Comments received on poems by adnan it is
Raste se Raah tak ..(Hindi)
peet said:
Just forgot to tell you that this can be converted into a ghazal if you are lucky to find a singer like Pankaj Udhas. Great words again.
October 11th, 2024 13:56
peet said:
Just forgot to tell you that this can be converted into a ghazal if you are lucky to find a singer like Pankaj Udhas. Great words again.
October 11th, 2024 13:56
Raste se Raah tak ..(Hindi)
peet said:
Lovely words. You may loose the feel that might get lost in translation. Keep writing,
October 11th, 2024 13:55
peet said:
Lovely words. You may loose the feel that might get lost in translation. Keep writing,
October 11th, 2024 13:55
अलग आसमा।
Meera Mere said:
It\'s a story about love no more....
Or maybe the love that once existed???
Beautiful poem truly but the last two lines stole the show.
Looking forwards for more of ur poems....
October 6th, 2024 22:27
Meera Mere said:
It\'s a story about love no more....
Or maybe the love that once existed???
Beautiful poem truly but the last two lines stole the show.
Looking forwards for more of ur poems....
October 6th, 2024 22:27
A new sky
Meera Mere said:
Beautiful poem seriously....
The last lines- People ask \"What mistake was yours, why this pain?\"
I just brought the sky down to meet the earth again.
October 6th, 2024 22:23
Meera Mere said:
Beautiful poem seriously....
The last lines- People ask \"What mistake was yours, why this pain?\"
I just brought the sky down to meet the earth again.
October 6th, 2024 22:23
Night changes
Meera Mere said:
Sometimes things change for better....
It might not make sense today but maybe someday?
Amazing poem truly and especially the line- The moments of remembering moments ends with a \'hey\'
Can\'t get over it.....
October 1st, 2024 08:18
Meera Mere said:
Sometimes things change for better....
It might not make sense today but maybe someday?
Amazing poem truly and especially the line- The moments of remembering moments ends with a \'hey\'
Can\'t get over it.....
October 1st, 2024 08:18
Markets of peace..
Dan Williams said:
So sad, so true. Peace has drifted for sure. Nice work.
September 30th, 2024 00:44
Dan Williams said:
So sad, so true. Peace has drifted for sure. Nice work.
September 30th, 2024 00:44
Sukoon ke bazaar. (Hindi)
Meera Mere said:
Vo insan qb shayad khud kho gaya hai
This line.....
Beautiful poem 💖
Hindi poem written by your are really really good.
Looking forward for more....
September 28th, 2024 19:52
Meera Mere said:
Vo insan qb shayad khud kho gaya hai
This line.....
Beautiful poem 💖
Hindi poem written by your are really really good.
Looking forward for more....
September 28th, 2024 19:52
Sukoon ke bazaar. (Hindi)
Meera Mere said:
Vo insan qb shayad khud kho gaya hai
This line.....
Beautiful poem 💖
Hindi poem written by your are really really good.
Looking forward for more....
September 28th, 2024 19:52
Meera Mere said:
Vo insan qb shayad khud kho gaya hai
This line.....
Beautiful poem 💖
Hindi poem written by your are really really good.
Looking forward for more....
September 28th, 2024 19:52
Uljhe haalat..(Hindi)
Demar Desu said:
Update me when English translation is out please
September 22nd, 2024 13:35
Demar Desu said:
Update me when English translation is out please
September 22nd, 2024 13:35
Chalo ajj chand ko neecha dikhae. (Hindi)
Meera Mere said:
Not just her beauty but the way describe her makes her even prettier.
\"Or vo ankho ki kya baat karu jo batte bhula deti he
Or shikayat bhi to kya karu vo ankhe hi bata deti he
Ab baato me kaha tumhe inki nazakat batae\"
I don\'t have words, it\'s just too good.
Looking forward to read more hindi poems from you-
September 20th, 2024 22:32
Meera Mere said:
Not just her beauty but the way describe her makes her even prettier.
\"Or vo ankho ki kya baat karu jo batte bhula deti he
Or shikayat bhi to kya karu vo ankhe hi bata deti he
Ab baato me kaha tumhe inki nazakat batae\"
I don\'t have words, it\'s just too good.
Looking forward to read more hindi poems from you-
September 20th, 2024 22:32
A new MOON
Meera Mere said:
What can I say of those eyes so bright
They speak so much and yet so slight
Beautiful poem adnan it is!!!
September 20th, 2024 10:16
Meera Mere said:
What can I say of those eyes so bright
They speak so much and yet so slight
Beautiful poem adnan it is!!!
September 20th, 2024 10:16
A Journey..
Meera Mere said:
But there were evenings tender and calm, and pockets heavy with silent cries,
Where someone was in a rush, and even time feared the ticking of the skies.
These line.........
The whole poem is too relatable~
Hope you\'re doing alright.....
September 16th, 2024 10:09
Meera Mere said:
But there were evenings tender and calm, and pockets heavy with silent cries,
Where someone was in a rush, and even time feared the ticking of the skies.
