Comments received on poems by Cirawrites01
\"My Dear Swan\" 🦢
sorenbarrett said:
The swan faithful throughout its life is a far better mate than many humans, so who is the swan in this poem? Nicely crafted.
October 21st, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
The swan faithful throughout its life is a far better mate than many humans, so who is the swan in this poem? Nicely crafted.
October 21st, 2025 04:27
The Pearl That Stayed Locked
Soman Ragavan said:
One wonder about pearls is the way they are conceived and stay for a long time. The shell is closed, the beauty inside remains unseen by others. Looking at the shell one would never think it can produce such a marvel. But no treasure is safe from Man : he will find a way to open the shell forcefully and keep the pearl as an exhibit...
\"Full many a gem of purest ray serene
The dark, unfathom’d caves of ocean bear;
Full many a flower is born to blush unseen
And waste its sweetness in the desert air.\"
Thomas Gray (1716-1771) : “Elegy written in a country churchyard.”
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October 5th, 2025 01:01
Soman Ragavan said:
One wonder about pearls is the way they are conceived and stay for a long time. The shell is closed, the beauty inside remains unseen by others. Looking at the shell one would never think it can produce such a marvel. But no treasure is safe from Man : he will find a way to open the shell forcefully and keep the pearl as an exhibit...
\"Full many a gem of purest ray serene
The dark, unfathom’d caves of ocean bear;
Full many a flower is born to blush unseen
And waste its sweetness in the desert air.\"
Thomas Gray (1716-1771) : “Elegy written in a country churchyard.”
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October 5th, 2025 01:01
The Pearl That Stayed Locked
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is that it is not the treasure but simply knowing that it exists that is important. Well done
October 4th, 2025 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is that it is not the treasure but simply knowing that it exists that is important. Well done
October 4th, 2025 06:23
Committing Gruesome Crimes
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and scary write of what appears to be a vigilante not only out of control but clearly enjoying their work, nicely done
July 22nd, 2025 04:34
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and scary write of what appears to be a vigilante not only out of control but clearly enjoying their work, nicely done
July 22nd, 2025 04:34
Committing Gruesome Crimes
sorenbarrett said:
A homicidal poem whether metaphor or not. Haunting and dark in its theme and character. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A homicidal poem whether metaphor or not. Haunting and dark in its theme and character. Well done
July 22nd, 2025 04:14
When Souls Forgot How Love Used To Breathe and Feel....
sorenbarrett said:
This poem addresses questions but leaves as many as it asks. Nicely written
July 19th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem addresses questions but leaves as many as it asks. Nicely written
July 19th, 2025 05:40
When Souls Forgot How Love Used To Breathe and Feel....
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely.
July 19th, 2025 03:33
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely.
July 19th, 2025 03:33
I think I\'m in Love With You
Poetic Licence said:
This has it all, passion, dreams, infatuation, will be very relatable to many, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
This has it all, passion, dreams, infatuation, will be very relatable to many, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 05:47
I think I\'m in Love With You
Priya Tomar said:
The poem is full of fantasy
Very well
July 18th, 2025 04:49
Priya Tomar said:
The poem is full of fantasy
Very well
July 18th, 2025 04:49
I think I\'m in Love With You
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of infatuation, passion, fantasy and a dream all that stuff that we feel from time to time. Very convincingly worded. Nicely said.
July 18th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of infatuation, passion, fantasy and a dream all that stuff that we feel from time to time. Very convincingly worded. Nicely said.
July 18th, 2025 04:21
The Puzzle With Lost Pieces: The angle of reflection is unknown
Priya Tomar said:
Clever metaphors ....
Well written.
July 17th, 2025 05:53
Priya Tomar said:
Clever metaphors ....
Well written.
July 17th, 2025 05:53
The Puzzle With Lost Pieces: The angle of reflection is unknown
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, nicely crafted, some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, nicely crafted, some lovely lines and imagery, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 04:37
The Puzzle With Lost Pieces: The angle of reflection is unknown
sorenbarrett said:
The deck has been shuffled, sifting is the answer, a needle is never found in a haystack. I need a magnet. Fun read
July 17th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
The deck has been shuffled, sifting is the answer, a needle is never found in a haystack. I need a magnet. Fun read
July 17th, 2025 04:35
Things That Don\'t - But Do and Is.
Priya Tomar said:
Magnus opus
Veruy nice...
July 15th, 2025 11:26
Priya Tomar said:
Magnus opus
Veruy nice...
July 15th, 2025 11:26
Things That Don\'t - But Do and Is.
Poetic Licence said:
To me this is a absolutely wonderful write, so well thought out and crafted, a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 08:45
Poetic Licence said:
To me this is a absolutely wonderful write, so well thought out and crafted, a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 08:45
Things That Don\'t - But Do and Is.
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Amazing! A poetic touching of a nerve to the soul. This poem is truly magnificent, a masterpiece. A fave nothing more to add
July 15th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! Amazing! A poetic touching of a nerve to the soul. This poem is truly magnificent, a masterpiece. A fave nothing more to add
July 15th, 2025 08:36
To My Lovely Cutiesss
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write of ever lasting friendship and care, a bond not to be broken, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:44
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write of ever lasting friendship and care, a bond not to be broken, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:44
To My Lovely Cutiesss
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write of friendship and care. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write of friendship and care. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 11:17
“This Poem Was Never Meant to Flow”
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with many meanings of the reality of life as it is today, happy and sad, good and bad, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with many meanings of the reality of life as it is today, happy and sad, good and bad, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 08:23
“This Poem Was Never Meant to Flow”
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and reality mixed in a poem of a view of the present. Sad and joyful it encompasses what we are. Very nice
June 22nd, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and reality mixed in a poem of a view of the present. Sad and joyful it encompasses what we are. Very nice
June 22nd, 2025 06:45
My Dear Dove 🕊️
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of support and fellowship, of trust and pledge of being there. Nicely done
June 8th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of support and fellowship, of trust and pledge of being there. Nicely done
June 8th, 2025 17:11
My Dear Dove 🕊️
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely dedication and commitment to a friend, vowing to be there through good and bad, a true friend, lovely write
June 8th, 2025 16:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely dedication and commitment to a friend, vowing to be there through good and bad, a true friend, lovely write
June 8th, 2025 16:58
\"Tattooed in Bones\"
sorenbarrett said:
Haste makes waste is the old saying and speed is a deadly seed. A wonderful write
June 4th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Haste makes waste is the old saying and speed is a deadly seed. A wonderful write
June 4th, 2025 09:11
\"Played my Part\"
sorenbarrett said:
A dramatic and most poetic piece that leaves the feel of a song. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
A dramatic and most poetic piece that leaves the feel of a song. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2025 09:00
\"Flood and Float\"
Poetic Licence said:
Drowning in pain, how I can relate to this, great picture as well as write
June 2nd, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
Drowning in pain, how I can relate to this, great picture as well as write
June 2nd, 2025 10:59
\"Flood and Float\"
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic line that carries its meaning that is sad, caring and hopeful. Lovely
June 2nd, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic line that carries its meaning that is sad, caring and hopeful. Lovely
June 2nd, 2025 08:55
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