Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
bad dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
bad dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
Puerto Rico!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
Flight Benefits
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on said benefits. Corporations can really suck! Enjoy your vacay bro...as for Delta 🖕🤣
January 18th, 2025 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on said benefits. Corporations can really suck! Enjoy your vacay bro...as for Delta 🖕🤣
January 18th, 2025 11:36
Flight Benefits
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no equality or tagging out. Hope you have a wonderful vaction where ever you go
January 18th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no equality or tagging out. Hope you have a wonderful vaction where ever you go
January 18th, 2025 07:58
damn you networks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started on Safari! LOL! Feeling your frustration, bro! 🤬🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started on Safari! LOL! Feeling your frustration, bro! 🤬🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:03
damn you networks
sorenbarrett said:
What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen on various occasions and am booking no more safaries. Great write
January 17th, 2025 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen on various occasions and am booking no more safaries. Great write
January 17th, 2025 05:36
Aliens are coming!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!!! Space folk, baffoons, space folk...not human beings who happen to decide to move and live elsewhere on the same damn planet! 🤦♂️ That specification is brilliant, my friend, because the poem both piques outer space curiosity while critiquing our own human stupidity in the way we treat other human beings. What\'s more, aren\'t we all space folk, being that we live on a planet in outer space? Anyway, it\'s scientifically curious and social commentary at its best. Well done! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!!! Space folk, baffoons, space folk...not human beings who happen to decide to move and live elsewhere on the same damn planet! 🤦♂️ That specification is brilliant, my friend, because the poem both piques outer space curiosity while critiquing our own human stupidity in the way we treat other human beings. What\'s more, aren\'t we all space folk, being that we live on a planet in outer space? Anyway, it\'s scientifically curious and social commentary at its best. Well done! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:19
Aliens are coming!
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
January 16th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
January 16th, 2025 07:28
Beauty of Living
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Beauty of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Beauty of Living
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
$1.86 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
$1.86 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
Life in America
sorenbarrett said:
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17
Life in America
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know it! 💯 Short, sweet, to the point and true!
January 13th, 2025 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know it! 💯 Short, sweet, to the point and true!
January 13th, 2025 09:36
I need to get rich
sorenbarrett said:
Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
January 12th, 2025 20:39
sorenbarrett said:
Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
January 12th, 2025 20:39
People over Profit
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
People over Profit
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
People over Profit
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
People over Profit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
I love women
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
I love women
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
Cayenne
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Cayenne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
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