Comments received on poems by Vishakha
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NafisaSB said:
A piece that speaks of hidden pain beautifully. Well done
April 7th, 2026 03:27
NafisaSB said:
A piece that speaks of hidden pain beautifully. Well done
April 7th, 2026 03:27
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vishakha, “the dusty embedded like a shield / protecting the one unhealed”…that’s the line that anchors everything. It turns the whole piece inward in a really clear way. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vishakha, “the dusty embedded like a shield / protecting the one unhealed”…that’s the line that anchors everything. It turns the whole piece inward in a really clear way. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:10
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sorenbarrett said:
This is a psychologically deep write and the hiding of pain. Very nice wording and the bringing in words from other past famous poetry in such a meaningful manner. A fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is a psychologically deep write and the hiding of pain. Very nice wording and the bringing in words from other past famous poetry in such a meaningful manner. A fave
April 3rd, 2026 07:10
I don\'t see the depth
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 16:21
I don\'t see the depth
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording leads to an opening of thoughts. Well done
August 4th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording leads to an opening of thoughts. Well done
August 4th, 2025 15:18
Those who dig to hide themselves
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is deep in metaphor and speaks to me. Loved the image of the corner where truth bends as do the walls at 90 degrees. Uncovered layer of lies that stay never the same. So well stated of the nature of lies. I could go on and on. A very well thought out and emoted poem a fave
May 2nd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is deep in metaphor and speaks to me. Loved the image of the corner where truth bends as do the walls at 90 degrees. Uncovered layer of lies that stay never the same. So well stated of the nature of lies. I could go on and on. A very well thought out and emoted poem a fave
May 2nd, 2025 04:43
A wake-up call
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting write, nicely written, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
A positive and uplifting write, nicely written, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 11:34
A wake-up call
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and bright this poem sets the mood feeling so home like. It takes me back to childhood and times past. Most lovely
March 6th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and bright this poem sets the mood feeling so home like. It takes me back to childhood and times past. Most lovely
March 6th, 2025 10:02
To understand you is an understatement
Poetic Licence said:
A very caring write about a proper friendship, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A very caring write about a proper friendship, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 06:01
To understand you is an understatement
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a poem of friendship and is written in such a caring way. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a poem of friendship and is written in such a caring way. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 05:06
A silent conversation
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this write is about how we speak to people, the way we deliver those words and how they are received. Once we have something said to us, we then normally digest what they have said in our mind and in silence, i am probably a mile away, but that is what comes across to me. A very interesting and enjoyable read.
February 17th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
I feel this write is about how we speak to people, the way we deliver those words and how they are received. Once we have something said to us, we then normally digest what they have said in our mind and in silence, i am probably a mile away, but that is what comes across to me. A very interesting and enjoyable read.
February 17th, 2025 07:38
A silent conversation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings I feel there is a depth here that I can not fathom. It does sound of human insensitivity in our wording and its effects on others.
February 17th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings I feel there is a depth here that I can not fathom. It does sound of human insensitivity in our wording and its effects on others.
February 17th, 2025 05:19
A lesson to inflict
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that goes deep into the core of a relationship, and the communication and emotionally problems that can follow, well expressed.
February 14th, 2025 12:53
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that goes deep into the core of a relationship, and the communication and emotionally problems that can follow, well expressed.
February 14th, 2025 12:53
A lesson to inflict
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and emotions never adequately expressed are always a problem. Misunderstanding and problems from things left unsaid. A deep poem that speaks.
February 14th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and emotions never adequately expressed are always a problem. Misunderstanding and problems from things left unsaid. A deep poem that speaks.
February 14th, 2025 10:41
The heartwarming snippet
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but it sounds like a good start to the day, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:13
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but it sounds like a good start to the day, enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:13
The night she saw those stars
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little poem, really enjoyed
December 17th, 2024 11:09
A little something from this life
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Ria_1005 said:
Yet, in presence of all the beauty,
Only sadness surrounds me.
December 10th, 2024 08:41
Remember this December
Poetic Licence said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
I think the new year might well have a lot to say, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 3rd, 2024 13:52
The December lights
Poetic Licence said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
Hope you have a merry one, good read
November 30th, 2024 03:08
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