Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Ying Yang Yung
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
The House of the Setting Moon
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
keeping it a buck
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur! BUY DEMAR\'S BOOK! I did! ❤️🙃 It rocks! As for your poem, excellent, my friend. Profoundly true.
June 13th, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur! BUY DEMAR\'S BOOK! I did! ❤️🙃 It rocks! As for your poem, excellent, my friend. Profoundly true.
June 13th, 2025 09:12
keeping it a buck
sorenbarrett said:
The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to work in their factories as cheap labor so they can compete with their other rich neighbor. But the rich have never held the help as equals. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to work in their factories as cheap labor so they can compete with their other rich neighbor. But the rich have never held the help as equals. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 03:56
it’s simple
sorenbarrett said:
Working for life can be taken two ways and makes this poem even more interesting. Loved it
June 12th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Working for life can be taken two ways and makes this poem even more interesting. Loved it
June 12th, 2025 05:37
Today I made a good decision
sorenbarrett said:
What a great thought expressed in few words
June 11th, 2025 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
What a great thought expressed in few words
June 11th, 2025 12:18
How can a monk own a gun?
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts here Demar. A lovely poem about the madness in the world.
June 10th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts here Demar. A lovely poem about the madness in the world.
June 10th, 2025 12:40
sometimes things will try you
vicecream said:
This is like when a song has a beat change in the middle and does a fire 2 in 1. Love this one
June 9th, 2025 22:24
vicecream said:
This is like when a song has a beat change in the middle and does a fire 2 in 1. Love this one
June 9th, 2025 22:24
sometimes things will try you
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies. Here here I say. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies. Here here I say. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 04:26
Social Conditioning #2
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely stated truth that how we are raised determines our later behavior. A key to domestication for animals and men.
June 7th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
A nicely stated truth that how we are raised determines our later behavior. A key to domestication for animals and men.
June 7th, 2025 13:08
how I met your mother
vicecream said:
The three strands of past present and future are braided here so wonderfully too.. I love you this is definitely a favorite ❤️
June 6th, 2025 20:00
vicecream said:
The three strands of past present and future are braided here so wonderfully too.. I love you this is definitely a favorite ❤️
June 6th, 2025 20:00
sometimes I hate
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem, its continued reproach results in a question that remains unresolved. Short and thought provoking.
June 5th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem, its continued reproach results in a question that remains unresolved. Short and thought provoking.
June 5th, 2025 04:14
how I met your mother
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a braid and a beautiful one at that. Lovely
June 4th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a braid and a beautiful one at that. Lovely
June 4th, 2025 04:08
$403.35 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well praise Jesus! I did a double take when I saw the title! Woohoo! And a resounding yeah on the message...though who am I to say anything: $1.45 in my bank account as we speak. 🤣😭🤷♂️ Love it bro! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well praise Jesus! I did a double take when I saw the title! Woohoo! And a resounding yeah on the message...though who am I to say anything: $1.45 in my bank account as we speak. 🤣😭🤷♂️ Love it bro! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:56
in New York City
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I get it. Leaving family should never have to be a reality, but in this world it is. Powerful poem!
May 28th, 2025 11:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I get it. Leaving family should never have to be a reality, but in this world it is. Powerful poem!
May 28th, 2025 11:40
$403.35 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems clear this one requires more thought. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems clear this one requires more thought. Well written
May 28th, 2025 07:27
in New York City
sorenbarrett said:
Another strong message in a Senryu well done Demar.
May 27th, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Another strong message in a Senryu well done Demar.
May 27th, 2025 05:30
partner in marriage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We are the deal\" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn\'t it? Well done on this, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We are the deal\" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn\'t it? Well done on this, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:23
Social Conditioning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:51
partner in marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar we deal with ourselves and sell ourselves we condemn prostitution but we all are whores. Excuse the harsh words but I felt it with this poem
May 26th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar we deal with ourselves and sell ourselves we condemn prostitution but we all are whores. Excuse the harsh words but I felt it with this poem
May 26th, 2025 04:55
Social Conditioning
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 05:27
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