Comments received on poems by boot
Real real
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this poem it is subtle and intriguing loved it.
October 14th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this poem it is subtle and intriguing loved it.
October 14th, 2025 04:06
No time
sorenbarrett said:
Optical character reading? Are our souls read as such? A most intriguing write well done
October 6th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Optical character reading? Are our souls read as such? A most intriguing write well done
October 6th, 2025 04:17
Undug
sorenbarrett said:
Particularly love the first stanza. This begins in epic fashion and tells the story of bones. Metaphoric? Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Particularly love the first stanza. This begins in epic fashion and tells the story of bones. Metaphoric? Nicely written
October 6th, 2025 04:04
Otherness
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with good rhyme. I loved the message and flow. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with good rhyme. I loved the message and flow. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 07:58
Otherness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, this piece hums with an otherworldly ache. The dreamlike drift, the bite of “limit reaching,” and that familiar yearning for more than what’s permitted...it’s all here. Beautifully haunted and powerfully rendered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, this piece hums with an otherworldly ache. The dreamlike drift, the bite of “limit reaching,” and that familiar yearning for more than what’s permitted...it’s all here. Beautifully haunted and powerfully rendered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:56
Wish
sorenbarrett said:
Greed the fuel of capitalism. Humanity\'s flaw spawns ambition and civilization. A lovely write that gives one a good deal of thought and is mind provoking. Well done. A fave
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Greed the fuel of capitalism. Humanity\'s flaw spawns ambition and civilization. A lovely write that gives one a good deal of thought and is mind provoking. Well done. A fave
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
Smile
RSM0812 said:
An interesting read with great rhyme and rhythm. Excellent write.
July 28th, 2025 07:22
RSM0812 said:
An interesting read with great rhyme and rhythm. Excellent write.
July 28th, 2025 07:22
Smile
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining and fun read which could easily relate to people as well , and probably does, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 05:49
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining and fun read which could easily relate to people as well , and probably does, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 05:49
Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read by itself and although it may not be intended it can be a metaphor as well for certain people. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read by itself and although it may not be intended it can be a metaphor as well for certain people. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 04:47
Get over it
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write, of let down and disappoinment, nicely expressed
July 8th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write, of let down and disappoinment, nicely expressed
July 8th, 2025 05:17
Get over it
sorenbarrett said:
Coitus interruptus, or anejaculation which ever a lack of fulfilment. Need not be sexual may be metaphorical and what a let down it is. A most interesting poem and so creatively put.
July 8th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Coitus interruptus, or anejaculation which ever a lack of fulfilment. Need not be sexual may be metaphorical and what a let down it is. A most interesting poem and so creatively put.
July 8th, 2025 04:38
Deserted
Poetic Licence said:
A search for the understanding of why, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
A search for the understanding of why, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 07:21
Deserted
sorenbarrett said:
The poem like a veil partially hides partially reveals the message sent. Very nicely woven.
July 1st, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
The poem like a veil partially hides partially reveals the message sent. Very nicely woven.
July 1st, 2025 05:32
Saved
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and unifying this poem goes full circle. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and unifying this poem goes full circle. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:37
Guilt
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write on reflections on today\'s life, and it is nailed with the last line, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 10:40
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write on reflections on today\'s life, and it is nailed with the last line, enjoyed the read
June 17th, 2025 10:40
Guilt
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections on a life and the last line settles it. Well done
June 17th, 2025 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections on a life and the last line settles it. Well done
June 17th, 2025 09:57
Guilt
Damaso said:
Beautiful and sad! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:25
Damaso said:
Beautiful and sad! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:25
The door
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic but not too much so, just enough to be poetic. Lovely and well said.
May 5th, 2025 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic but not too much so, just enough to be poetic. Lovely and well said.
May 5th, 2025 18:44
Escape
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in an unconventional way of speech takes one on a journey. Nicely done and enjoyable
April 15th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in an unconventional way of speech takes one on a journey. Nicely done and enjoyable
April 15th, 2025 04:22
Burp
sorenbarrett said:
The transient nature of relationships comes through in this poem. Very nicely done with its form of disjointed bits emulating the disjunction in relationships.
April 8th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
The transient nature of relationships comes through in this poem. Very nicely done with its form of disjointed bits emulating the disjunction in relationships.
April 8th, 2025 04:21
Dong
sorenbarrett said:
The human race tends to tear up everything around it and in its greed will make the world a worse place to live. Well written
April 1st, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
The human race tends to tear up everything around it and in its greed will make the world a worse place to live. Well written
April 1st, 2025 04:47
Dong
Poetic Licence said:
The world does appear it is falling to pieces and man just stands and watches, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
The world does appear it is falling to pieces and man just stands and watches, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 02:34
Heil trump
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup. Repeating for sure. Well done on this write, though I wish it weren\'t so true! Scary times! 😬
February 5th, 2025 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yup. Repeating for sure. Well done on this write, though I wish it weren\'t so true! Scary times! 😬
February 5th, 2025 09:54
Heil trump
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am a front man
I work for the Fam
Both sides played
Got you all lost
In a maze
February 4th, 2025 18:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
I am a front man
I work for the Fam
Both sides played
Got you all lost
In a maze
February 4th, 2025 18:46
Heil trump
Poetic Licence said:
If we cannot learn from the past we have no hope for the future, a lovely write highlighting the risk of history repeating itself, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
If we cannot learn from the past we have no hope for the future, a lovely write highlighting the risk of history repeating itself, enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 10:38
Heil trump
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and it speaks of danger of those that do not know history being doomed to relive it.
February 4th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and it speaks of danger of those that do not know history being doomed to relive it.
February 4th, 2025 08:44
Running out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A death! The eternal muse! Well done! Wonderful imagery that really rings nicely together! Bravo!🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A death! The eternal muse! Well done! Wonderful imagery that really rings nicely together! Bravo!🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:19
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