Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Three the Hard Way
Friendship said:
The poem also touches on personal struggles with debt, emphasizing the weight of financial burdens and the honor in fulfilling obligations.
August 17th, 2025 13:58
Friendship said:
The poem also touches on personal struggles with debt, emphasizing the weight of financial burdens and the honor in fulfilling obligations.
August 17th, 2025 13:58
Three the Hard Way
2781 said:
I sense a sad note? I wish I could help. Many men of meagre means could add up to a victory.
August 17th, 2025 08:22
2781 said:
I sense a sad note? I wish I could help. Many men of meagre means could add up to a victory.
August 17th, 2025 08:22
Three the Hard Way
Neville said:
Going out with a bang for sure .. but what a way to go .. Hope you change your mind ..Good luck regardless & write on ... please .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:30
Neville said:
Going out with a bang for sure .. but what a way to go .. Hope you change your mind ..Good luck regardless & write on ... please .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:30
Three the Hard Way
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very lovely, a triple offering of poems for the readers\' perusal, each charming, thought-provoking, and beautifully rendered with excellent and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 20:22
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very lovely, a triple offering of poems for the readers\' perusal, each charming, thought-provoking, and beautifully rendered with excellent and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 20:22
Three the Hard Way
Lorna said:
I love all the flowers in my garden and speak to them constantly........... you should keep writing........ that was lovely.
August 15th, 2025 06:57
Lorna said:
I love all the flowers in my garden and speak to them constantly........... you should keep writing........ that was lovely.
August 15th, 2025 06:57
Three the Hard Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth, dear brother! I am glad you will still be popping on and saying hi and...if you changer your mind...we\'ll be here ready to read and support. Or, I\'ll speak for me anywho! As for your poems, thy\'re a mix of tenderness and frustration…nurturing imagery set right alongside the weight of struggle. The contrast makes the plea at the end all the more human. Well expressed, my friend. Will be missing you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth, dear brother! I am glad you will still be popping on and saying hi and...if you changer your mind...we\'ll be here ready to read and support. Or, I\'ll speak for me anywho! As for your poems, thy\'re a mix of tenderness and frustration…nurturing imagery set right alongside the weight of struggle. The contrast makes the plea at the end all the more human. Well expressed, my friend. Will be missing you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:07
Three the Hard Way
sorenbarrett said:
Love the idea of cruelty to flowers. For years I have pushed the idea that plants as life forms deserve the same dignity as animals and in animals I include man although I think he ranks rather far down the scale. A good read Demar
August 14th, 2025 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love the idea of cruelty to flowers. For years I have pushed the idea that plants as life forms deserve the same dignity as animals and in animals I include man although I think he ranks rather far down the scale. A good read Demar
August 14th, 2025 05:41
why so poetic?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em coming...and I know you will! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em coming...and I know you will! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:02
why so poetic?
sorenbarrett said:
Those that are not philosophical are full of love or pain. Good one Demar made me think
August 13th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Those that are not philosophical are full of love or pain. Good one Demar made me think
August 13th, 2025 08:56
The light within us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
`Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
`Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:43
Poems of Passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:35
Poems of Passion
Poetic Licence said:
Can\'t do one without the other, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:16
Poetic Licence said:
Can\'t do one without the other, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:16
Poems of Passion
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed one must explore oneself to love oneself. Nicely said Demar
August 11th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed one must explore oneself to love oneself. Nicely said Demar
August 11th, 2025 06:24
economic animals
sorenbarrett said:
This one is mind provoking as most truths are
August 10th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
This one is mind provoking as most truths are
August 10th, 2025 08:28
generational _____
sorenbarrett said:
End of the line. Just make sure that you spend it all before you go and leave none for the government
August 9th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
End of the line. Just make sure that you spend it all before you go and leave none for the government
August 9th, 2025 11:48
alive again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aint\' that the truth bro! And yay! I can comment again! Woohoo! Hope all has been well while I\'ve been gone. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aint\' that the truth bro! And yay! I can comment again! Woohoo! Hope all has been well while I\'ve been gone. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:44
alive again
sorenbarrett said:
Specialist in haikus you have written another marvelous senryu my friend
August 8th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Specialist in haikus you have written another marvelous senryu my friend
August 8th, 2025 08:15
The Deepest American Belief
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
August 4th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
August 4th, 2025 11:55
The Deepest American Belief
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, and in a world my wise late father drilled into me as the opposite: \"NOTHING in life is fair.\"
August 4th, 2025 11:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, and in a world my wise late father drilled into me as the opposite: \"NOTHING in life is fair.\"
August 4th, 2025 11:42
Poor Credit
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am probably there now. A most identifiable write Demar
August 3rd, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am probably there now. A most identifiable write Demar
August 3rd, 2025 07:22
Ying Yang Yung
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
The House of the Setting Moon
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
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