Comments received on poems by mamacita1214



LOVE LOVE LOVE
mamacita1214 said:

thanks guys! its nice to know at least a few people like my writing:)

June 15th, 2011 17:27

LOVE LOVE LOVE
Dolphine29 said:

Love ... ahhh just be and it'll come.

Beautiful longing poem!
Best
D.

June 14th, 2011 13:17

LOVE LOVE LOVE
Emi said:

Awwww. :) Very cute and sweet. Nice job. :)

June 14th, 2011 09:38

No More Hope
mamacita1214 said:

i need comments... i need to have feedback to make new, better poems

March 9th, 2011 17:33

End the pain
mamacita1214 said:

umm okay..im sorry i go against god

December 17th, 2010 22:36

End the pain
mamacita1214 said:

are like obsessed with god or sumthing?...your against all my poems and i have you know im only 13 years old

December 16th, 2010 16:28

never have i fallen
mamacita1214 said:

i dont see how my poem is perverted..itz my way of life and it should be respected

December 16th, 2010 16:26

End the pain
Cheeky Missy said:

IF you succeed....that is. I've heard some have tried and woken up to still face this life. And then again, it assumes this is all there is and the Word of God does not agree with such a blissful thought of perpetual escape, that I can see. It is an interesting short little piece, and your comment was useful...hahaha.

December 16th, 2010 12:24

never have i fallen
Cheeky Missy said:

Too bad it is so, for it is a very sweet romantic poem.

December 15th, 2010 23:12