Comments received on poems by adnan it is
A Journey..
Meera Mere said:
But there were evenings tender and calm, and pockets heavy with silent cries,
Where someone was in a rush, and even time feared the ticking of the skies.
These line.........
The whole poem is too relatable~
Hope you\'re doing alright.....
September 16th, 2024 10:09
Meera Mere said:
But there were evenings tender and calm, and pockets heavy with silent cries,
Where someone was in a rush, and even time feared the ticking of the skies.
These line.........
The whole poem is too relatable~
Hope you\'re doing alright.....
September 16th, 2024 10:09
A Journey..
Soman Ragavan said:
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Do check out the following Hindi songs on YOUTUBE :
YOUTUBE links :
(a) Song “Zindagi ka safar.” Film “Safar,” 1970
Singer : Kishore Kumar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XOnMlK5WBY&pp=ygUQemluZGFnaSBrYSBzYWZhcg%3D%3D
(b) Song “Ye safar.” Film “1942 A love story.”
Singer : Shivaji Chattopdhyaya
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egGrrBhwwD8&pp=ygUZeWUgc2FmYXIgMTk0MiBhIGxvZSBzdG9yeQ%3D%3D
You say :
“…its destination unseen…”
Kishore Kumar, too, says :
Where we are going, no one knows, no one understands…”
Shivaji’s song is more optimistic. It says : don’t be sad, my friend, soon things will turn our for the better.
Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 15 September, 2024
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September 14th, 2024 21:52
Soman Ragavan said:
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Do check out the following Hindi songs on YOUTUBE :
YOUTUBE links :
(a) Song “Zindagi ka safar.” Film “Safar,” 1970
Singer : Kishore Kumar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XOnMlK5WBY&pp=ygUQemluZGFnaSBrYSBzYWZhcg%3D%3D
(b) Song “Ye safar.” Film “1942 A love story.”
Singer : Shivaji Chattopdhyaya
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egGrrBhwwD8&pp=ygUZeWUgc2FmYXIgMTk0MiBhIGxvZSBzdG9yeQ%3D%3D
You say :
“…its destination unseen…”
Kishore Kumar, too, says :
Where we are going, no one knows, no one understands…”
Shivaji’s song is more optimistic. It says : don’t be sad, my friend, soon things will turn our for the better.
Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 15 September, 2024
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September 14th, 2024 21:52
I can SEE it
sorenbarrett said:
Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the first blow. Freedom is little understood and all actions have consequences.
September 14th, 2024 03:09
sorenbarrett said:
Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the first blow. Freedom is little understood and all actions have consequences.
September 14th, 2024 03:09
Safar. (Hindi)
Soman Ragavan said:
Please kindly post an English translation. Thank you.
September 14th, 2024 01:50
Soman Ragavan said:
Please kindly post an English translation. Thank you.
September 14th, 2024 01:50
Growing up is w-i-r-e-d
Meera Mere said:
I wake up,
no need to hurry,
just the sun and me,
moving slowly.
No ticking clocks,
no deadlines.
I breathe deep,
sky close,
wind at my back,
path open.
The day’s a quiet tune,
and I drift along.
Laughter flows,
soft like sea waves,
smiles appear without effort,
hugs are light,
just warmth,
breaking the silence.
Maybe growing up
isn’t about fighting,
but feeling part of this world,
Letting my mind roam free,
finding peace in just being.
September 14th, 2024 01:02
Meera Mere said:
I wake up,
no need to hurry,
just the sun and me,
moving slowly.
No ticking clocks,
no deadlines.
I breathe deep,
sky close,
wind at my back,
path open.
The day’s a quiet tune,
and I drift along.
Laughter flows,
soft like sea waves,
smiles appear without effort,
hugs are light,
just warmth,
breaking the silence.
Maybe growing up
isn’t about fighting,
but feeling part of this world,
Letting my mind roam free,
finding peace in just being.
September 14th, 2024 01:02
Safar. (Hindi)
Meera Mere said:
That was so beautiful....
Truly, safar shayad kabhi khatam nahi hota, bas manzil badalti rehti hai~
September 14th, 2024 00:34
Meera Mere said:
That was so beautiful....
Truly, safar shayad kabhi khatam nahi hota, bas manzil badalti rehti hai~
September 14th, 2024 00:34
I can SEE it
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to break the rusty cage?
Guess I need to consult with a sage!
September 10th, 2024 18:44
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to break the rusty cage?
Guess I need to consult with a sage!
September 10th, 2024 18:44
I can SEE it
Meera Mere said:
\"But as I ascent it one can see a burnt smile
Filled up with a worry, a worry that piles\"
It\'s scary how much I relate to this poem....
.Amazing work~
September 10th, 2024 11:37
Meera Mere said:
\"But as I ascent it one can see a burnt smile
Filled up with a worry, a worry that piles\"
It\'s scary how much I relate to this poem....
.Amazing work~
September 10th, 2024 11:37
Lost Moment
MR.apocalypse said:
sometimes i also fel this way but i have not been able to over come this quite yet
September 9th, 2024 18:41
MR.apocalypse said:
sometimes i also fel this way but i have not been able to over come this quite yet
September 9th, 2024 18:41
STUCK
Dan Williams said:
Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
September 8th, 2024 00:49
Dan Williams said:
Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
September 8th, 2024 00:49
STUCK
rrodriguez said:
So, if you awake up, you\'ve not stuck. But if you\'re still stuck, then you must fill your mind with better thoughts that\'ll make you unstuck. The writing flow and the thoughts are stuck.
September 6th, 2024 20:55
rrodriguez said:
So, if you awake up, you\'ve not stuck. But if you\'re still stuck, then you must fill your mind with better thoughts that\'ll make you unstuck. The writing flow and the thoughts are stuck.
September 6th, 2024 20:55
STUCK
Hornedcrow said:
The feeling of being stuck on a thought that you wish you could forget or get over with. I understand that feeling very well.
September 6th, 2024 15:07
Hornedcrow said:
The feeling of being stuck on a thought that you wish you could forget or get over with. I understand that feeling very well.
September 6th, 2024 15:07
DEAD INSIGHT
sorenbarrett said:
Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this poem.
September 5th, 2024 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this poem.
September 5th, 2024 13:36
