Comments received on poems by dimpy
happiness
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely thing to have a flower as a home. This poem a metaphor may be taken several ways and I chose to take it as having to give to others joy one does so freely and imparts it on wings of others. A bee often revisits flowers and joy may well return as it was sent. A wonderful poem
April 25th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely thing to have a flower as a home. This poem a metaphor may be taken several ways and I chose to take it as having to give to others joy one does so freely and imparts it on wings of others. A bee often revisits flowers and joy may well return as it was sent. A wonderful poem
April 25th, 2025 04:09
middle of the night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: \"the stars soaked my eyes\" and \"the stars were sparkling like diamond grains\" for example. Breathtaking and powerful. A fave. š¹š
April 22nd, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: \"the stars soaked my eyes\" and \"the stars were sparkling like diamond grains\" for example. Breathtaking and powerful. A fave. š¹š
April 22nd, 2025 08:07
middle of the night
sorenbarrett said:
The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns on its head and represents to me the tears. A wonderful read
April 22nd, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns on its head and represents to me the tears. A wonderful read
April 22nd, 2025 05:18
handbag
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful poem on trust and the consequences when it is lacking. Again...powerful. Well done, my friend. š¹š
April 20th, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful poem on trust and the consequences when it is lacking. Again...powerful. Well done, my friend. š¹š
April 20th, 2025 07:53
handbag
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderfully written poem that speaks in metaphor. Trust has not been found in the crowd and the bag can not be passed on. Loved it
April 20th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderfully written poem that speaks in metaphor. Trust has not been found in the crowd and the bag can not be passed on. Loved it
April 20th, 2025 05:00
purity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem of love. This one sings, my friend. Well done! š¹š
April 19th, 2025 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem of love. This one sings, my friend. Well done! š¹š
April 19th, 2025 08:49
purity
arqios said:
From this poem it would seem that purity begins in thought and heart ššš»
April 19th, 2025 04:40
arqios said:
From this poem it would seem that purity begins in thought and heart ššš»
April 19th, 2025 04:40
purity
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing sensuality in this short poem that speaks to me. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a longing sensuality in this short poem that speaks to me. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 04:03
sleeping pills
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I could feel this one, my friend. Well done! š¹š
April 18th, 2025 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I could feel this one, my friend. Well done! š¹š
April 18th, 2025 16:14
sleeping pills
arqios said:
So true. This is how writing became a pressure release valve for that cage. There is such a thing as poetic licence and poetic justice šš»šļø
April 18th, 2025 07:54
arqios said:
So true. This is how writing became a pressure release valve for that cage. There is such a thing as poetic licence and poetic justice šš»šļø
April 18th, 2025 07:54
sleeping pills
sorenbarrett said:
Biting one\'s tongue is painful. A very nice poem with a little advice
April 18th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Biting one\'s tongue is painful. A very nice poem with a little advice
April 18th, 2025 05:31
in darkness...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Erotic, sensual, mysterious. Love the use of nature to describe the various parts of the body in action. Well done on this. š¹š
April 17th, 2025 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Erotic, sensual, mysterious. Love the use of nature to describe the various parts of the body in action. Well done on this. š¹š
April 17th, 2025 08:39
in darkness...
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, erotic, sexual, full of desire. A poem with energy
April 17th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, erotic, sexual, full of desire. A poem with energy
April 17th, 2025 04:56
in darkness...
Poetic Licence said:
Passionate, erotic and sensual in a few words, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
Passionate, erotic and sensual in a few words, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 02:33
a ravenous thirst...
sorenbarrett said:
Strongly sexual this poem pulsates with desire and passion that pushes until climax. Beyond erotic
April 16th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Strongly sexual this poem pulsates with desire and passion that pushes until climax. Beyond erotic
April 16th, 2025 04:58
true love ???
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of turning our experiences into word,like this poem, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:23
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of turning our experiences into word,like this poem, enjoyed the read
April 15th, 2025 04:23
true love ???
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that starts with the real and then distances to the literary. This gives the mind pause and causes the gears to grind. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that starts with the real and then distances to the literary. This gives the mind pause and causes the gears to grind. Well done
April 15th, 2025 04:17
doggy style fun...
Poetic Licence said:
Erotic, passionate and very sexual, pleasure to read
April 12th, 2025 04:32
Poetic Licence said:
Erotic, passionate and very sexual, pleasure to read
April 12th, 2025 04:32
doggy style fun...
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sexual, sensual, seductive it pulses with pleasure.
April 12th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sexual, sensual, seductive it pulses with pleasure.
April 12th, 2025 04:16
all alone...
sorenbarrett said:
A rather somber and wistful poem of love. It seems to linger in the shadows of night. Loved it
April 10th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A rather somber and wistful poem of love. It seems to linger in the shadows of night. Loved it
April 10th, 2025 04:24
i want to come...
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write on the willingness to wanting to give, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 04:59
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write on the willingness to wanting to give, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 04:59
i want to come...
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of giving. I particularly liked the last stanza that was very creative in its imagery. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of giving. I particularly liked the last stanza that was very creative in its imagery. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 04:33
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