Comments received on poems by Despina Nicole Cambosos
Natural Details
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the imagery DESPINA. And another lovely mention of Sister Moon. One of her many gifts is "Night Illumination". You don't call it a HAIKU - for me it is in the poetic category of MINI POEMS which are equally precious, Yours has 22 syllables (9 6 7) It is a Poem because you have divided it into 3 lines which emphasises the message in each line . L1 Moonlight seeping in - LOVELY L2. Fleeting fog mists (love them off the coast of Savannah - SPOOKY) L3. The illuminating moon - AWESOME. I could drown in this poetic perfection - Thanks for carin' an' sharin' - Your Friend BRIAN
June 10th, 2016 03:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the imagery DESPINA. And another lovely mention of Sister Moon. One of her many gifts is "Night Illumination". You don't call it a HAIKU - for me it is in the poetic category of MINI POEMS which are equally precious, Yours has 22 syllables (9 6 7) It is a Poem because you have divided it into 3 lines which emphasises the message in each line . L1 Moonlight seeping in - LOVELY L2. Fleeting fog mists (love them off the coast of Savannah - SPOOKY) L3. The illuminating moon - AWESOME. I could drown in this poetic perfection - Thanks for carin' an' sharin' - Your Friend BRIAN
June 10th, 2016 03:18
Night ❤️
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Thx Brian. We have shared sentiments about the moon.
June 9th, 2016 22:26
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Thx Brian. We have shared sentiments about the moon.
June 9th, 2016 22:26
Mixed Fabrics
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI NICOLE - TEXTILES ARE AWESOME - Love all those you mention and each one has a different handle and scent and emotion. Big Mamma Jamma's are perfection in every dimension. They well deserve every fabric and shade and style to do them justice ! Great poem - great structure - great content - great shape. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 14:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI NICOLE - TEXTILES ARE AWESOME - Love all those you mention and each one has a different handle and scent and emotion. Big Mamma Jamma's are perfection in every dimension. They well deserve every fabric and shade and style to do them justice ! Great poem - great structure - great content - great shape. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 14:00
Night ❤️
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful haiku
Nicole - Love the Moon - so pure
Thanks - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 13:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful haiku
Nicole - Love the Moon - so pure
Thanks - Yours BRIAN
June 9th, 2016 13:47
Natural Details
Severus Alexander said:
Lovely.. Wonderful imagery.
However, this is not a haiku.
It's a wonderful poem, but it's definitely not a haiku.
A haiku is traditionally written as seventeen *syllables* in lines of five, seven, and five.
Let this poem of mine serve as an example:
"Angels have four wings"
"With two they hide their faces"
"And with two they fly
~
The first line of this poem contains five syllables, the second seven, and the third five.
June 8th, 2016 12:51
Severus Alexander said:
Lovely.. Wonderful imagery.
However, this is not a haiku.
It's a wonderful poem, but it's definitely not a haiku.
A haiku is traditionally written as seventeen *syllables* in lines of five, seven, and five.
Let this poem of mine serve as an example:
"Angels have four wings"
"With two they hide their faces"
"And with two they fly
~
The first line of this poem contains five syllables, the second seven, and the third five.
June 8th, 2016 12:51
Love Yourself
rainbowhalo1 said:
you realy know how to express your innerbeing into words great to read.
March 30th, 2016 09:55
rainbowhalo1 said:
you realy know how to express your innerbeing into words great to read.
March 30th, 2016 09:55
Love Yourself
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Severus A.-thx for the great feedback and sharing your view of poetry. I absolutely agree with your analysis response. We share the same understanding regarding the power of poetry. It can tap into every life domain and generate limitless emotions. I'm glad my purpose and meaning was successfully captured through this piece. Please continue to check my posting for other topics, and I'm sure I'll be perusing your postings as well.
March 25th, 2016 10:56
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Severus A.-thx for the great feedback and sharing your view of poetry. I absolutely agree with your analysis response. We share the same understanding regarding the power of poetry. It can tap into every life domain and generate limitless emotions. I'm glad my purpose and meaning was successfully captured through this piece. Please continue to check my posting for other topics, and I'm sure I'll be perusing your postings as well.
March 25th, 2016 10:56
Love Yourself
Severus Alexander said:
Poetry is, first and foremost, a tool for introspection, a means by which we can express our hearts, minds, and souls. Through poetry, we acknowledge the beauty of the world around us. Through the poetic medium, we can share this beauty with others.
Therefore, the one true requirement for a good poem is that the author speaks from his or her heart, truthfully.
Poetry... Is as much about expressing beauty, as it is about making our ideas beautiful.
You have done a wonderful thing; you have taken the very spirit of human interaction, and relayed it through verse. It's witty, charming, wise, and ever so slightly melancholy.
Just the way I like it.
Bravo, Despina Nicole Cambosos.
Bravo.
March 24th, 2016 21:38
Severus Alexander said:
Poetry is, first and foremost, a tool for introspection, a means by which we can express our hearts, minds, and souls. Through poetry, we acknowledge the beauty of the world around us. Through the poetic medium, we can share this beauty with others.
Therefore, the one true requirement for a good poem is that the author speaks from his or her heart, truthfully.
Poetry... Is as much about expressing beauty, as it is about making our ideas beautiful.
You have done a wonderful thing; you have taken the very spirit of human interaction, and relayed it through verse. It's witty, charming, wise, and ever so slightly melancholy.
Just the way I like it.
Bravo, Despina Nicole Cambosos.
Bravo.
March 24th, 2016 21:38
