Comments received on poems by akhilausman
TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 16:17
CONFESSION
2781 said:
I always like to read poems as real, although I understand that\'s not always the case-but the realism was there.
We are all victims. Empathy can heal.
August 1st, 2024 06:47
2781 said:
I always like to read poems as real, although I understand that\'s not always the case-but the realism was there.
We are all victims. Empathy can heal.
August 1st, 2024 06:47
CONFESSION
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the need for reassurance and looking to the past. There seems to be no forgiveness of self and letting go. A painful write
August 1st, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the need for reassurance and looking to the past. There seems to be no forgiveness of self and letting go. A painful write
August 1st, 2024 05:42
DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim is not that hard. A powerful write
August 1st, 2024 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim is not that hard. A powerful write
August 1st, 2024 05:32
