Comments received on poems by Jerene
Everywhere You Aren\'t
sorenbarrett said:
Love makes no sense and does not operate with logic. Mind over emotion to let one go and well done.
October 19th, 2026 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
Love makes no sense and does not operate with logic. Mind over emotion to let one go and well done.
October 19th, 2026 10:34
All Life Returns To God
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic, prophetic, biblical and judgmental it speaks with power.
September 20th, 2026 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic, prophetic, biblical and judgmental it speaks with power.
September 20th, 2026 07:23
Do You Hear Me God?
sorenbarrett said:
A confidence in a permanency of a relationship. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 17:55
sorenbarrett said:
A confidence in a permanency of a relationship. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 17:55
Peach Iced Tea
Jamiano said:
A peach colored hibiscus flower also is a favorite summer vibe.
August 27th, 2026 04:49
Jamiano said:
A peach colored hibiscus flower also is a favorite summer vibe.
August 27th, 2026 04:49
Peach Iced Tea
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done I too picked a food motif today and this would go well. The poem is light and feels free and carefree. Nicely done
June 25th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done I too picked a food motif today and this would go well. The poem is light and feels free and carefree. Nicely done
June 25th, 2026 20:10
Those Deceitful Brown Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Lies in promises deceit in love both from self and others. What is spoken of as love is passion and it burns out fast. Good write
June 24th, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lies in promises deceit in love both from self and others. What is spoken of as love is passion and it burns out fast. Good write
June 24th, 2026 09:17
Until We Forget
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simply put but very effective
May 20th, 2026 02:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simply put but very effective
May 20th, 2026 02:53
A Lesson Or Blessing?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a young love lost and what it is now. Well written
May 18th, 2026 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a young love lost and what it is now. Well written
May 18th, 2026 09:12
A Lesson Or Blessing?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
J.J., this really moved me…especially the way the poem shifts from longing into realization. The repeated “another” builds this unbearable sense of replacement and distance, but the ending is what stayed with me most…the memory of those younger versions of yourselves still believing it would become a blessing. That kind of hindsight hurts in such a human way. Quietly devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
J.J., this really moved me…especially the way the poem shifts from longing into realization. The repeated “another” builds this unbearable sense of replacement and distance, but the ending is what stayed with me most…the memory of those younger versions of yourselves still believing it would become a blessing. That kind of hindsight hurts in such a human way. Quietly devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 08:11
Until We Forget
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic and philosophical statement. Well said
April 28th, 2026 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic and philosophical statement. Well said
April 28th, 2026 19:37
The Real Truth
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, so much truth in so few words, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, so much truth in so few words, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:22
The Real Truth
sorenbarrett said:
One of the shortest poems I have faved. So much truth in those two lines. Magnificent!
August 11th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
One of the shortest poems I have faved. So much truth in those two lines. Magnificent!
August 11th, 2025 09:25
Irreplaceable
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, this is the way to handle a broken relationship, with calmly thought out words that are like a barrage of darts, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 10:15
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, this is the way to handle a broken relationship, with calmly thought out words that are like a barrage of darts, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 10:15
Irreplaceable
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful and terrible words of defiance. It has been said that hell hath no fury like a woman spurned. The break-up unleashed in you passions that caused you to summon great poetry. Your words are like daggers searching for the culprit.
June 19th, 2025 08:58
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful and terrible words of defiance. It has been said that hell hath no fury like a woman spurned. The break-up unleashed in you passions that caused you to summon great poetry. Your words are like daggers searching for the culprit.
June 19th, 2025 08:58
Irreplaceable
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that results in loss and change. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that results in loss and change. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:35
Endless Nights
Poetic Licence said:
The pain of separation and the loneliness it brings, at times feels all to much. You feel that as you read a very well written poem.
February 13th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
The pain of separation and the loneliness it brings, at times feels all to much. You feel that as you read a very well written poem.
February 13th, 2025 06:17
Endless Nights
sorenbarrett said:
Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely writen with striking imagery and carefully chosen words.
February 13th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely writen with striking imagery and carefully chosen words.
February 13th, 2025 03:59
