Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Life in motion
sorenbarrett said:
May the yin and the yang take you from both sides
August 17th, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
May the yin and the yang take you from both sides
August 17th, 2026 20:12
Life in motion
Allie561 said:
Life is always moving, seems like I’m going in the wrong lane! Nice write Demar
August 17th, 2026 19:59
Allie561 said:
Life is always moving, seems like I’m going in the wrong lane! Nice write Demar
August 17th, 2026 19:59
-$160.58 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is painfully funny. Financial disaster meets retail consolation, and somehow the purchase still wins the argument. Great little piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is painfully funny. Financial disaster meets retail consolation, and somehow the purchase still wins the argument. Great little piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:51
-$160.58 in my bank account
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t look upon it as a chain.
Look upon it as a love token.
As I often get told. What yours is mine, and what\'s mine I keep.
August 17th, 2026 14:24
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t look upon it as a chain.
Look upon it as a love token.
As I often get told. What yours is mine, and what\'s mine I keep.
August 17th, 2026 14:24
-$160.58 in my bank account
Allie561 said:
Well something nice is a good investment as long as you keep wearing it!
August 16th, 2026 21:46
Allie561 said:
Well something nice is a good investment as long as you keep wearing it!
August 16th, 2026 21:46
-$160.58 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the chain was worth it. Well said
August 16th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the chain was worth it. Well said
August 16th, 2026 20:44
Release the patents!
Fränz Müller said:
The tickets on my train of thought are far too expensive 😁
Great one!
August 15th, 2026 15:34
Fränz Müller said:
The tickets on my train of thought are far too expensive 😁
Great one!
August 15th, 2026 15:34
Release the patents!
sorenbarrett said:
Is pretty flower the kigo? and the dots the kireji? a good read my friend.
August 15th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Is pretty flower the kigo? and the dots the kireji? a good read my friend.
August 15th, 2026 07:07
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
James Michael said:
A mix of haiku and senryu. Nicely done. We always strive to understand things, in reality it’s a mystery, I believe. A fave!
August 14th, 2026 22:38
James Michael said:
A mix of haiku and senryu. Nicely done. We always strive to understand things, in reality it’s a mystery, I believe. A fave!
August 14th, 2026 22:38
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
Allie561 said:
This one is relatable Demar, blaming one thing and then realizing that you might’ve been wrong. I like to think I don’t do that but I do, wonderful job
August 14th, 2026 12:42
Allie561 said:
This one is relatable Demar, blaming one thing and then realizing that you might’ve been wrong. I like to think I don’t do that but I do, wonderful job
August 14th, 2026 12:42
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something painfully human about blaming the wrong thing, realizing it, and still knowing the real lesson hasn’t quite settled in yet. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something painfully human about blaming the wrong thing, realizing it, and still knowing the real lesson hasn’t quite settled in yet. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:51
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Demar with a cutting word as well
August 14th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Demar with a cutting word as well
August 14th, 2026 09:40
the saint is simply the sinner who keeps on trying
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar…this is brief, but it carries real weight. There’s uncertainty, fatigue, and still this quiet sense that our obligation to one another matters. I really connected with that. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar…this is brief, but it carries real weight. There’s uncertainty, fatigue, and still this quiet sense that our obligation to one another matters. I really connected with that. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:54
the saint is simply the sinner who keeps on trying
sorenbarrett said:
A question and a prayer nicely done
August 13th, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A question and a prayer nicely done
August 13th, 2026 10:15
good morning beautiful people
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A nice lovely poem to inspire, short n sweet
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A nice lovely poem to inspire, short n sweet
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:18
good morning beautiful people
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a beautiful little morning thought. There’s something deeply grounding about beginning the day remembering that dignity isn’t determined by the job we do, but by what we bring to it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a beautiful little morning thought. There’s something deeply grounding about beginning the day remembering that dignity isn’t determined by the job we do, but by what we bring to it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:39
I apologize for my harshness, brashness, and foolishness…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve definitely had those moments where the mouth gets moving before the internal brakes engage. 🤣 Owning it afterward is part of being human. I felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve definitely had those moments where the mouth gets moving before the internal brakes engage. 🤣 Owning it afterward is part of being human. I felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:16
good morning beautiful people
Allie561 said:
That was nicely put Demar! There’s nothing worse than a person who hates their job
August 12th, 2026 10:43
Allie561 said:
That was nicely put Demar! There’s nothing worse than a person who hates their job
August 12th, 2026 10:43
good morning beautiful people
Paul Bell said:
To all traffic wardens, this poem is for you.
Apart from the one who booked me. C\'mon I was only two days over my time.
August 12th, 2026 07:59
Paul Bell said:
To all traffic wardens, this poem is for you.
Apart from the one who booked me. C\'mon I was only two days over my time.
August 12th, 2026 07:59
I apologize for my harshness, brashness, and foolishness…
sorenbarrett said:
That is about the only thing that we have control over. Nicely said
August 11th, 2026 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
That is about the only thing that we have control over. Nicely said
August 11th, 2026 20:52
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
Allie561 said:
Well I think there’s room for both, and as for the title; If you believe you can achieve. This one is a fav of mine Demar
August 10th, 2026 11:54
Allie561 said:
Well I think there’s room for both, and as for the title; If you believe you can achieve. This one is a fav of mine Demar
August 10th, 2026 11:54
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar...apparently gratitude didn’t get the memo that it was supposed to eliminate wanting! 😂 I think there’s something healthy in allowing both to coexist: thankful for what is while remaining honest about what we still desire. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar...apparently gratitude didn’t get the memo that it was supposed to eliminate wanting! 😂 I think there’s something healthy in allowing both to coexist: thankful for what is while remaining honest about what we still desire. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:54
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
sorenbarrett said:
Ok Demar nothing wrong with a desire.
August 10th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Ok Demar nothing wrong with a desire.
August 10th, 2026 09:39
sex, sex, sex!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar! 😂 Nothing like deploying the oldest attention-grabber in the book and then immediately discovering you’ve lost control of the situation. That ending got me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 9th, 2026 05:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar! 😂 Nothing like deploying the oldest attention-grabber in the book and then immediately discovering you’ve lost control of the situation. That ending got me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 9th, 2026 05:44
And if I ever leave America
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful little declaration. There’s devotion here, but also responsibility…the sense that loving a place means staying engaged with it rather than simply walking away. This really connected with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful little declaration. There’s devotion here, but also responsibility…the sense that loving a place means staying engaged with it rather than simply walking away. This really connected with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:35
And if I ever leave America
sorenbarrett said:
A noble thought expressed here. Well done
August 8th, 2026 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
A noble thought expressed here. Well done
August 8th, 2026 15:19
And if I stay alive tomorrow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. So little said, yet it carries gratitude, fragility, and the determination to keep going. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. So little said, yet it carries gratitude, fragility, and the determination to keep going. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:38
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