Comments received on poems by Vishakha



The night she saw those stars
TobaniNataiella said:

Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed

December 17th, 2024 11:09

The night she saw those stars
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 17th, 2024 10:55

If I tell you
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Lovely poem!

December 13th, 2024 13:21

A little something from this life
Ria_1005 said:

Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.

December 10th, 2024 08:41

If I tell you
Tony36 said:

Love it

December 5th, 2024 14:55

If I tell you
TobaniNataiella said:

A very enjoyable read

December 5th, 2024 09:53

Remember this December
TobaniNataiella said:

I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you

December 3rd, 2024 13:52

The December lights
Tony36 said:

Have a very merry Christmas, great write

November 30th, 2024 11:48

The December lights
Demar Desu said:

Happy birthday

November 30th, 2024 10:18

The December lights
TobaniNataiella said:

Hope you have a merry one, good read

November 30th, 2024 03:08

A rose so exposed
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem “A rose so exposed”
“The raw feeling of getting exposed …” To publish is to get exposed. At the printing press where I print my books, there is poster saying that at such a place the published book goes even beyond the writer’s control. The dust on the book says how long the book has remained untouched.

“The pages, still fresh, untouched, carrying the weight of the words unspoken, unknown”
The book remains untouched. The messages are still there, inside. See my poem “I burn’d my books” on this site :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195012

See also one analysis of my poem by Blackbox AI :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-195194 (Analysis by Blackbox AI)
Soman Ragavan.
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November 30th, 2024 01:03

A rose so exposed
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 20th, 2024 08:30

Remember me
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 11th, 2024 15:07

Boundaries
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 26th, 2024 07:43

Broken till awaken
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

October 24th, 2024 14:54

I never saw her again
sorenbarrett said:

Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she saw the similarity between her and the author and not wanting to see more left. A powerful write.

October 21st, 2024 11:38

Now it feels right
NafisaSB said:



October 20th, 2024 23:14

Now it feels right
NafisaSB said:

like you, i have realized that all challenges need not be fought - acceptance is a peaceful way of going ahead
nice write

October 20th, 2024 23:14

I never saw her again
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 20th, 2024 12:56

This realm in my dream
tallisman said:

Very introspective, compelling.

October 13th, 2024 15:15

See, what remains
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 24th, 2024 15:59

To be a flower
jim56 said:

like this well written and meaningful
good use of words lovely poem jim xx.

September 21st, 2024 13:19

Ask more from life
Saleh Ben Saleh said:

An interesting perspective, which makes one give more thought to life. 👍

September 12th, 2024 10:08

Yes, you
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 11th, 2024 15:41

Ask more from life
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 10th, 2024 14:36

Ask more from life
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Good flow, it really makes you think.

September 10th, 2024 14:34

How do I say this to you?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Beautiful poem with amazing flow, good write Vishakha!

September 8th, 2024 17:31

Now it feels right
Neilton said:

Great meaning behind that poem! Excellent work!!

September 6th, 2024 04:11

Now it feels right
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely said. This is the most positive thought and needs to be incorporated. Very enjoyable.

September 5th, 2024 06:00

Never back again
Dan Williams said:

Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.

September 4th, 2024 00:43

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