Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
$0.00 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused by it. Good write.
April 15th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused by it. Good write.
April 15th, 2025 08:54
$0.00 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds rise! 😉 Forward looking is the only way. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds rise! 😉 Forward looking is the only way. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:05
Boogers on paper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank you for the laugh!
April 13th, 2025 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank you for the laugh!
April 13th, 2025 13:30
Boogers on paper
sorenbarrett said:
Dried fruit has its merits. A poem hard to read but it flows.
April 13th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Dried fruit has its merits. A poem hard to read but it flows.
April 13th, 2025 08:28
Love bounded
dimpy said:
there shouldn\'t be any conditions in love, but sometimes it\'s necessary...
April 13th, 2025 02:44
dimpy said:
there shouldn\'t be any conditions in love, but sometimes it\'s necessary...
April 13th, 2025 02:44
Love bounded
sorenbarrett said:
We call love many things or rather we call many things love and some of these come with conditions. For me what I call love has no conditions but I\'m not sure anyone has ever found, if so very few.
April 12th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
We call love many things or rather we call many things love and some of these come with conditions. For me what I call love has no conditions but I\'m not sure anyone has ever found, if so very few.
April 12th, 2025 10:26
Love bounded
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses yes, but there are endless examples where that is not the case, which gets to the heart of what pure love is. A most profound write that causes the reader to pause and ponder the nature of love. Wonderful job on this.
April 12th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses yes, but there are endless examples where that is not the case, which gets to the heart of what pure love is. A most profound write that causes the reader to pause and ponder the nature of love. Wonderful job on this.
April 12th, 2025 09:30
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Followed by:
Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse
Oh no! Not again.
\"The Man\" came in and robbed me
By letting me win.
Or something to that effect! 🤣 Forgive my imagination, but that is exactly the point I am getting from this brilliant poem. Wonderfully done, my friend! And all too true! 🌹
April 8th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Followed by:
Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse
Oh no! Not again.
\"The Man\" came in and robbed me
By letting me win.
Or something to that effect! 🤣 Forgive my imagination, but that is exactly the point I am getting from this brilliant poem. Wonderfully done, my friend! And all too true! 🌹
April 8th, 2025 18:29
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
Roller Skating Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Roller Skating Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
to the thoughts that die
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
the fade haircut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
Violence vs Non-Violence
sorenbarrett said:
What a great senryu this is most lovely
April 3rd, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
What a great senryu this is most lovely
April 3rd, 2025 08:21
I MISS YOU RIN!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope she\'s doing well and we hear from her soon! Wonderful tribute/check-in in haiku. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope she\'s doing well and we hear from her soon! Wonderful tribute/check-in in haiku. 🌹👏
April 2nd, 2025 08:34
I MISS YOU RIN!
sorenbarrett said:
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33
$38.58 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
$38.58 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
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