Comments received on poems by boot
Smell \'em
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What stayed with me most was the progression through \"Conception... Perception... Deception... Intention... Concession.\" Those single-word pivots give the poem a strong sense of movement, carrying the reader deeper with each turn. Beautifully done, James. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What stayed with me most was the progression through \"Conception... Perception... Deception... Intention... Concession.\" Those single-word pivots give the poem a strong sense of movement, carrying the reader deeper with each turn. Beautifully done, James. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:02
Smell \'em
sorenbarrett said:
James this is a very cleverly designed poem constructed in stanzas with good flow and intervening answer to the stanza which link the whole poem together by their rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
James this is a very cleverly designed poem constructed in stanzas with good flow and intervening answer to the stanza which link the whole poem together by their rhyme. Very nicely done and a fave
July 11th, 2026 04:55
Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was fantastic, James…the image of ounces measuring a loss too immense for any scale is what stays with me most. The way sorrow follows sorrow, swallowing everything within days, is gutting and honest. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was fantastic, James…the image of ounces measuring a loss too immense for any scale is what stays with me most. The way sorrow follows sorrow, swallowing everything within days, is gutting and honest. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:59
Prior being
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is one heck of a poem, my friend…the sense of a former self still lingering beneath the surface is haunting in the best way. The detail of it tracing back to childhood is what really stays with me, and honestly, I think many of us carry something like that quietly. Wonderfully done, boot! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is one heck of a poem, my friend…the sense of a former self still lingering beneath the surface is haunting in the best way. The detail of it tracing back to childhood is what really stays with me, and honestly, I think many of us carry something like that quietly. Wonderfully done, boot! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:29
Gone
sorenbarrett said:
This poem spits grief it overflows with sadness over loss. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem spits grief it overflows with sadness over loss. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:45
Prior being
sorenbarrett said:
This holds visions of a previous life and flashes of recognition. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
This holds visions of a previous life and flashes of recognition. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:33
Youth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, this really moved me. It quietly brought me back to childhood...that sense of wonder before the world became so familiar. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, this really moved me. It quietly brought me back to childhood...that sense of wonder before the world became so familiar. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:47
Youth
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! A recognition of childhood aspects to all of us that have just dimmed over the years. Well said
June 30th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! A recognition of childhood aspects to all of us that have just dimmed over the years. Well said
June 30th, 2026 03:53
Unsung
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems dedicated to the death song, dirge, elegy, Monody, a requiem if you would. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems dedicated to the death song, dirge, elegy, Monody, a requiem if you would. Nicely written
June 16th, 2026 03:47
Unsung
Anas said:
It is said when a scar cannot scream anymore, it starts to sing
Good write.
June 16th, 2026 00:42
Anas said:
It is said when a scar cannot scream anymore, it starts to sing
Good write.
June 16th, 2026 00:42
Gone not
Syd said:
I very much enjoyed this write and it\'s message James.
Well written.
- Syd
June 9th, 2026 11:43
Syd said:
I very much enjoyed this write and it\'s message James.
Well written.
- Syd
June 9th, 2026 11:43
Sad
sorenbarrett said:
James this poem carries sadness and wisdom in its depth. Well written with rhyme and near rhyme and a great flow well done
June 3rd, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
James this poem carries sadness and wisdom in its depth. Well written with rhyme and near rhyme and a great flow well done
June 3rd, 2026 04:19
Who?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, there’s a real edge to this that keeps moving…like something being sharpened over and over. The repetition of necessity gives it weight, like it’s not just a theme but a force pushing everything forward. It taps into that cycle of losing clarity and finding it again. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
James, there’s a real edge to this that keeps moving…like something being sharpened over and over. The repetition of necessity gives it weight, like it’s not just a theme but a force pushing everything forward. It taps into that cycle of losing clarity and finding it again. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:10
War
sorenbarrett said:
This is a stark and raw write of grit and war. Nicely written and a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
This is a stark and raw write of grit and war. Nicely written and a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:48
Street view
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and light it has a nursery rhyme flow that carries it onward to the surreal leaving so much open for interpretation. Lovely
April 20th, 2026 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and light it has a nursery rhyme flow that carries it onward to the surreal leaving so much open for interpretation. Lovely
April 20th, 2026 20:50
Get it together
sorenbarrett said:
Like the jargon feel the beat got the message. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Like the jargon feel the beat got the message. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 08:44
Lofty?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with deep meaning hidden in its words of butterflies and such. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with deep meaning hidden in its words of butterflies and such. Nicely done
February 11th, 2026 06:07
Whatever
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy starts right off in this poem that acknowledges the need for consent to maintain such and all of societies absurdities, where we pay to maintain such and have little conscience about it. Well written in most poetic form.
January 6th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy starts right off in this poem that acknowledges the need for consent to maintain such and all of societies absurdities, where we pay to maintain such and have little conscience about it. Well written in most poetic form.
January 6th, 2026 03:56
Familiar?
sorenbarrett said:
This symbolic write speaks to me of another soul that has dug its own grave second by second wasting its precious time digging a hole for the wrong reason. Nicely done
December 30th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This symbolic write speaks to me of another soul that has dug its own grave second by second wasting its precious time digging a hole for the wrong reason. Nicely done
December 30th, 2025 04:33
Uninterpritable
sorenbarrett said:
The disadvantage of a real tree and its death throes as it pine\'s away dropping needles in a yellow retreat. A good write. Loved it
December 25th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
The disadvantage of a real tree and its death throes as it pine\'s away dropping needles in a yellow retreat. A good write. Loved it
December 25th, 2025 05:00
Underneath it all
sorenbarrett said:
Well done a poem of hope and belief in what one can be. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
Well done a poem of hope and belief in what one can be. Nicely done Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 20:40
Autonomy
sorenbarrett said:
Politics not my cup of tea, it is bitter, even when sugar is added it tastes of something rotten, overly fermented, distilled poison that possesses the lives of those that partake of it. No thank you I\'ll pass. A good poem that provokes thought and emotion
November 19th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Politics not my cup of tea, it is bitter, even when sugar is added it tastes of something rotten, overly fermented, distilled poison that possesses the lives of those that partake of it. No thank you I\'ll pass. A good poem that provokes thought and emotion
November 19th, 2025 08:26
Unending
sorenbarrett said:
Oppression when does the hand become too heavy so as to lift ones arms in rebellion. When is tyranny sufficient to require a violent overthrow. Question that arise daily . A thought provoking poem.
November 12th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Oppression when does the hand become too heavy so as to lift ones arms in rebellion. When is tyranny sufficient to require a violent overthrow. Question that arise daily . A thought provoking poem.
November 12th, 2025 04:08
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