Comments received on poems by Bloomingcereus



Eternity
sorenbarrett said:

There is persistence in love and it can not be deterred. Nicely written quite romantic.

April 3rd, 2026 20:09

White Flower
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of mortal loss but not of love or memory where a flower serves as past hate and doubt but also present memory and promise. Most lovely

April 2nd, 2026 05:37

unWasted memory
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and wistful as well as nostalgic it remembers a past moment. Most lovely

March 26th, 2026 20:17

unWasted memory
Friendship said:

A lovely poem. Your poem explores themes of fleeting romance, nostalgia, and the desire for memories to endure beyond their moment.

March 26th, 2026 19:39

Just
sorenbarrett said:

At any age we need it and it calls in different forms. A wonderful write of time in a life. Well done

March 22nd, 2026 09:38

Just
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

March 22nd, 2026 09:27

Blinded
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wordplay in this poem leaves the reader wondering. Nicely done

March 20th, 2026 03:53

Blinded
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

wabi-sabi… great poem

March 20th, 2026 01:25

This side of me
sorenbarrett said:

A sad and lonely poem of isolation. Well written

March 18th, 2026 07:24

Winters feels in a Summer Bliss
Prachi Dalvi said:

So meaningful!! Lovely

March 17th, 2026 03:49

Winters feels in a Summer Bliss
sorenbarrett said:

This poem brims with nostalgia and longing. It uses metaphor to set the mood and is well done

March 17th, 2026 03:44

The pain
sorenbarrett said:

That is indeed pain to be bound to someone that does not love you. Nicely expressed

March 16th, 2026 03:05

Empath
sorenbarrett said:

It is one who is near sighted as to emotions unable to see the close inner self but able to see far off to others. Put on the lenses of self value and all will become clear. Lovely write.

June 25th, 2024 05:45

Empath
Alan R said:

Its beautiful, in. A sad way.... emotional dysregulation tuned me into something you describe very well....had to work a lot on myself since then...

June 25th, 2024 00:10

Forgotten
Tony36 said:

Love it

June 19th, 2024 17:17

Homewrecker
Ysa said:

this hit me really hard and I love how you interpret cancer as a said \"homewrecker\". I do hope your days brighter and to keep knowledge that they are by your side, in life and in death

June 18th, 2024 14:43

Homewrecker
Tony36 said:

Amazing

June 18th, 2024 08:55

Homewrecker
2781 said:

What a beautiful love story.
May he turn your mourning into dancing, and your sorrow into joy. Xxx

June 18th, 2024 07:56

Homewrecker
Cassie58 said:

That is when you have to find inner strength by the bucket load. In sickness and health. A beautiful write , but one that is also filled with sadness and trepidation for the future. I enjoyed reading you.

June 18th, 2024 07:54