Comments received on poems by Spring Sugar Bunny



You Made A Choice
2781 said:

We say we love you, and can\'t keep our pick in our dance.
In a sexualised world, it still hurts.

June 1st, 2025 09:39

You Made A Choice
sorenbarrett said:

A direct call out in this poem. Powerful and to the point it makes its point.

June 1st, 2025 08:46

Love Dies When You Are Betrayed
rrodriguez said:

This is so true... Your poem carries a heavy message. You\'ve expressed it succinctly... Excellent write!

May 22nd, 2025 04:52

Love Dies When You Are Betrayed
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh no! Did someone upset you then?

May 22nd, 2025 00:45

Love Dies When You Are Betrayed
Poetic Licence said:

Expresses well once that trust is broken any relationship is over and can never be the same, nicely written

May 21st, 2025 12:51

Love Dies When You Are Betrayed
sorenbarrett said:

A strong poem powerful in its delivery that speaks the author\'s mind. Well done

May 21st, 2025 12:37

Love Dies When You Are Betrayed
Salvia.S said:

Betrayal changes everything — once trust is broken, even the strongest love can’t survive.
Well expressed!

May 21st, 2025 12:06

Today... I Just Need To Survive
Poetic Licence said:

That is a wonderful write, if we don\'t look after ourselves we can\'t look after others, and it is so important to sometimes just focus on yourself, nicely written and expressed, enjoyed the read

May 12th, 2025 14:06

Today... I Just Need To Survive
sorenbarrett said:

One must take care of oneself first to have the strength to help anyone else. A wonderful write.

May 12th, 2025 12:10

Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\"
NinjaGirl said:

Broken promises hurt, but betrayal from what they said they\'d never do...that burns.

May 9th, 2025 10:45

Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:

And how! 💯 Indeed, I wrote about betrayal yesterday. Excellent poem! A fave. 🌹👏

May 9th, 2025 09:20

Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\"
Poetic Licence said:

One of the hardest to overcome when someone betrayed the trust you placed in them, nicely expressed and written

May 9th, 2025 06:12

Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\"
sorenbarrett said:

Betrayals are tough because someone you trusted has violated that promise and now trust no longer exists. A poem of pain. Well done

May 9th, 2025 04:22

~Letter to let go of those who no longer wanted to stay~
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of acceptance that is glad in self acceptance. A most mournful feeling of grieving and having reached the last stage of moving on. Lovely

May 3rd, 2025 13:26

Betrayal Changes You
sorenbarrett said:

A painful write about the storm of betrayal and the cleanup after. Is anything salvageable and if so how and when do you start to rebuild. A lovely write

May 2nd, 2025 04:47

Betrayal Changes You
dimpy said:

very true words... bitter but true...

May 2nd, 2025 03:46


The walls of shame. The walls of fear. The walls that say, \"Stay small.\"
sorenbarrett said:

Betrayal never reflects upon the victim but upon the betrayer, A lovely poem of support and nicely written

May 1st, 2025 04:38

And I’ll Keep Finding You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of devotion and commitment well written and convincing.

April 19th, 2025 04:27

আর একবার জীবন টা কাটাতে পারতাম ! 
MLHnow said:

I love writing with duo
Languages, I
May not be able to follow yours but it is beautiful in print

Be the light
That shines on Mercy\'s face
Sei das Licht, das scheint
Auf Mercys Gesicht



June 20th, 2024 16:06

ভালোবাসা ছিলো - There Was Love
Norman Flagtea said:

Could you oblige with a translation? Thank you.

December 18th, 2023 16:33