Comments received on poems by Vishakha
A silent conversation
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this write is about how we speak to people, the way we deliver those words and how they are received. Once we have something said to us, we then normally digest what they have said in our mind and in silence, i am probably a mile away, but that is what comes across to me. A very interesting and enjoyable read.
February 17th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this write is about how we speak to people, the way we deliver those words and how they are received. Once we have something said to us, we then normally digest what they have said in our mind and in silence, i am probably a mile away, but that is what comes across to me. A very interesting and enjoyable read.
February 17th, 2025 07:38
A silent conversation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings I feel there is a depth here that I can not fathom. It does sound of human insensitivity in our wording and its effects on others.
February 17th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings I feel there is a depth here that I can not fathom. It does sound of human insensitivity in our wording and its effects on others.
February 17th, 2025 05:19
A lesson to inflict
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that goes deep into the core of a relationship, and the communication and emotionally problems that can follow, well expressed.
February 14th, 2025 12:53
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that goes deep into the core of a relationship, and the communication and emotionally problems that can follow, well expressed.
February 14th, 2025 12:53
A lesson to inflict
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and emotions never adequately expressed are always a problem. Misunderstanding and problems from things left unsaid. A deep poem that speaks.
February 14th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and emotions never adequately expressed are always a problem. Misunderstanding and problems from things left unsaid. A deep poem that speaks.
February 14th, 2025 10:41
The heartwarming snippet
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but it sounds like a good start to the day, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:13
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but it sounds like a good start to the day, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:13
The night she saw those stars
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
A little something from this life
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Remember this December
Poetic Licence said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
The December lights
Poetic Licence said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
A rose so exposed
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “A rose so exposed”
“The raw feeling of getting exposed …” To publish is to get exposed. At the printing press where I print my books, there is poster saying that at such a place the published book goes even beyond the writer’s control. The dust on the book says how long the book has remained untouched.
“The pages, still fresh, untouched, carrying the weight of the words unspoken, unknown”
The book remains untouched. The messages are still there, inside. See my poem “I burn’d my books” on this site :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195012
See also one analysis of my poem by Blackbox AI :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195194 (Analysis by Blackbox AI)
Soman Ragavan.
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November 30th, 2024 01:03
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “A rose so exposed”
“The raw feeling of getting exposed …” To publish is to get exposed. At the printing press where I print my books, there is poster saying that at such a place the published book goes even beyond the writer’s control. The dust on the book says how long the book has remained untouched.
“The pages, still fresh, untouched, carrying the weight of the words unspoken, unknown”
The book remains untouched. The messages are still there, inside. See my poem “I burn’d my books” on this site :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195012
See also one analysis of my poem by Blackbox AI :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195194 (Analysis by Blackbox AI)
Soman Ragavan.
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November 30th, 2024 01:03
I never saw her again
sorenbarrett said:
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she saw the similarity between her and the author and not wanting to see more left. A powerful write.
October 21st, 2024 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she saw the similarity between her and the author and not wanting to see more left. A powerful write.
October 21st, 2024 11:38
Now it feels right
NafisaSB said:
like you, i have realized that all challenges need not be fought - acceptance is a peaceful way of going ahead
nice write
October 20th, 2024 23:14
NafisaSB said:
like you, i have realized that all challenges need not be fought - acceptance is a peaceful way of going ahead
nice write
October 20th, 2024 23:14
To be a flower
jim56 said:
like this well written and meaningful
good use of words lovely poem jim xx.
September 21st, 2024 13:19
jim56 said:
like this well written and meaningful
good use of words lovely poem jim xx.
September 21st, 2024 13:19
Ask more from life
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
An interesting perspective, which makes one give more thought to life. 👍
September 12th, 2024 10:08
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
An interesting perspective, which makes one give more thought to life. 👍
September 12th, 2024 10:08
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