Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
Roller Skating Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Roller Skating Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
to the thoughts that die
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
the fade haircut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
Violence vs Non-Violence
sorenbarrett said:
What a great senryu this is most lovely
April 3rd, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
What a great senryu this is most lovely
April 3rd, 2025 08:21
I MISS YOU RIN!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope she\'s doing well and we hear from her soon! Wonderful tribute/check-in in haiku. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope she\'s doing well and we hear from her soon! Wonderful tribute/check-in in haiku. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:34
I MISS YOU RIN!
sorenbarrett said:
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33
$38.58 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
$38.58 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
Poetry for Plants
sorenbarrett said:
Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice write.
March 30th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice write.
March 30th, 2025 08:45
Consumerism Mind Control
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in three words! Well done bro!
March 29th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in three words! Well done bro!
March 29th, 2025 10:58
Consumerism Mind Control
sorenbarrett said:
Must be another telemarketer, or my credit card company . Another fun read.
March 29th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Must be another telemarketer, or my credit card company . Another fun read.
March 29th, 2025 04:36
Tilling or no tilling
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you I do some and it is not an easy task. i believe most people would rather pay to eat artificial fertilizer and pesticides with waxed produce and hormone pumped meat than do their own. A sad state of affairs. Good write
March 22nd, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you I do some and it is not an easy task. i believe most people would rather pay to eat artificial fertilizer and pesticides with waxed produce and hormone pumped meat than do their own. A sad state of affairs. Good write
March 22nd, 2025 08:13
Capitalism in Crisis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound question that has no answer? We are figuring this out in real time. Great write, my friend, as always! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound question that has no answer? We are figuring this out in real time. Great write, my friend, as always! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:47
Capitalism in Crisis
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been having this thought! Does anyone really want to help or is it just because we get paid for it.
Keep up the write
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:51
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been having this thought! Does anyone really want to help or is it just because we get paid for it.
Keep up the write
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:51
Capitalism in Crisis
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
March 19th, 2025 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
March 19th, 2025 20:01
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