Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Beauty of Living
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Beauty of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Beauty of Living
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
$1.86 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
$1.86 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
Life in America
sorenbarrett said:
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17
Life in America
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know it! 💯 Short, sweet, to the point and true!
January 13th, 2025 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know it! 💯 Short, sweet, to the point and true!
January 13th, 2025 09:36
I need to get rich
sorenbarrett said:
Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
January 12th, 2025 20:39
sorenbarrett said:
Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
January 12th, 2025 20:39
People over Profit
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
People over Profit
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
People over Profit
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
People over Profit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
I love women
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
I love women
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
Cayenne
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Cayenne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
Cayenne
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
January 9th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
January 9th, 2025 07:18
I don’t go out at night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu my friend! Well done on this! There\'s a lot of different thoughts that come to mind with this poem and multiple ways it can be interpreted as I see it. The beauty of simplicity and the beauty of the Senryu come through in profoundly deep ways. Well done, bro! ❤️
January 8th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu my friend! Well done on this! There\'s a lot of different thoughts that come to mind with this poem and multiple ways it can be interpreted as I see it. The beauty of simplicity and the beauty of the Senryu come through in profoundly deep ways. Well done, bro! ❤️
January 8th, 2025 07:23
I don’t go out at night
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
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sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Video Games!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Video Games!
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
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