Comments received on poems by Jerene
Until We Forget
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simply put but very effective
May 20th, 2026 02:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simply put but very effective
May 20th, 2026 02:53
A Lesson Or Blessing?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a young love lost and what it is now. Well written
May 18th, 2026 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a young love lost and what it is now. Well written
May 18th, 2026 09:12
A Lesson Or Blessing?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
J.J., this really moved me…especially the way the poem shifts from longing into realization. The repeated “another” builds this unbearable sense of replacement and distance, but the ending is what stayed with me most…the memory of those younger versions of yourselves still believing it would become a blessing. That kind of hindsight hurts in such a human way. Quietly devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
J.J., this really moved me…especially the way the poem shifts from longing into realization. The repeated “another” builds this unbearable sense of replacement and distance, but the ending is what stayed with me most…the memory of those younger versions of yourselves still believing it would become a blessing. That kind of hindsight hurts in such a human way. Quietly devastating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 08:11
Until We Forget
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic and philosophical statement. Well said
April 28th, 2026 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic and philosophical statement. Well said
April 28th, 2026 19:37
The Real Truth
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, so much truth in so few words, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, so much truth in so few words, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 10:22
The Real Truth
sorenbarrett said:
One of the shortest poems I have faved. So much truth in those two lines. Magnificent!
August 11th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
One of the shortest poems I have faved. So much truth in those two lines. Magnificent!
August 11th, 2025 09:25
Irreplaceable
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, this is the way to handle a broken relationship, with calmly thought out words that are like a barrage of darts, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 10:15
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece of poetry, this is the way to handle a broken relationship, with calmly thought out words that are like a barrage of darts, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 10:15
Irreplaceable
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful and terrible words of defiance. It has been said that hell hath no fury like a woman spurned. The break-up unleashed in you passions that caused you to summon great poetry. Your words are like daggers searching for the culprit.
June 19th, 2025 08:58
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful and terrible words of defiance. It has been said that hell hath no fury like a woman spurned. The break-up unleashed in you passions that caused you to summon great poetry. Your words are like daggers searching for the culprit.
June 19th, 2025 08:58
Irreplaceable
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that results in loss and change. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that results in loss and change. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:35
Endless Nights
Poetic Licence said:
The pain of separation and the loneliness it brings, at times feels all to much. You feel that as you read a very well written poem.
February 13th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
The pain of separation and the loneliness it brings, at times feels all to much. You feel that as you read a very well written poem.
February 13th, 2025 06:17
Endless Nights
sorenbarrett said:
Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely writen with striking imagery and carefully chosen words.
February 13th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely writen with striking imagery and carefully chosen words.
February 13th, 2025 03:59
