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I can SEE it
Meera Mere said:

\"But as I ascent it one can see a burnt smile

Filled up with a worry, a worry that piles\"
It\'s scary how much I relate to this poem....
.Amazing work~


September 10th, 2024 11:37

Lost Moment
MR.apocalypse said:

sometimes i also fel this way but i have not been able to over come this quite yet


September 9th, 2024 18:41

STUCK
Dan Williams said:

Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.

September 8th, 2024 00:49

STUCK
Atharvaux said:

Damn!! Right in the feels!

September 7th, 2024 06:12

STUCK
rrodriguez said:

So, if you awake up, you\'ve not stuck. But if you\'re still stuck, then you must fill your mind with better thoughts that\'ll make you unstuck. The writing flow and the thoughts are stuck.

September 6th, 2024 20:55

STUCK
Hornedcrow said:

The feeling of being stuck on a thought that you wish you could forget or get over with. I understand that feeling very well.

September 6th, 2024 15:07

DEAD INSIGHT
sorenbarrett said:

Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this poem.

September 5th, 2024 13:36

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