Comments received on poems by Dara Ó Rinn



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Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

Wow, tragic that one has to find means of survival during winter. Sad.
Nice ~Lovely write

September 17th, 2025 13:11

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Friendship said:

Your poem explores themes of survival, transformation, and acceptance of one\'s mortality in the face of harsh, unforgiving nature. It reflects on the struggle against the elements and the inevitability of change, both external (the environment) and internal (self-acceptance).

September 17th, 2025 08:42

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sorenbarrett said:

Graphic in its imagery it poses as a metaphor for life itself in the icy realms of society. Nicely written

September 17th, 2025 04:35

Life of your time
DLewis88 said:

I like it. It\'s well written.

September 16th, 2025 07:08

Life of your time
sorenbarrett said:

Now that is freedom when one has no fear of heads or tails. A lovely write

September 16th, 2025 04:47

Horizons
sorenbarrett said:

We are many people and different actors on the stage of life as we prepare for each part we prepare for each season. Nicely done

September 15th, 2025 16:29

Sol
MatPie said:

This is clarity with beauty. Loved the poem!

September 14th, 2025 22:01

Sol
William Hromada said:

I understand this so much...touches our manly heart.

September 14th, 2025 17:26

Sol
sorenbarrett said:

The sun raises and falls regularly irrespective of what happens below it smiles on us good or bad and gives us life. It is not controlled by man and does bring us rainbows (an interesting introjection symbolizing a promise made by God to man) Well written

September 14th, 2025 17:08

Brother Bare
sorenbarrett said:

This poem requires more than one read. It is deeper than the surface and poses questions that deserve deliberation

March 29th, 2025 08:23

The two states of motion
sorenbarrett said:

Home to all of us and should be treated with more respect. A lovely home it is as well from sea to desert mountain to valley and arctic cold to heated salt flat.

February 14th, 2025 05:51

The two states of motion
Poetic Licence said:

Where ever you roam or fly in the world, your heart will always call you back home, really enjoyed the read

February 14th, 2025 05:31

The two states of motion
Cassie58 said:

The sky is wonderful, but I believe the ground is even better. Plenty of time for the sky in the eternal life. I enjoyed reading your stanzas and your poetic voice.

February 14th, 2025 04:12

Scut and Weasel
Cheeky Missy said:

I had to reread before I could be swallowed up into it, finding my way delicately down the page to that moment of realization. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and almost a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

December 15th, 2024 17:18

Dacrydium
David Wakeling said:

I hate it when trees talk.They always sound like they are barking.

November 14th, 2023 15:49

Whats the story?
2781 said:

Deep insight there.

October 23rd, 2023 02:08

Concrete Bullets
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful

October 22nd, 2023 15:59