Comments received on poems by Vasile Serban
If only I knew how to stop dying
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and poetic it floats with dreams and speaks with the wind. A most lovely piece
February 17th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Fanciful and poetic it floats with dreams and speaks with the wind. A most lovely piece
February 17th, 2026 07:43
If only I knew how to stop dying
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves as an exploration of the human condition, expressing a desire to escape the limitations of mortality and to connect with the eternal cycles of nature. It invites readers to reflect on their own lives and the transformations they undergo.
February 17th, 2026 06:53
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem serves as an exploration of the human condition, expressing a desire to escape the limitations of mortality and to connect with the eternal cycles of nature. It invites readers to reflect on their own lives and the transformations they undergo.
February 17th, 2026 06:53
Skeleton
RSM0812 said:
This is really good writing. Rather short sweet and very interesting. Keeping the theme of cold and frozen throughout. One of my favorites today for sure.
February 17th, 2026 00:19
RSM0812 said:
This is really good writing. Rather short sweet and very interesting. Keeping the theme of cold and frozen throughout. One of my favorites today for sure.
February 17th, 2026 00:19
Skeleton
Vipassana said:
About cold and dark lands
Where forever, I will find my grave.
I can assure you, eternity is always sunny. Keep going, sir.
February 1st, 2026 19:32
Vipassana said:
About cold and dark lands
Where forever, I will find my grave.
I can assure you, eternity is always sunny. Keep going, sir.
February 1st, 2026 19:32
Skeleton
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I really enjoyed reading the poem. Thank you for sharing 🙏
February 1st, 2026 08:36
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I really enjoyed reading the poem. Thank you for sharing 🙏
February 1st, 2026 08:36
Skeleton
sorenbarrett said:
Very graphic in images this poem speaks its metaphors. Well done
January 31st, 2026 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Very graphic in images this poem speaks its metaphors. Well done
January 31st, 2026 17:22
Where everybody cries
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of feelings of disparagement and not being worthy. A well written piece
December 29th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of feelings of disparagement and not being worthy. A well written piece
December 29th, 2025 10:12
My love!
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark thought expressed in this poem where death looms. Nicely expressed in rhyme
November 23rd, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dark thought expressed in this poem where death looms. Nicely expressed in rhyme
November 23rd, 2025 04:25
The End, a New Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a celestial dream of love and preserving it in a fantasy land in the cosmos. Very engaging. Nicely done
November 19th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a celestial dream of love and preserving it in a fantasy land in the cosmos. Very engaging. Nicely done
November 19th, 2025 20:46
Chimpanzee
sorenbarrett said:
Great mythological biblical references in this poem that continue through it. A most lovely write
November 12th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
Great mythological biblical references in this poem that continue through it. A most lovely write
November 12th, 2025 14:43
From the grave
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks in a reverse metaphor of life and death. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks in a reverse metaphor of life and death. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 13:15
The human sanatorium
Priya Tomar said:
This magnum opus caught my eyes.
Lovely!
July 15th, 2025 11:34
Priya Tomar said:
This magnum opus caught my eyes.
Lovely!
July 15th, 2025 11:34
The human sanatorium
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and touching write, nicely expressed and written
July 15th, 2025 10:41
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful and touching write, nicely expressed and written
July 15th, 2025 10:41
The human sanatorium
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem and the last stanza particularly caught my heart. A fave
July 15th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem and the last stanza particularly caught my heart. A fave
July 15th, 2025 09:41
Invocation
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and mournful this poem reflects on loss and a sense of loneliness that is left behind. Nicely written it carries the reader with it
May 24th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and mournful this poem reflects on loss and a sense of loneliness that is left behind. Nicely written it carries the reader with it
May 24th, 2025 04:18
Invocation
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of missing and longing of a much loved one and desire to be with them again and be reunited, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:40
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of missing and longing of a much loved one and desire to be with them again and be reunited, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 02:40
The Ballad of Prince Alexander and Ramira
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this entertaining read with a happy ending, all the work put in to it was worth while
March 8th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this entertaining read with a happy ending, all the work put in to it was worth while
March 8th, 2025 03:18
The Ballad of Prince Alexander and Ramira
sorenbarrett said:
A fairy tale that ends happily ever after in this work. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fairy tale that ends happily ever after in this work. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 19:39
