Comments received on poems by Rin the Magnificent
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Tony36 said:
Excellent well done
Your poem was such a fun read
Cheers to you my friend
November 9th, 2024 07:29
Tony36 said:
Excellent well done
Your poem was such a fun read
Cheers to you my friend
November 9th, 2024 07:29
II.
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a haiku that puzzles the mind. I can picture it well but that does not help. It will keep the mind moving for some time
November 8th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a haiku that puzzles the mind. I can picture it well but that does not help. It will keep the mind moving for some time
November 8th, 2024 06:39
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sorenbarrett said:
A historical haiku applied to current events? Well written
November 7th, 2024 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
A historical haiku applied to current events? Well written
November 7th, 2024 11:49
Mother\'s Burn\'d Skin
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a Native American vison of the earth as mother and that we have no right to cut her hair or dig under her skin. A beautiful metaphoric write that deserves greater attention. Loved it.
November 6th, 2024 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of a Native American vison of the earth as mother and that we have no right to cut her hair or dig under her skin. A beautiful metaphoric write that deserves greater attention. Loved it.
November 6th, 2024 03:44
I ne\'er wish\'d to be dead
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words more beautiful in metaphor as one faces their mortality
November 5th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words more beautiful in metaphor as one faces their mortality
November 5th, 2024 05:07
gone garth
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Lovely and intriguing with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Lovely and intriguing with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 1st, 2024 13:30
Flame that Flickers
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that feels old and of another time. There is a sense of foreboding to this piece and a general sense of darkness. Nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that feels old and of another time. There is a sense of foreboding to this piece and a general sense of darkness. Nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:23