Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
and when I’m healed
marissa said:
Every closed door allows a new one to open,and honestly i need this advice myself!
May 20th, 2026 19:44
marissa said:
Every closed door allows a new one to open,and honestly i need this advice myself!
May 20th, 2026 19:44
and when I’m healed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, there’s something deeply calming in this…a belief that pain is not the final architecture of the self. “Allows room for more” leaves the poem open in such a human and hopeful way. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, there’s something deeply calming in this…a belief that pain is not the final architecture of the self. “Allows room for more” leaves the poem open in such a human and hopeful way. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:20
and when I’m healed
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A good write Demar
May 7th, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A good write Demar
May 7th, 2026 13:20
and when I’m healed
Katie B. said:
I\'ve really thought about it like this. Very astute. Getting rid of the pain only to make room for more well done
May 7th, 2026 11:55
Katie B. said:
I\'ve really thought about it like this. Very astute. Getting rid of the pain only to make room for more well done
May 7th, 2026 11:55
and when I’m hurt
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I guess I’ll be fine…” really stayed with me, Demar. That hesitation inside the reassurance says so much all by itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I guess I’ll be fine…” really stayed with me, Demar. That hesitation inside the reassurance says so much all by itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:03
with pulp please
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
What am I meant for?
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
Sometimes I hate myself
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
What am I meant for?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
What am I meant for?
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mmmmm distractions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Mmmmm distractions
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Mmmmm distractions
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
rest in peace to my cat
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
rest in peace to my cat
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
rest in peace to my cat
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
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