Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Another Lover
Mutley Ravishes said:

Oh to be a woman
One minute all sweetness
The next, a fiendess!
What are us guys to do?
Perhaps they are unintentionally training me and you
To not bite the apple
And stay true
To ourselves?

May 29th, 2024 18:37

Another Lover
David Wakeling said:

Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t live without them.I choose poetry everytime.A deep poem of self reflection.Enjoyed

May 29th, 2024 17:39

Another Lover
Neville said:


Not another one .. I don\'t mean your latest book (congratulations on that score) ..

I mean on yet another self disclosive admission that as someone who writes, there can be hardships and drawbacks that might not always be obvious to those who just listen or read .. Neville

May 29th, 2024 16:33

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
aDarkerMind said:

straight to the source as always Thomas.

like Teddy said,
every word counts.

May 28th, 2024 14:42

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Neville said:



I hear you loud and clear brother T .. damned will writ sir .. Neville and congrats on that new book of yours too

May 28th, 2024 01:58

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Teddy.15 said:

How truly wonderful, just for a glimpse of sanity. What a stunning write I always love your brevity especially when every word counts as yours always do. 🌹

May 28th, 2024 01:29

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Thomas.

Andy

May 28th, 2024 01:27

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Cassie58 said:

Soft asylum, however soft it’s going to be a hard job. So well captured Thomas. Have a good Tuesday.

May 27th, 2024 23:53

For a Friend in an Asylum in California
jarcher54 said:

Lazy lithium days and Cheshire madness... very fine imagery, densely teeming with allusions and sound. I will remember this little ditty... I assume you are trying to say \"make the best of it\" but with irony and yes beauty.

May 27th, 2024 21:31

In a Battle Without a Shield
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Heart felt message Thomas

May 27th, 2024 16:35

In a Battle Without a Shield
aDarkerMind said:

as good as always Thomas;

a big thumbs up for this one;

May 27th, 2024 11:23

In a Battle Without a Shield
Meera Mere said:

Amazing poem T.
Hope you are doing well now....

May 27th, 2024 09:11

In a Battle Without a Shield
sorenbarrett said:

The sense of stillness and aloneness as well as the season and site are setting the tone. I have been there many times and can feel it in this poem. Nicely done.

May 27th, 2024 04:33

In a Battle Without a Shield
Neville said:


who was it said the withdrawal method was safe eh\' .. I learnt early that everything has its drawbacks .. and this is just about as ragged and real as it gets .. Neville

May 27th, 2024 02:12

In a Battle Without a Shield
orchidee said:

Good write T.

May 27th, 2024 02:03

In a Battle Without a Shield
Teddy.15 said:

And even then we could say things could always be worse. Such emotion dear Thomas, your imagery brings me to a very dark place. Excellent work as always. 🌹

May 27th, 2024 01:47

In a Battle Without a Shield
Alan R said:

Beautiful.... captures the helplessness so well...

May 27th, 2024 00:42

Furor Scribendi
Bobby O said:

Declarative. If there exists a wiggle of doubt it’s too small to measure. It’s instructs or maybe Leads?

May 26th, 2024 05:49

Furor Scribendi
Cassie58 said:

Once it gets a grip, there’s no turning back and no possible cure. Great read Thomas. Happy Saturday.

May 25th, 2024 07:12

Furor Scribendi
Goldfinch60 said:

That rage on the page is so meaningful Thomas.

Andy

May 25th, 2024 01:47

Furor Scribendi
orchidee said:

Bit of French there again.
And the last line but one: \'pardon my french!\' lol.

May 25th, 2024 01:42

Furor Scribendi
Neville said:



Tis an affliction suffered with a passion and for which there is no easy cure .. Enjoyed a hell of a lot sir ..

May 25th, 2024 01:05

Furor Scribendi
Teddy.15 said:

The passion that has gone into here makes me believe every word but your last words are the ones I think I believe with all my heart, a magnificent might of percervence and yes, it shows in all the words you write. To give up is to lay down and die so to speak, I love this dear Thomas. 🌹

May 25th, 2024 00:49

Furor Scribendi
2781 said:

The Agony and the Ecstasy.

May 24th, 2024 16:32

Furor Scribendi
sorenbarrett said:

This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever. Several good lines in this piece.
\"I grab the pen like
a junkie grabs the syringe,}
\" the pen vomits
words on the paper,\"
Great work

May 24th, 2024 12:27

Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
Doggerel Dave said:

Good Stuff.

May 24th, 2024 02:07

The Cages
Doggerel Dave said:

Good Write.

May 24th, 2024 02:06

Trips to the Cemetery.
Doggerel Dave said:

Well told.

May 24th, 2024 02:03

Trips to the Cemetery.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Thomas showing the innocence of children.

Andy

May 24th, 2024 01:50

Trips to the Cemetery.
orchidee said:

A fine write T.

May 24th, 2024 01:26



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