Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Choc`O`Holic.
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my!!! Tidily rendered in rhymed couples with such irresistibly hearty humor, it\'s too good! Laden with expert imagery and a waltzing poignancy, oh, I love, love, LOVE it!!! Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my!!! Tidily rendered in rhymed couples with such irresistibly hearty humor, it\'s too good! Laden with expert imagery and a waltzing poignancy, oh, I love, love, LOVE it!!! Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:50
Choc`O`Holic.
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, but I do not like Cadbury\'s Creme Egg. Yet I do love me some candy at times, have a great weekend.
August 16th, 2025 08:37
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor, but I do not like Cadbury\'s Creme Egg. Yet I do love me some candy at times, have a great weekend.
August 16th, 2025 08:37
Choc`O`Holic.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of humor rolled into rhyme. You had me from Choco...the holic part just is a given! 🤣 Fun little snapshots, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of humor rolled into rhyme. You had me from Choco...the holic part just is a given! 🤣 Fun little snapshots, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 07:14
Choc`O`Holic.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I love the humor! The first one is playful and the funniest.
August 16th, 2025 05:41
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I love the humor! The first one is playful and the funniest.
August 16th, 2025 05:41
Heart of Relief.
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
One of the best poems I have read so far. One needs to read it twice or more to hear the voice speaking with otherworldly fire!
August 16th, 2025 05:35
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
One of the best poems I have read so far. One needs to read it twice or more to hear the voice speaking with otherworldly fire!
August 16th, 2025 05:35
Choc`O`Holic.
sorenbarrett said:
Two nougat nuggets for the poetic sweet tooth. Sugary fun for everyone. Loved them Tobani but like all such bites they ended too quickly
August 16th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Two nougat nuggets for the poetic sweet tooth. Sugary fun for everyone. Loved them Tobani but like all such bites they ended too quickly
August 16th, 2025 04:13
Heart of Relief.
arqios said:
This is dark, visceral, and unflinching, Natiella. It plunges into the depths of despair and the surrender of self to end unbearable suffering. Its imagery is raw; bone, blood, and the physical tearing out of grief and yet the final moment delivers a chilling kind of peace: harm is no longer possible. A haunting meditation on the cost of release.
August 15th, 2025 20:45
arqios said:
This is dark, visceral, and unflinching, Natiella. It plunges into the depths of despair and the surrender of self to end unbearable suffering. Its imagery is raw; bone, blood, and the physical tearing out of grief and yet the final moment delivers a chilling kind of peace: harm is no longer possible. A haunting meditation on the cost of release.
August 15th, 2025 20:45
Heart of Relief.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Yet another version of the infamous Dr. Faustus, perhaps one more readily digestible by this modern intellect. Macabre and ghastly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, rendered so vividly I well- nigh shiver instinctively. Alas! Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 12:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! Yet another version of the infamous Dr. Faustus, perhaps one more readily digestible by this modern intellect. Macabre and ghastly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, rendered so vividly I well- nigh shiver instinctively. Alas! Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 12:40
Aspersions.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
A little bit of everything and not too much of anything, the perfect balance but how to maintain this balance perfectly expressed in this very fine poem of yours. A conundrum indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:17
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
A little bit of everything and not too much of anything, the perfect balance but how to maintain this balance perfectly expressed in this very fine poem of yours. A conundrum indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:17
Heart of Relief.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. hang on!
Just went in for a 2nd dive
Rocked me to the core
Yet my tears ran dry
The next breath taken
Now I feel so alive
I need to free myself as you have described, with a flow that connects me back to my hive.
Endless appreciated with peace and respect
August 15th, 2025 10:30
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. hang on!
Just went in for a 2nd dive
Rocked me to the core
Yet my tears ran dry
The next breath taken
Now I feel so alive
I need to free myself as you have described, with a flow that connects me back to my hive.
Endless appreciated with peace and respect
August 15th, 2025 10:30
Heart of Relief.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, this is raw and visceral…you don’t hold back on the imagery or the weight of that deal with the devil. The closing line hits like a cold, final release. Very strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 15th, 2025 10:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, this is raw and visceral…you don’t hold back on the imagery or the weight of that deal with the devil. The closing line hits like a cold, final release. Very strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 15th, 2025 10:01
Loving Hate
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Can\'t agree more. Beautiful and uplifting
August 15th, 2025 06:26
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Can\'t agree more. Beautiful and uplifting
August 15th, 2025 06:26
Heart of Relief.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of torment where suicide is seen as a protection against future harm. Graphic it the form of Mayan or Aztec sacrifice it yells out to the reader of pain. Nicely done Tobani
August 15th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of torment where suicide is seen as a protection against future harm. Graphic it the form of Mayan or Aztec sacrifice it yells out to the reader of pain. Nicely done Tobani
August 15th, 2025 05:02
Heart of Relief.
orchidee said:
Please excuse me while I go and be sick! Bit queasy after this- Bleeuurgghh! lol.
