Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Poverty & Peace
TobaniNataiella said:
Poverty heightens resentment, wealth reduces opposition, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:54
TobaniNataiella said:
Poverty heightens resentment, wealth reduces opposition, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 01:54
Poverty & Peace
sorenbarrett said:
A true statement put in plain words, Well written,
December 20th, 2024 19:58
sorenbarrett said:
A true statement put in plain words, Well written,
December 20th, 2024 19:58
Poverty & Peace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...yes...how power affords the privilege of \"peace\". Not a lasting peace of course...and it is only ever a \"peace\" for some, always maintained by force or the threat of force...but yeah. Your poem here, bro 🤯 Well done! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 18:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...yes...how power affords the privilege of \"peace\". Not a lasting peace of course...and it is only ever a \"peace\" for some, always maintained by force or the threat of force...but yeah. Your poem here, bro 🤯 Well done! 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 18:31
conservation of momentum
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! You know the rules...and of course...rules are made to be broken! Love that spirit bro! I also love this haiku and agree with your assessment that nothing is outside of nature. Just because something is beyond our understanding does not mean it is unnatural. So yeah...💯 Well put. Now, keep breaking those fucking rules! LOL!
December 19th, 2024 16:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! You know the rules...and of course...rules are made to be broken! Love that spirit bro! I also love this haiku and agree with your assessment that nothing is outside of nature. Just because something is beyond our understanding does not mean it is unnatural. So yeah...💯 Well put. Now, keep breaking those fucking rules! LOL!
December 19th, 2024 16:15
conservation of momentum
TobaniNataiella said:
Interesting read, we should behave as we are all one, but do we?, enjoyed the read
December 19th, 2024 14:37
TobaniNataiella said:
Interesting read, we should behave as we are all one, but do we?, enjoyed the read
December 19th, 2024 14:37
conservation of momentum
sorenbarrett said:
You have a good point and I agree categories are made by man and to be broken. A marvelous Haiku
December 19th, 2024 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
You have a good point and I agree categories are made by man and to be broken. A marvelous Haiku
December 19th, 2024 14:25
New York City
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…NYC. Fun to visit, happy to not live there.
Anyway, wonderful poem my friend! Hope the trip went well!
December 18th, 2024 17:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…NYC. Fun to visit, happy to not live there.
Anyway, wonderful poem my friend! Hope the trip went well!
December 18th, 2024 17:52
New York City
TobaniNataiella said:
Reminder of home is always home, enjoyed the read
December 18th, 2024 05:14
TobaniNataiella said:
Reminder of home is always home, enjoyed the read
December 18th, 2024 05:14
New York City
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
New York City
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
$0.01 in my bank account
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
The Prophet’s Eye
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
$0.01 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
in the mood for love
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
in the mood for love
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
in the mood for love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
in the mood for love
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
I hate everything
TobaniNataiella said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
TobaniNataiella said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
I hate everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
The Prophet’s Eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
The Prophet’s Eye
TobaniNataiella said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
TobaniNataiella said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
The Prophet’s Eye
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
Today a person begged
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
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