Comments received on poems by dimpy
on a winter night
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and wonderful imagery as you read the right, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:16
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and wonderful imagery as you read the right, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 08:16
true love ???
RSM0812 said:
I found this to be a very different kind of love poem. I really liked it. Great work.
May 6th, 2025 16:02
RSM0812 said:
I found this to be a very different kind of love poem. I really liked it. Great work.
May 6th, 2025 16:02
on a winter night
RSM0812 said:
What a beautiful and unique way of descriptive nature. I could perfectly picture the great images you represented in your words. One of my favs today for sure.
May 6th, 2025 15:54
RSM0812 said:
What a beautiful and unique way of descriptive nature. I could perfectly picture the great images you represented in your words. One of my favs today for sure.
May 6th, 2025 15:54
on a winter night
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words dimpy but we know that the light will always return.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words dimpy but we know that the light will always return.
Andy
May 6th, 2025 01:44
on a winter night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, beautiful poem, my friend. Simply love the use of metaphor here and nature imagery here. Also, reading this also unlocked a lost poem idea I had from earlier this morning and, for that, I am eternally grateful. Well done! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, beautiful poem, my friend. Simply love the use of metaphor here and nature imagery here. Also, reading this also unlocked a lost poem idea I had from earlier this morning and, for that, I am eternally grateful. Well done! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 10:54
from my experience...
Goldfinch60 said:
True Dimpy for some but I have been very lucky in my long life with those I have loved.
Andy
May 5th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
True Dimpy for some but I have been very lucky in my long life with those I have loved.
Andy
May 5th, 2025 01:25
from my experience...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Often the truth. Well done, friend! 🌹🙏
May 4th, 2025 15:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Often the truth. Well done, friend! 🌹🙏
May 4th, 2025 15:52
waiting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Simple. Powerful. Profound. True. Well done. A fave, my friend. 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Simple. Powerful. Profound. True. Well done. A fave, my friend. 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:26
peace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful and eloquent. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful and eloquent. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:00
any answer ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Society sucks, doesn\'t it? Judgment an awful reality that, in this case, definitely effects women almost exclusively. Great poem with a poignant, probing rhetorical question at the end. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Society sucks, doesn\'t it? Judgment an awful reality that, in this case, definitely effects women almost exclusively. Great poem with a poignant, probing rhetorical question at the end. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 10:58
peace
MDStone said:
To be satiated in the presence of another human being. Content, fulfilled, satisfied! You words like perfume only take a small amount to fill the room. Fantastic job!
May 2nd, 2025 10:27
MDStone said:
To be satiated in the presence of another human being. Content, fulfilled, satisfied! You words like perfume only take a small amount to fill the room. Fantastic job!
May 2nd, 2025 10:27
any answer ?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moral and social labels I would call the man the unwanted bastard that has to pay for his favors. Good write
May 1st, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moral and social labels I would call the man the unwanted bastard that has to pay for his favors. Good write
May 1st, 2025 05:01
wedding bells...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderful poem filled with anticipation and hope for a life filled with love and true companionship. May it be so if it isn\'t already. A lovely poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderful poem filled with anticipation and hope for a life filled with love and true companionship. May it be so if it isn\'t already. A lovely poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 14:47
wedding bells...
sorenbarrett said:
Great expectations are revealed here and it seems that such hopes are built into the psyche from the time that one is young. So poetically expressed in wonderful word choice and good flow
April 28th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Great expectations are revealed here and it seems that such hopes are built into the psyche from the time that one is young. So poetically expressed in wonderful word choice and good flow
April 28th, 2025 05:18
happiness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the bee took some happiness and pollinated the other \"homes\" with it. There is a sadness, a feeling of theft, and then a profound realization that dawns in this poem. It starts off feeling sad...like happiness was taken...but then the realization that it is still flying around being shared. It can be taken in many different ways, but I feel both sides to this. A wonderful job! 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, the bee took some happiness and pollinated the other \"homes\" with it. There is a sadness, a feeling of theft, and then a profound realization that dawns in this poem. It starts off feeling sad...like happiness was taken...but then the realization that it is still flying around being shared. It can be taken in many different ways, but I feel both sides to this. A wonderful job! 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:15
happiness
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely thing to have a flower as a home. This poem a metaphor may be taken several ways and I chose to take it as having to give to others joy one does so freely and imparts it on wings of others. A bee often revisits flowers and joy may well return as it was sent. A wonderful poem
April 25th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely thing to have a flower as a home. This poem a metaphor may be taken several ways and I chose to take it as having to give to others joy one does so freely and imparts it on wings of others. A bee often revisits flowers and joy may well return as it was sent. A wonderful poem
April 25th, 2025 04:09
middle of the night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: \"the stars soaked my eyes\" and \"the stars were sparkling like diamond grains\" for example. Breathtaking and powerful. A fave. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: \"the stars soaked my eyes\" and \"the stars were sparkling like diamond grains\" for example. Breathtaking and powerful. A fave. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 08:07
middle of the night
sorenbarrett said:
The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns on its head and represents to me the tears. A wonderful read
April 22nd, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns on its head and represents to me the tears. A wonderful read
April 22nd, 2025 05:18
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