August 15th, 2025 02:52
orchidee said:
Please excuse me while I go and be sick! Bit queasy after this- Bleeuurgghh! lol.
August 15th, 2025 02:52
Aspersions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Normality is the way to lead our lives Tobani.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Normality is the way to lead our lives Tobani.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:07
Aspersions.
Cheeky Missy said:
Not exactly symantics, yet bordering on the same, this is a fun philosophical discussion indeed. Aspersions, eh? \"Judge not and ye shall not be judged--\" seems apropos. Since I cannot justify myself, guess I prefer to avoid the discussion altogether. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy indeed. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 12:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Not exactly symantics, yet bordering on the same, this is a fun philosophical discussion indeed. Aspersions, eh? \"Judge not and ye shall not be judged--\" seems apropos. Since I cannot justify myself, guess I prefer to avoid the discussion altogether. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy indeed. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 12:26
Aspersions.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, this is a measured weighing of scales, my dear firend…turning over every angle until you land on the simple truth of just being. The steady rhyme makes the reasoning all the more grounded. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 14th, 2025 11:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani, this is a measured weighing of scales, my dear firend…turning over every angle until you land on the simple truth of just being. The steady rhyme makes the reasoning all the more grounded. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 14th, 2025 11:45
Aspersions.
Damaso said:
I\'d like to live peacefully with little, although there are people who want more and more, and that\'s fine with them. Dignity is the driving force. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 14th, 2025 11:06
Damaso said:
I\'d like to live peacefully with little, although there are people who want more and more, and that\'s fine with them. Dignity is the driving force. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 14th, 2025 11:06
Aspersions.
Neville said:
I like the fact you admit to just playing around .. however you have played an absolute blinder here my friend .. I\'m so glad I felt inclined to check in .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:03
Neville said:
I like the fact you admit to just playing around .. however you have played an absolute blinder here my friend .. I\'m so glad I felt inclined to check in .. Neville
August 14th, 2025 11:03
Wise Man Say (20).
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish we had those wise men….and I rest my case. Fantastic work.
August 14th, 2025 10:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish we had those wise men….and I rest my case. Fantastic work.
August 14th, 2025 10:16
Glad She Survived!!!.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
My friend, something profound descended on your pen. Few lines which carry an almost unbearable burden. Loved it
August 14th, 2025 10:08
rebellion_in_sanity said:
My friend, something profound descended on your pen. Few lines which carry an almost unbearable burden. Loved it
August 14th, 2025 10:08
STARVATION.
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The modern times need strong medicine. I found that spark in the poem. Well done my friend. 🙏
August 14th, 2025 10:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The modern times need strong medicine. I found that spark in the poem. Well done my friend. 🙏
August 14th, 2025 10:03
Aspersions.
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone with or without a conscience would enjoy this. 🌹 🤣 Those who have one will be frowning those without will be proud. lol most enjoyed 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
Anyone with or without a conscience would enjoy this. 🌹 🤣 Those who have one will be frowning those without will be proud. lol most enjoyed 🌹
August 14th, 2025 09:31
Aspersions.
arqios said:
That’s the way of things in human relations, quite a range of calibrations and it’s ever changing. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 14th, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
That’s the way of things in human relations, quite a range of calibrations and it’s ever changing. 🙏🏻🕊️
August 14th, 2025 06:08
Aspersions.
sorenbarrett said:
A Marxist idea that didn\'t quite work due to man\'s nature toward corruption and greed but a most interesting idea none the less. Too bad that most men\'s nature is not a giving one. A fun read my friend
August 14th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
A Marxist idea that didn\'t quite work due to man\'s nature toward corruption and greed but a most interesting idea none the less. Too bad that most men\'s nature is not a giving one. A fun read my friend
August 14th, 2025 04:09
The Comedown.
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope you enjoyed the bottle Tobani. Cheers.
Andy
August 14th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope you enjoyed the bottle Tobani. Cheers.
Andy
August 14th, 2025 01:19
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