These line.........
The whole poem is too relatable~
Hope you\'re doing alright.....
September 16th, 2024 10:09
A Journey..
Soman Ragavan said:
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Do check out the following Hindi songs on YOUTUBE :
YOUTUBE links :
(a) Song “Zindagi ka safar.” Film “Safar,” 1970
Singer : Kishore Kumar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XOnMlK5WBY&pp=ygUQemluZGFnaSBrYSBzYWZhcg%3D%3D
(b) Song “Ye safar.” Film “1942 A love story.”
Singer : Shivaji Chattopdhyaya
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egGrrBhwwD8&pp=ygUZeWUgc2FmYXIgMTk0MiBhIGxvZSBzdG9yeQ%3D%3D
You say :
“…its destination unseen…”
Kishore Kumar, too, says :
Where we are going, no one knows, no one understands…”
Shivaji’s song is more optimistic. It says : don’t be sad, my friend, soon things will turn our for the better.
Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 15 September, 2024
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September 14th, 2024 21:52
Soman Ragavan said:
•
Do check out the following Hindi songs on YOUTUBE :
YOUTUBE links :
(a) Song “Zindagi ka safar.” Film “Safar,” 1970
Singer : Kishore Kumar
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XOnMlK5WBY&pp=ygUQemluZGFnaSBrYSBzYWZhcg%3D%3D
(b) Song “Ye safar.” Film “1942 A love story.”
Singer : Shivaji Chattopdhyaya
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=egGrrBhwwD8&pp=ygUZeWUgc2FmYXIgMTk0MiBhIGxvZSBzdG9yeQ%3D%3D
You say :
“…its destination unseen…”
Kishore Kumar, too, says :
Where we are going, no one knows, no one understands…”
Shivaji’s song is more optimistic. It says : don’t be sad, my friend, soon things will turn our for the better.
Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 15 September, 2024
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September 14th, 2024 21:52
I can SEE it
sorenbarrett said:
Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the first blow. Freedom is little understood and all actions have consequences.
September 14th, 2024 03:09
sorenbarrett said:
Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the first blow. Freedom is little understood and all actions have consequences.
September 14th, 2024 03:09
Safar. (Hindi)
Soman Ragavan said:
Please kindly post an English translation. Thank you.
September 14th, 2024 01:50
Soman Ragavan said:
Please kindly post an English translation. Thank you.
September 14th, 2024 01:50
Growing up is w-i-r-e-d
Meera Mere said:
I wake up,
no need to hurry,
just the sun and me,
moving slowly.
No ticking clocks,
no deadlines.
I breathe deep,
sky close,
wind at my back,
path open.
The day’s a quiet tune,
and I drift along.
Laughter flows,
soft like sea waves,
smiles appear without effort,
hugs are light,
just warmth,
breaking the silence.
Maybe growing up
isn’t about fighting,
but feeling part of this world,
Letting my mind roam free,
finding peace in just being.
September 14th, 2024 01:02
Meera Mere said:
I wake up,
no need to hurry,
just the sun and me,
moving slowly.
No ticking clocks,
no deadlines.
I breathe deep,
sky close,
wind at my back,
path open.
The day’s a quiet tune,
and I drift along.
Laughter flows,
soft like sea waves,
smiles appear without effort,
hugs are light,
just warmth,
breaking the silence.
Maybe growing up
isn’t about fighting,
but feeling part of this world,
Letting my mind roam free,
finding peace in just being.
September 14th, 2024 01:02
Safar. (Hindi)
Meera Mere said:
That was so beautiful....
Truly, safar shayad kabhi khatam nahi hota, bas manzil badalti rehti hai~
September 14th, 2024 00:34
Meera Mere said:
That was so beautiful....
Truly, safar shayad kabhi khatam nahi hota, bas manzil badalti rehti hai~
September 14th, 2024 00:34
I can SEE it
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to break the rusty cage?
Guess I need to consult with a sage!
September 10th, 2024 18:44
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to break the rusty cage?
Guess I need to consult with a sage!
September 10th, 2024 18:44
I can SEE it
Meera Mere said:
\"But as I ascent it one can see a burnt smile
Filled up with a worry, a worry that piles\"
It\'s scary how much I relate to this poem....
.Amazing work~
September 10th, 2024 11:37
Meera Mere said:
\"But as I ascent it one can see a burnt smile
Filled up with a worry, a worry that piles\"
It\'s scary how much I relate to this poem....
.Amazing work~
September 10th, 2024 11:37
Lost Moment
MR.apocalypse said:
sometimes i also fel this way but i have not been able to over come this quite yet
September 9th, 2024 18:41
MR.apocalypse said:
sometimes i also fel this way but i have not been able to over come this quite yet
September 9th, 2024 18:41
STUCK
Dan Williams said:
Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
September 8th, 2024 00:49
Dan Williams said:
Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
September 8th, 2024 00:49
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