Comments received on poems by Sebastian.
Sister Sister
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of trying to get a sibling to understand they have a problem and its effecting the whole family, though they still love her, heartfelt write, expressed nicely
June 9th, 2025 15:57
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of trying to get a sibling to understand they have a problem and its effecting the whole family, though they still love her, heartfelt write, expressed nicely
June 9th, 2025 15:57
Sister Sister
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the difficulty of dealing with a sibling that has problems. Love overcomes all.
June 9th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the difficulty of dealing with a sibling that has problems. Love overcomes all.
June 9th, 2025 14:14
Sleep
RSM0812 said:
To me this poem conveys virtue and betrayel. Such a good write. Beautiful and passionate.
June 8th, 2025 08:40
RSM0812 said:
To me this poem conveys virtue and betrayel. Such a good write. Beautiful and passionate.
June 8th, 2025 08:40
Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting structure to this poem that seems to ripple with each line and echo with each thought. It culminates in an unknown, what is the sin and who is being talked to. The mystery enhances the power of the poem and changes its interpretation. Lovely
June 8th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting structure to this poem that seems to ripple with each line and echo with each thought. It culminates in an unknown, what is the sin and who is being talked to. The mystery enhances the power of the poem and changes its interpretation. Lovely
June 8th, 2025 06:34
Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is erotic and expounds a strong sexual need as well as one for affiliation. I hear a great deal of sexual passion driven by lust and also the need for unity and care. Powerful
June 8th, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is erotic and expounds a strong sexual need as well as one for affiliation. I hear a great deal of sexual passion driven by lust and also the need for unity and care. Powerful
June 8th, 2025 05:49
The Peel
arqios said:
The peeling away of innocence could be seen as a cure of sorts for past trauma and unresolved inner conflict. Its dynamic with experience is complex and the liberating feeling is all too real. Deeply insightful and relatable. The warmth offfered by the kettle is constant and possibly comforting. A poem definitely to come back to. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 16:36
arqios said:
The peeling away of innocence could be seen as a cure of sorts for past trauma and unresolved inner conflict. Its dynamic with experience is complex and the liberating feeling is all too real. Deeply insightful and relatable. The warmth offfered by the kettle is constant and possibly comforting. A poem definitely to come back to. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 16:36
The Peel
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of abuse calls out from this poem. It is vivid in its imagery and has a most haunting feel to it.
January 23rd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of abuse calls out from this poem. It is vivid in its imagery and has a most haunting feel to it.
January 23rd, 2025 11:29
The Peel
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece around being trapped or restricted by emotional barriers, searching for a way to break free but unable to find it, Enjoyed the read, poetically
January 23rd, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece around being trapped or restricted by emotional barriers, searching for a way to break free but unable to find it, Enjoyed the read, poetically
January 23rd, 2025 10:26
Little Lamb
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! Poetry indeed is a freeing experience, which leads to healing. Thanks for sharing.
December 12th, 2024 02:25
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS! Poetry indeed is a freeing experience, which leads to healing. Thanks for sharing.
December 12th, 2024 02:25
Little Lamb
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and emotional poem which i totally understand, written with emotion but an underlying courage that will eventually get you through your healing journey, thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful and emotional poem which i totally understand, written with emotion but an underlying courage that will eventually get you through your healing journey, thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:25
Little Lamb
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, welcome to MyPoeticSide! 👋 Second, a powerful poem that speaks of deep trauma and coming to terms with truth and consequences. The idea of gluing the cracked pieces together reminds me of kintsugi, which is the Japanese art form of gluing (with a gold like paint) broken dishes together. It\'s beautiful...but you can very much still see the brokenness. The brokenness lends itself to the beauty of the whole piece...but the brokenness is still very much evident. It can\'t be hidden. Anyway. This poem is very wonderfully penned. I am sorry for the trauma you have endured...but your poetry is excellent and will speak volumes to people going through similar things. I look forward to reading more of you. 🌹🙏
December 11th, 2024 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, welcome to MyPoeticSide! 👋 Second, a powerful poem that speaks of deep trauma and coming to terms with truth and consequences. The idea of gluing the cracked pieces together reminds me of kintsugi, which is the Japanese art form of gluing (with a gold like paint) broken dishes together. It\'s beautiful...but you can very much still see the brokenness. The brokenness lends itself to the beauty of the whole piece...but the brokenness is still very much evident. It can\'t be hidden. Anyway. This poem is very wonderfully penned. I am sorry for the trauma you have endured...but your poetry is excellent and will speak volumes to people going through similar things. I look forward to reading more of you. 🌹🙏
December 11th, 2024 08:37
