Comments received on poems by Dayena
Only yours
Lil said:
This shows how good of a poet you are. And believe it or not your an amazing poet.
February 22nd, 2024 18:49
Lil said:
This shows how good of a poet you are. And believe it or not your an amazing poet.
February 22nd, 2024 18:49
Only yours
John Lee said:
You say you\'re not good at writing poems, but poetry is expressing and evoking emotions. You my dear, are a poet. 🥀
February 14th, 2024 00:51
John Lee said:
You say you\'re not good at writing poems, but poetry is expressing and evoking emotions. You my dear, are a poet. 🥀
February 14th, 2024 00:51
Hypocrites
John Lee said:
Truth. I was scolded for rejecting to pray out loud or saying \"the blessing\".. When I pray it\'s only in secret and not often enough. Most times I just sit in silence.
I wrote one called We\'re Religious. Touches on these said people. It\'s why I\'ll always be considered as my poem Villain too.
February 5th, 2024 18:21
John Lee said:
Truth. I was scolded for rejecting to pray out loud or saying \"the blessing\".. When I pray it\'s only in secret and not often enough. Most times I just sit in silence.
I wrote one called We\'re Religious. Touches on these said people. It\'s why I\'ll always be considered as my poem Villain too.
February 5th, 2024 18:21
Hypocrites
Neville said:
I seriously hope you continue to write Dayena from what I have seen to date, you have considerable talent my young friend ..
just make sure you never get pigeon holed or fall into the trap of becoming typecast .. all God Things .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 12:37
Neville said:
I seriously hope you continue to write Dayena from what I have seen to date, you have considerable talent my young friend ..
just make sure you never get pigeon holed or fall into the trap of becoming typecast .. all God Things .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 12:37
Hypocrites
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Yes, Jesus accepting the \'common people, but scolding the \'religious\' leaders of His day.
February 5th, 2024 02:53
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Yes, Jesus accepting the \'common people, but scolding the \'religious\' leaders of His day.
February 5th, 2024 02:53
Hypocrites
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dayena, the do called good people promote themselves but the real good people are always there for others and do not say so.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dayena, the do called good people promote themselves but the real good people are always there for others and do not say so.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:49
Hypocrites
peto said:
Great writing
I completely agree with the sentiment
Those who quietly go about their business are the \"good people \"
Their actions being enough reward
Very nicely done
February 5th, 2024 02:10
peto said:
Great writing
I completely agree with the sentiment
Those who quietly go about their business are the \"good people \"
Their actions being enough reward
Very nicely done
February 5th, 2024 02:10
Beard guy
Parisab said:
The last two stanzas wrap up the whole story beautifully -so fanciful is your description of this Santa like person you fancy …
February 4th, 2024 01:42
Parisab said:
The last two stanzas wrap up the whole story beautifully -so fanciful is your description of this Santa like person you fancy …
February 4th, 2024 01:42
None like you
Parisab said:
You’ve grown fond of your muse and so no bells and whistles were required of your poem. Simply lovely…
February 3rd, 2024 13:26
Parisab said:
You’ve grown fond of your muse and so no bells and whistles were required of your poem. Simply lovely…
February 3rd, 2024 13:26
Beard guy
John Lee said:
Nothing better than a poetic love letter! You\'ve captured the emotions of falling in love well, with both poems I\'ve read.
February 3rd, 2024 10:27
John Lee said:
Nothing better than a poetic love letter! You\'ve captured the emotions of falling in love well, with both poems I\'ve read.
February 3rd, 2024 10:27
None like you
John Lee said:
Beautifully captures the recognition of a man\'s heart. It would mean the world to him if you\'d give it to him. Nicely done!
February 3rd, 2024 10:22
John Lee said:
Beautifully captures the recognition of a man\'s heart. It would mean the world to him if you\'d give it to him. Nicely done!
February 3rd, 2024 10:22
None like you
Neville said:
I suspect there is a very lucky fella out there somewhere .. and blushing probably .. Neville
February 3rd, 2024 09:52
Neville said:
I suspect there is a very lucky fella out there somewhere .. and blushing probably .. Neville
February 3rd, 2024 09:52
Beard guy
Bigguy said:
This is intensely sweet.
You have some good juxtaposition stuff working here. Well done! I hope you do more.
February 2nd, 2024 00:51
Bigguy said:
This is intensely sweet.
You have some good juxtaposition stuff working here. Well done! I hope you do more.
February 2nd, 2024 00:51
Beard guy
peto said:
Welcome
Great start
Looking forward to reading more from you
February 1st, 2024 15:15
peto said:
Welcome
Great start
Looking forward to reading more from you
February 1st, 2024 15:15
Beard guy
Neville said:
I shaved mine off not long ago ..
All Good Things, Ex-Beard guy :)
February 1st, 2024 14:06
Neville said:
I shaved mine off not long ago ..
All Good Things, Ex-Beard guy :)
February 1st, 2024 14:06
Beard guy
Bobby O said:
I liked both the sincere expression and the playfulness that you sound around it. Thatnid a nice versatility b
February 1st, 2024 05:59
Bobby O said:
I liked both the sincere expression and the playfulness that you sound around it. Thatnid a nice versatility b
February 1st, 2024 05:59
