Comments received on poems by Vishakha
The night she saw those stars
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
A little something from this life
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Remember this December
TobaniNataiella said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
TobaniNataiella said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
The December lights
TobaniNataiella said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
TobaniNataiella said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
A rose so exposed
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “A rose so exposed”
“The raw feeling of getting exposed …” To publish is to get exposed. At the printing press where I print my books, there is poster saying that at such a place the published book goes even beyond the writer’s control. The dust on the book says how long the book has remained untouched.
“The pages, still fresh, untouched, carrying the weight of the words unspoken, unknown”
The book remains untouched. The messages are still there, inside. See my poem “I burn’d my books” on this site :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195012
See also one analysis of my poem by Blackbox AI :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195194 (Analysis by Blackbox AI)
Soman Ragavan.
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November 30th, 2024 01:03
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “A rose so exposed”
“The raw feeling of getting exposed …” To publish is to get exposed. At the printing press where I print my books, there is poster saying that at such a place the published book goes even beyond the writer’s control. The dust on the book says how long the book has remained untouched.
“The pages, still fresh, untouched, carrying the weight of the words unspoken, unknown”
The book remains untouched. The messages are still there, inside. See my poem “I burn’d my books” on this site :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195012
See also one analysis of my poem by Blackbox AI :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195194 (Analysis by Blackbox AI)
Soman Ragavan.
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November 30th, 2024 01:03
I never saw her again
sorenbarrett said:
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she saw the similarity between her and the author and not wanting to see more left. A powerful write.
October 21st, 2024 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she saw the similarity between her and the author and not wanting to see more left. A powerful write.
October 21st, 2024 11:38
Now it feels right
NafisaSB said:
like you, i have realized that all challenges need not be fought - acceptance is a peaceful way of going ahead
nice write
October 20th, 2024 23:14
NafisaSB said:
like you, i have realized that all challenges need not be fought - acceptance is a peaceful way of going ahead
nice write
October 20th, 2024 23:14
To be a flower
jim56 said:
like this well written and meaningful
good use of words lovely poem jim xx.
September 21st, 2024 13:19
jim56 said:
like this well written and meaningful
good use of words lovely poem jim xx.
September 21st, 2024 13:19
Ask more from life
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
An interesting perspective, which makes one give more thought to life. 👍
September 12th, 2024 10:08
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
An interesting perspective, which makes one give more thought to life. 👍
September 12th, 2024 10:08
How do I say this to you?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful poem with amazing flow, good write Vishakha!
September 8th, 2024 17:31
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful poem with amazing flow, good write Vishakha!
September 8th, 2024 17:31
Now it feels right
Neilton said:
Great meaning behind that poem! Excellent work!!
September 6th, 2024 04:11
Neilton said:
Great meaning behind that poem! Excellent work!!
September 6th, 2024 04:11
Now it feels right
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said. This is the most positive thought and needs to be incorporated. Very enjoyable.
September 5th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said. This is the most positive thought and needs to be incorporated. Very enjoyable.
September 5th, 2024 06:00
Never back again
Dan Williams said:
Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.
September 4th, 2024 00:43
Dan Williams said:
Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.
September 4th, 2024 00:43
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