Comments received on poems by Demar Desu



workers
sorenbarrett said:

Another great Senryu Demar nicely done

May 21st, 2025 12:23

we are soup
vicecream said:

Looove this one

May 20th, 2025 15:51

value of family
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting thought Demar.

May 20th, 2025 15:14

value of family
Muse of Calliope said:

Friends are just as valuable as blood-relatives, sometimes even more so. Great write

May 20th, 2025 13:56

we are soup
hzugman said:

Nice and concise.

May 19th, 2025 16:05

we are soup
sorenbarrett said:

I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well written and a fave

May 19th, 2025 06:45

Who is sending nukes?
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar

May 18th, 2025 04:55

I must pimp myself!
sorenbarrett said:

This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and for once get the jump on them but sadly any profit gained is still subject to taxation

May 17th, 2025 04:30

to be mixed in the USA!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 16th, 2025 20:53

1 day left to live
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Sleeping! πŸ’€ They say it is the best way to go! 🀣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🀣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 16th, 2025 20:35

1 day left to live
sorenbarrett said:

Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar

May 16th, 2025 12:14

to be mixed in the USA!
vicecream said:

Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly

May 15th, 2025 14:57

My best friend
vicecream said:

I love youuu

May 15th, 2025 11:43

to be mixed in the USA!
sorenbarrett said:

This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.

May 15th, 2025 05:33

Today I saw a tree fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 14th, 2025 11:31

Tycoon to be
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 14th, 2025 10:58

Today I saw a tree fall
sorenbarrett said:

I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.

May 14th, 2025 10:30

Tycoon to be
sorenbarrett said:

Another fun read Demar

May 13th, 2025 10:15

God, Universe and Nature
NafisaSB said:

happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless

May 13th, 2025 01:05

Politically Speaking
MLHnow said:

I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!

May 12th, 2025 12:35

Politically Speaking
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hear hear! Me too. LOL!

May 12th, 2025 08:41

Politically Speaking
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you, didn\'t need to. A fun read.

May 12th, 2025 04:39

My best friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. πŸŒΉπŸ‘ What\'s not to fave about that?

May 11th, 2025 07:44

My best friend
Salvia.S said:

Lovely write!!!

May 11th, 2025 05:34

My best friend
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done

May 11th, 2025 04:58

I am afraid
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 10th, 2025 15:29

I am afraid
sorenbarrett said:

So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave

May 10th, 2025 06:32

my taxes came!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🀣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

May 9th, 2025 09:28

my taxes came!
Poetic Licence said:

Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read

May 9th, 2025 06:24

my taxes came!
sorenbarrett said:

A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice

May 9th, 2025 04:33

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