Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



May the Sun Die
Neilton said:

Very beautiful poem!

June 18th, 2024 11:24

Good Night, Baby
Neilton said:

Amazing poem !! The last stanza shows that there is still hope for this world! Once again I\'m glad I stopped by! Your video is also truly entertaining!

June 18th, 2024 11:19

Good Night, Baby
John Prophet said:

Some things are universal.
Great write

June 18th, 2024 08:51

Good Night, Baby
Tom Dylan said:

Love this, Thomas. The tone reminds me a bit of Kerouac reading the last lines of On The Road. Really enjoyed, mate.

June 18th, 2024 02:38

Good Night, Baby
orchidee said:

Good write. Erm, good night Tom. lol.

June 18th, 2024 01:23

When the Laughter Dies
Teddy.15 said:

Such truth, beautifully written as always, when the laughter dies, I felt every bit of this emotionally and through your tapestry of imagery. 🌹

June 18th, 2024 00:05

Good Night, Baby
2781 said:

I could say love covers a multitude of sins, but I sense it\'s deeper than that.

June 17th, 2024 19:14

Good Night, Baby
Doggerel Dave said:

Dystopia with just a glimmer of light.

A rich write, Thomas.

June 17th, 2024 18:02

Good Night, Baby
Thad Wilk said:

Howdy my friend!!
Wow, love this poem
really pulls on the
heartstrings!! 🎻
Wonderfully vivid
imagery, a superb read
beginning to end!!
Best regards, peace ✌️ Thad


June 17th, 2024 15:57

Good Night, Baby
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Thomas as exquisite as ever, my favourite stanza is the second your imagery throughout is just beautiful. Last lines ah, seems such a simple task complete, with a kiss from a dad, as we all know it isn\'t for all. Wow your compassion is blinding in this. 🌹

June 17th, 2024 15:29

Good Night, Baby
Neville said:



if this don\'t knock the stuffing out of them, then nothing likely will ..

June 17th, 2024 12:42

Good Night, Baby
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and powerful words that carry an ominous tone. Unsure if it is a warning or statement of what is. It gives shivers.

June 17th, 2024 12:01

Good Night, Baby
aDarkerMind said:

a silly world it is sometimes.

but and ending that suggests all is not yet lost.

good one Thomas.

June 17th, 2024 11:00

Good Night, Baby
Cassie58 said:

Your final stanza reminds us readers what truly counts in our day to day living. Beautiful and meaningful sentiment Thomas.

June 17th, 2024 10:57

May the Sun Die
Bella Shepard said:

A beautiful, passionate, sensory gem of a poem. Loved it!

June 17th, 2024 09:08

May the Sun Die
Tom Dylan said:

A nice write, mate. Some lovely imagery. Cheers, Tom.


June 17th, 2024 03:21

May the Sun Die
Goldfinch60 said:

Each night of love will come to you Thomas.

Andy

June 17th, 2024 01:47

May the Sun Die
orchidee said:

Good write T.
I was The Birdman. I flew too close to the Sun and got burnt up! lol.

June 17th, 2024 01:46

May the Sun Die
Tony36 said:

Excellent

June 16th, 2024 14:43

May the Sun Die
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely imaged Thomas. Beautiful

June 16th, 2024 14:05

Sailing for Insanity
aDarkerMind said:

having lost my brother through his mental illness, this one hits the spot with a bang Thomas.

a touching and powerful write.

June 16th, 2024 12:27

When the Laughter Dies
sorenbarrett said:

Time takes all. In the downward slide of life entropy is the winner and laughter\'s echoes grow dimmer with time. Good write Thomas.

June 16th, 2024 04:34

When the Laughter Dies
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Ohh I gotta laugh at me own jokes. Well if I don\'t, maybe no one else will, as they\'re quite corny. lol.

June 15th, 2024 01:47

When the Laughter Dies
Goldfinch60 said:

Laughter will never die Thomas it is a wonderful healer in our lives.

Andy

June 15th, 2024 01:07

When the Laughter Dies
Bobby O said:

Wow! It’s literal and metaphoric all at once. “I think of our laughter …,and smile thru the pain for a second or TWO
And the ending line - motherfucker hitting that nail—speaks strongly to all about the futility of trying to live in the past. And Boss, there were a dozen more examples worthy of detailed introspection.
You sir, continue to be a monster!

June 14th, 2024 21:11

When the Laughter Dies
Doggerel Dave said:

Thoughts of laughter only momentary relief?
That\'s bad news, and if real at this moment needs.......
Vivid depiction of severe depression, Thomas.

June 14th, 2024 20:41

When the Laughter Dies
2781 said:

\"The heart of the wise is in the house of mourning; but the heart of fools is in the house of mirth.\"

June 14th, 2024 20:07

When the Laughter Dies
Neville said:


We all love to laugh, but still, it is so often grossly underrated .. I think it is priceless .. and yes, you have done it proud here Thomas .. Neville

June 14th, 2024 14:54

When the Laughter Dies
aDarkerMind said:

pretty much sums up this life of mine....

brilliant and painful my friend;

June 14th, 2024 11:16

A Rich Man
sorenbarrett said:

Ageing takes its toll and Babylon isn\'t all that it was cracked up to be. Good write my friend

June 13th, 2024 16:41



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