Comments received on poems by Dayena
Solitude
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has many biblical words and familiar wordings. It reads well and feels scriptural.
August 15th, 2024 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has many biblical words and familiar wordings. It reads well and feels scriptural.
August 15th, 2024 04:29
Solitude
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful spiritual write by your brother. A fine poem of faith. Happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:55
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful spiritual write by your brother. A fine poem of faith. Happy Thursday.
August 15th, 2024 02:55
Hypocrites
John Lee said:
Truth. I was scolded for rejecting to pray out loud or saying \"the blessing\".. When I pray it\'s only in secret and not often enough. Most times I just sit in silence.
I wrote one called We\'re Religious. Touches on these said people. It\'s why I\'ll always be considered as my poem Villain too.
February 5th, 2024 18:21
John Lee said:
Truth. I was scolded for rejecting to pray out loud or saying \"the blessing\".. When I pray it\'s only in secret and not often enough. Most times I just sit in silence.
I wrote one called We\'re Religious. Touches on these said people. It\'s why I\'ll always be considered as my poem Villain too.
February 5th, 2024 18:21
Hypocrites
Neville said:
I seriously hope you continue to write Dayena from what I have seen to date, you have considerable talent my young friend ..
just make sure you never get pigeon holed or fall into the trap of becoming typecast .. all God Things .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 12:37
Neville said:
I seriously hope you continue to write Dayena from what I have seen to date, you have considerable talent my young friend ..
just make sure you never get pigeon holed or fall into the trap of becoming typecast .. all God Things .. Neville
February 5th, 2024 12:37
Hypocrites
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Yes, Jesus accepting the \'common people, but scolding the \'religious\' leaders of His day.
February 5th, 2024 02:53
orchidee said:
Good write D.
Yes, Jesus accepting the \'common people, but scolding the \'religious\' leaders of His day.
February 5th, 2024 02:53
Hypocrites
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dayena, the do called good people promote themselves but the real good people are always there for others and do not say so.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dayena, the do called good people promote themselves but the real good people are always there for others and do not say so.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:49
Hypocrites
peto said:
Great writing
I completely agree with the sentiment
Those who quietly go about their business are the \"good people \"
Their actions being enough reward
Very nicely done
February 5th, 2024 02:10
peto said:
Great writing
I completely agree with the sentiment
Those who quietly go about their business are the \"good people \"
Their actions being enough reward
Very nicely done
February 5th, 2024 02:10
