Comments received on poems by Karley
The Dark Hand
Lil said:
All imma say is at the beginnings of each line capitalize the letter.
March 26th, 2024 23:23
Lil said:
All imma say is at the beginnings of each line capitalize the letter.
March 26th, 2024 23:23
seven kinds of death
Lil said:
I see where you change it.And Imma say I think it\'s really good.
March 26th, 2024 23:20
Lil said:
I see where you change it.And Imma say I think it\'s really good.
March 26th, 2024 23:20
my ex
Lil said:
I love this. I can relate all I think after a breakup is usually I wanna kill the feelings for him, or just him
March 26th, 2024 23:18
Lil said:
I love this. I can relate all I think after a breakup is usually I wanna kill the feelings for him, or just him
March 26th, 2024 23:18
blood mixed with water
2781 said:
\"But one of the soldiers with a spear pierced his side, and forthwith came there out blood and water.\"
March 12th, 2024 08:08
2781 said:
\"But one of the soldiers with a spear pierced his side, and forthwith came there out blood and water.\"
March 12th, 2024 08:08
seven kinds of death
peto said:
The necklace of rope is an amazing line
Dunno how much you changed but it is a stunning write
March 7th, 2024 09:11
peto said:
The necklace of rope is an amazing line
Dunno how much you changed but it is a stunning write
March 7th, 2024 09:11
