Comments received on poems by Pratikshya
Through the Looking Glass
Zojinjo said:
Beautiful, I can't say anything else. It's just so amaizng.
January 28th, 2011 11:36
Zojinjo said:
Beautiful, I can't say anything else. It's just so amaizng.
January 28th, 2011 11:36
Passing Away
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting look at dying...right? There are so many little "deaths" in so many things now, and yet the final parting is so deadly...in a sense, as your concluding couplet, we will cease to be, but only for this world, therefore God's salvation is so desperately necessary.
December 29th, 2010 23:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting look at dying...right? There are so many little "deaths" in so many things now, and yet the final parting is so deadly...in a sense, as your concluding couplet, we will cease to be, but only for this world, therefore God's salvation is so desperately necessary.
December 29th, 2010 23:22
Through the Looking Glass
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I LOVE this piece! You have written beautifully!!! You well captured all the sensations, presenting them very poetically with similes....it is EXCELLENT! May you continue to write such perfect pieces! Also, again, your image with it is very fitting!
December 21st, 2010 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! I LOVE this piece! You have written beautifully!!! You well captured all the sensations, presenting them very poetically with similes....it is EXCELLENT! May you continue to write such perfect pieces! Also, again, your image with it is very fitting!
December 21st, 2010 18:11
A Letter
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this piece! The picture is delightful and so perfectly appropriate! The poem beautifully describes what the picture shows. It is a very lovely well-written piece. Excellent!
December 19th, 2010 15:34
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this piece! The picture is delightful and so perfectly appropriate! The poem beautifully describes what the picture shows. It is a very lovely well-written piece. Excellent!
December 19th, 2010 15:34
