Comments received on poems by Molly Delaney
Can I call you?
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of the journey through a relationship beginning to end, with a wonderful last line, not expected when reading the poem, well written and expressed
March 19th, 2025 12:15
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write of the journey through a relationship beginning to end, with a wonderful last line, not expected when reading the poem, well written and expressed
March 19th, 2025 12:15
Can I call you?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed relationship that defines itself over time. Nicely done and I particularly like the last line that intimates a desire to continue the relationship open.
March 19th, 2025 12:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed relationship that defines itself over time. Nicely done and I particularly like the last line that intimates a desire to continue the relationship open.
March 19th, 2025 12:07
The Price of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
Most wonderfully written from the perspective of a child. It is an innocent view about lies, bribery, fidelity. All in metaphor shown to be different from another point of view. All things in life have their justifications and it depends on how you see things as to how you take them.
March 16th, 2025 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Most wonderfully written from the perspective of a child. It is an innocent view about lies, bribery, fidelity. All in metaphor shown to be different from another point of view. All things in life have their justifications and it depends on how you see things as to how you take them.
March 16th, 2025 07:30
The Price of Silence
2781 said:
You certainly should have driven a harder bargain. I guess you lost that chance, but I admire your forgiveness.
March 16th, 2025 07:06
2781 said:
You certainly should have driven a harder bargain. I guess you lost that chance, but I admire your forgiveness.
March 16th, 2025 07:06
The Price of Silence
Poetic Licence said:
This will relate to a lot of people especially older generations, as they say in life nothing is for nothing, well written write
March 16th, 2025 06:53
Poetic Licence said:
This will relate to a lot of people especially older generations, as they say in life nothing is for nothing, well written write
March 16th, 2025 06:53
I\'m Already Dead
Cheeky Missy said:
Spot on. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite poignancy only those who have tasted this know best. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 17:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Spot on. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and an exquisite poignancy only those who have tasted this know best. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 17:44
I\'m Already Dead
Poetic Licence said:
A write about about the horrific cycle of abuse that some people have to live in, and it is all about the abusers needs and inner demons. A horrible subject but very well written and expressed
March 15th, 2025 12:19
Poetic Licence said:
A write about about the horrific cycle of abuse that some people have to live in, and it is all about the abusers needs and inner demons. A horrible subject but very well written and expressed
March 15th, 2025 12:19
I\'m Already Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cycle of abuse is put in metaphor and set to verse. A lovely write about a horrid condition.
March 15th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cycle of abuse is put in metaphor and set to verse. A lovely write about a horrid condition.
March 15th, 2025 10:48
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