thanks for sharing Thomas.


April 17th, 2024 11:54

Preoccupied
orchidee said:

How dome I got into this poem - orchid(ee)?! lol.

April 16th, 2024 02:16

Preoccupied
Neville said:



who needs a blue pill when you an cum here and get the same effect for free .. I\'m gonna stick with the pink one\'s too or maybe a yella old fella .. Neville

April 16th, 2024 01:54

Preoccupied
Teddy.15 said:

Wow Thomas, what a journey to intimacy 🌹

April 16th, 2024 01:26

Preoccupied
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Thomas.

Andy

April 16th, 2024 01:23

Preoccupied
Cassie58 said:

Time well spent I would say. How beautifully you describe intimacy Thomas.

April 15th, 2024 23:45

Preoccupied
Alan R said:

Classic!

April 15th, 2024 23:04

This Moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Thomas.

Andy

April 15th, 2024 01:35

This Moment
Teddy.15 said:

Ah, yes you got my message loud and clear dear Poet. 🌹 It\'s certainly the simplest most beautiful gestures that truly count. Wonderful as ever, Thomas, I was literally looking to see if I could sneak at the written words folded in the paper.

April 14th, 2024 11:49

This Moment
Neville said:


its those little things isn\'t it ..

ha and there are still those who say size don\'t matter .. what do they know eh\' .. nice one TWC .. very nice indeed ..

Neville


April 14th, 2024 11:10

This Moment
orchidee said:

Good write T.

April 14th, 2024 10:26

Dead End Eyes
Parisab said:

There is no point of return, in that dead end… so watch out and turn with caution. Cool write, as always Thomas…

April 14th, 2024 09:48



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