Comments received on poems by akhilausman
GENTLE PEOPLE
Caring dove said:
Those people who make us feel better
Lovely words
November 19th, 2024 11:40
Caring dove said:
Those people who make us feel better
Lovely words
November 19th, 2024 11:40
Walking each other Home
Caring dove said:
Little things like a smile can help . A very lovely writing .. nicely expressed
November 19th, 2024 11:39
Caring dove said:
Little things like a smile can help . A very lovely writing .. nicely expressed
November 19th, 2024 11:39
Worst Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
In the past I took to pulling my own it was more under my control
August 26th, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
In the past I took to pulling my own it was more under my control
August 26th, 2024 15:55
Worst Nightmare
Cheeky Missy said:
If THIS is about the nightmarish torture of visiting the dentist, you\'ve eloquently taken the soul of readers to the depths which augur such terrors.
August 26th, 2024 14:43
Cheeky Missy said:
If THIS is about the nightmarish torture of visiting the dentist, you\'ve eloquently taken the soul of readers to the depths which augur such terrors.
August 26th, 2024 14:43
AVENGERS ASSEMBLE.
sorenbarrett said:
Our fantasies always stalk our brains with what ifs hidden desires. So nicely written
August 25th, 2024 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Our fantasies always stalk our brains with what ifs hidden desires. So nicely written
August 25th, 2024 06:03
TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 16:17
CONFESSION
2781 said:
I always like to read poems as real, although I understand that\'s not always the case-but the realism was there.
We are all victims. Empathy can heal.
August 1st, 2024 06:47
2781 said:
I always like to read poems as real, although I understand that\'s not always the case-but the realism was there.
We are all victims. Empathy can heal.
August 1st, 2024 06:47
CONFESSION
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the need for reassurance and looking to the past. There seems to be no forgiveness of self and letting go. A painful write
August 1st, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the need for reassurance and looking to the past. There seems to be no forgiveness of self and letting go. A painful write
August 1st, 2024 05:42
DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim is not that hard. A powerful write
August 1st, 2024 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim is not that hard. A powerful write
August 1st, 2024 05:32
