Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
in sickness, health and boredom
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult question in that it changes with my mood and the time of day as well whether main course of desert
June 22nd, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult question in that it changes with my mood and the time of day as well whether main course of desert
June 22nd, 2026 20:23
how I long for her…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us know what it feels like when distance seems much larger than the miles involved. Those are the moments when time itself starts moving differently. I connected with this one, Demar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us know what it feels like when distance seems much larger than the miles involved. Those are the moments when time itself starts moving differently. I connected with this one, Demar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:13
how I long for her…
not_defined said:
To mourn is to remember, and to remember is to keep those gone in our presence forever. I wish you the best, mate.
June 21st, 2026 21:30
not_defined said:
To mourn is to remember, and to remember is to keep those gone in our presence forever. I wish you the best, mate.
June 21st, 2026 21:30
Losers vs. Winners
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, interchangeable indeed! Like asking who the winners were at the ForgetFreedom 250 MMA match at the orange\'s Albino House down on Pennsylvania Avenue! Oops...did that come out in my outside voice? 🤣 Love this poem, man! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, interchangeable indeed! Like asking who the winners were at the ForgetFreedom 250 MMA match at the orange\'s Albino House down on Pennsylvania Avenue! Oops...did that come out in my outside voice? 🤣 Love this poem, man! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 08:56
Losers vs. Winners
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu that lambasts the double agent where loyalty is at question. Nicely done Demar
June 20th, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu that lambasts the double agent where loyalty is at question. Nicely done Demar
June 20th, 2026 12:54
Please where’s your helmet!
Allie561 said:
I see what you’re saying here (pun intended). Seems like a simple fix if we can’t fix our perception to just fix our eyesight, but the truth is people will still believe what they want to believe. Good write Demar!
June 19th, 2026 13:58
Allie561 said:
I see what you’re saying here (pun intended). Seems like a simple fix if we can’t fix our perception to just fix our eyesight, but the truth is people will still believe what they want to believe. Good write Demar!
June 19th, 2026 13:58
Please where’s your helmet!
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read my friend but I heard that Lasik leads to future problems.
June 19th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read my friend but I heard that Lasik leads to future problems.
June 19th, 2026 09:41
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
Allie561 said:
This is a powerful idea Demar. Almost like we’re too ashamed to speak of the things once done that they’re not acknowledged. It’s a good thing to bring light to, and welcome back
June 18th, 2026 20:41
Allie561 said:
This is a powerful idea Demar. Almost like we’re too ashamed to speak of the things once done that they’re not acknowledged. It’s a good thing to bring light to, and welcome back
June 18th, 2026 20:41
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great to have you back, my bro. As for this gem...true story! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great to have you back, my bro. As for this gem...true story! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:44
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
sorenbarrett said:
Good to see you back. A thought provoking read
June 16th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Good to see you back. A thought provoking read
June 16th, 2026 19:02
to be black, blue and brown
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is sharp, confrontational, and painfully direct in exactly the way it needs to be. The fragmented opening already communicates the collapse of patience with systems and attitudes that continue to reduce people to suspicion and stereotype. And your note grounds the poem powerfully in lived experience...not as abstract commentary, but as the exhaustion of being repeatedly questioned, watched, and denied the simple freedom to exist peacefully in public space. “I can’t sit down on a bench for more than 25 minutes” says more about systemic mistrust than pages of explanation ever could. Angry, honest, and deeply human work, my friend. And welcome back! I\'ve missed you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is sharp, confrontational, and painfully direct in exactly the way it needs to be. The fragmented opening already communicates the collapse of patience with systems and attitudes that continue to reduce people to suspicion and stereotype. And your note grounds the poem powerfully in lived experience...not as abstract commentary, but as the exhaustion of being repeatedly questioned, watched, and denied the simple freedom to exist peacefully in public space. “I can’t sit down on a bench for more than 25 minutes” says more about systemic mistrust than pages of explanation ever could. Angry, honest, and deeply human work, my friend. And welcome back! I\'ve missed you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:01
to be black, blue and brown
arqios said:
Haven\'t seen you in a while. Good to have you back. 🙏🕊️
May 27th, 2026 19:44
arqios said:
Haven\'t seen you in a while. Good to have you back. 🙏🕊️
May 27th, 2026 19:44
to be black, blue and brown
sorenbarrett said:
A hard and vexing write of prejudice. Well done
May 27th, 2026 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
A hard and vexing write of prejudice. Well done
May 27th, 2026 12:12
and when I’m healed
marissa said:
Every closed door allows a new one to open,and honestly i need this advice myself!
May 20th, 2026 19:44
marissa said:
Every closed door allows a new one to open,and honestly i need this advice myself!
May 20th, 2026 19:44
and when I’m healed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, there’s something deeply calming in this…a belief that pain is not the final architecture of the self. “Allows room for more” leaves the poem open in such a human and hopeful way. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, there’s something deeply calming in this…a belief that pain is not the final architecture of the self. “Allows room for more” leaves the poem open in such a human and hopeful way. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:20
and when I’m healed
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A good write Demar
May 7th, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A good write Demar
May 7th, 2026 13:20
and when I’m healed
Katie B. said:
I\'ve really thought about it like this. Very astute. Getting rid of the pain only to make room for more well done
May 7th, 2026 11:55
Katie B. said:
I\'ve really thought about it like this. Very astute. Getting rid of the pain only to make room for more well done
May 7th, 2026 11:55
and when I’m hurt
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I guess I’ll be fine…” really stayed with me, Demar. That hesitation inside the reassurance says so much all by itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I guess I’ll be fine…” really stayed with me, Demar. That hesitation inside the reassurance says so much all by itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:03
with pulp please
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
What am I meant for?
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
Sometimes I hate myself
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
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