Comments received on poems by Cirawrites01
\"Temporary Melody\"
Poetic Licence said:
A sense is this love, is this the relationship I want and dream of or is this one down to experiance, nicely expressed and written
May 30th, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
A sense is this love, is this the relationship I want and dream of or is this one down to experiance, nicely expressed and written
May 30th, 2025 06:29
\"Temporary Melody\"
sorenbarrett said:
Several metaphors that give the message to me of the fleeting nature of love and the not being ready at the moment for commitment. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Several metaphors that give the message to me of the fleeting nature of love and the not being ready at the moment for commitment. Nicely written
May 30th, 2025 04:50
\"Stars Beyond Reach\"
NafisaSB said:
lovely combination of the earthly and the supernatural - i hope the bonding occurs soon
May 28th, 2025 01:58
NafisaSB said:
lovely combination of the earthly and the supernatural - i hope the bonding occurs soon
May 28th, 2025 01:58
\"Faceless But FELT\"
sorenbarrett said:
Mystery and a sense of darkness accompany this poem. It is seductive in a dreamlike way. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
Mystery and a sense of darkness accompany this poem. It is seductive in a dreamlike way. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 14:45
\"Faceless But FELT\"
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write leaving the reader to ponder who it is and relatable. Is he something yet to happen or something that has already happened, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write leaving the reader to ponder who it is and relatable. Is he something yet to happen or something that has already happened, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 11:26
\"Threads of Fate\"
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor that is reminiscent of Greek mythology and Moirai that spun the threads of fate. Very nicely written
May 26th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor that is reminiscent of Greek mythology and Moirai that spun the threads of fate. Very nicely written
May 26th, 2025 04:15
\"Threads of Fate\"
Poetic Licence said:
I like the read, life is like a thousand threads and they can get messy, but they end up making the bigger picture, nicely written and expressed
May 26th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
I like the read, life is like a thousand threads and they can get messy, but they end up making the bigger picture, nicely written and expressed
May 26th, 2025 02:24
\"Stars Beyond Reach\"
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write, very enjoyable to read
May 23rd, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write, very enjoyable to read
May 23rd, 2025 05:50
\"Stars Beyond Reach\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where the cosmos becomes part of the metaphor of chase. Lovely
May 23rd, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where the cosmos becomes part of the metaphor of chase. Lovely
May 23rd, 2025 05:14
\"Stars Beyond Reach\"
Soman Ragavan said:
This is sure a successful poem, written from inspiration of a rare kind. We see the image of the poet chasing after the love of which he is a slave. He is caught in an orbit and keeps trying to rendez-vous with his love. From the earth, he has launched himself into orbit, in pursuit of his love that has gone away from him.
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May 23rd, 2025 02:40
Soman Ragavan said:
This is sure a successful poem, written from inspiration of a rare kind. We see the image of the poet chasing after the love of which he is a slave. He is caught in an orbit and keeps trying to rendez-vous with his love. From the earth, he has launched himself into orbit, in pursuit of his love that has gone away from him.
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May 23rd, 2025 02:40
\"Destiny Plot Twist\"
sorenbarrett said:
Each has their own view on poetry but to me it comes from the heart and pain and an existential search is often needed to kindle the fire but I suppose joyful bliss might substitute. Extreme emotions bring out extreme expressions and like my steaks I like my poems raw not overcooked.
May 4th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Each has their own view on poetry but to me it comes from the heart and pain and an existential search is often needed to kindle the fire but I suppose joyful bliss might substitute. Extreme emotions bring out extreme expressions and like my steaks I like my poems raw not overcooked.
May 4th, 2025 04:47
\"The Art of Eye Contact\"
Mourgana of the Fey said:
For me the first line already drew me in, the poem beholds its sense of mystery though it tells a tale or tales. It beholds the veils that are wrapped over the wordings. I enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 01:31
Mourgana of the Fey said:
For me the first line already drew me in, the poem beholds its sense of mystery though it tells a tale or tales. It beholds the veils that are wrapped over the wordings. I enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 01:31
\"Eternal Love Laced in Loss.\"
sorenbarrett said:
A great write on missing and longing wishing and not finding. Lovely
April 16th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
A great write on missing and longing wishing and not finding. Lovely
April 16th, 2025 11:25
\"Eternal Love Laced in Loss.\"
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful write of how love may carry on living even after death, beautifully written and expressed, enjoyed
April 16th, 2025 10:48
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful write of how love may carry on living even after death, beautifully written and expressed, enjoyed
April 16th, 2025 10:48
\"Between love and friendship\"
Bird In Red said:
Hi!
I love this poem. I can kind of relate to it as I (for the second time) have fallen in love with a friend. It is a different kind of pain. I wish you luck. Love the rhymes btw
March 1st, 2025 13:38
Bird In Red said:
Hi!
I love this poem. I can kind of relate to it as I (for the second time) have fallen in love with a friend. It is a different kind of pain. I wish you luck. Love the rhymes btw
March 1st, 2025 13:38
\"Nature\'s Lullaby\"
Poetic Licence said:
This is a lovely poem taking you through all the wonders and beauty of nature, painting a wonderful image as you read through, really enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 06:34
Poetic Licence said:
This is a lovely poem taking you through all the wonders and beauty of nature, painting a wonderful image as you read through, really enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 06:34
\"Nature\'s Lullaby\"
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully expressed in wonderful images the beauty of this world is never ending. Nature in all her grandeur a most lovely poem.
February 14th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully expressed in wonderful images the beauty of this world is never ending. Nature in all her grandeur a most lovely poem.
February 14th, 2025 06:05
\"What is Poetry?\"
arqios said:
Reading and writing is a journey that reveals Poetry every step of the way! And you’re doing so, Today. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 06:35
arqios said:
Reading and writing is a journey that reveals Poetry every step of the way! And you’re doing so, Today. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 06:35
\"What is Poetry?\"
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece asking many questions, i would say a bit of every thin mentioned, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:17
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely piece asking many questions, i would say a bit of every thin mentioned, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 07:17
\"The Voice Within\"
Poetic Licence said:
A determination to go forward and be themselves regardless of other pressures or situations the encounter. A very positive and well written poem
January 12th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
A determination to go forward and be themselves regardless of other pressures or situations the encounter. A very positive and well written poem
January 12th, 2025 07:00
\"The Weight of Despair\"
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional poem clearly of some one struggling with issues in life and the possibility of self harming, a powerful write. If concerning the poet, please find some one to try to talk to, take care
January 11th, 2025 04:48
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting and emotional poem clearly of some one struggling with issues in life and the possibility of self harming, a powerful write. If concerning the poet, please find some one to try to talk to, take care
January 11th, 2025 04:48
\"Between love and friendship\"
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like someone has fallen in love with a friend, and a friend is all it will be, written a very touching way
January 8th, 2025 10:24
Poetic Licence said:
Sounds like someone has fallen in love with a friend, and a friend is all it will be, written a very touching way
January 8th, 2025 10:24
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