Comments received on poems by Jerene



All Life Returns To God
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

September 20th, 2026 07:30

All Life Returns To God
sorenbarrett said:

Poetic, prophetic, biblical and judgmental it speaks with power.

September 20th, 2026 07:23

Do You Hear Me God?
sorenbarrett said:

A confidence in a permanency of a relationship. Nicely done

September 9th, 2026 17:55

Peach Iced Tea
Jamiano said:

A peach colored hibiscus flower also is a favorite summer vibe.

August 27th, 2026 04:49

Peach Iced Tea
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely done I too picked a food motif today and this would go well. The poem is light and feels free and carefree. Nicely done

June 25th, 2026 20:10

Those Deceitful Brown Eyes
sorenbarrett said:

Lies in promises deceit in love both from self and others. What is spoken of as love is passion and it burns out fast. Good write

June 24th, 2026 09:17

Until We Forget
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

simply put but very effective

May 20th, 2026 02:53

Until We Forget
sorenbarrett said:

A most poetic and philosophical statement. Well said

April 28th, 2026 19:37

The Real Truth
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderful write, so much truth in so few words, enjoyed the read

August 11th, 2025 10:22

The Real Truth
sorenbarrett said:

One of the shortest poems I have faved. So much truth in those two lines. Magnificent!

August 11th, 2025 09:25

Irreplaceable
Poetic Licence said:

A beautifully written piece of poetry, this is the way to handle a broken relationship, with calmly thought out words that are like a barrage of darts, nicely expressed and written

June 19th, 2025 10:15

Irreplaceable
Soman Ragavan said:

Powerful and terrible words of defiance. It has been said that hell hath no fury like a woman spurned. The break-up unleashed in you passions that caused you to summon great poetry. Your words are like daggers searching for the culprit.

June 19th, 2025 08:58

Irreplaceable
sorenbarrett said:

A love poem that results in loss and change. Well done

June 19th, 2025 08:35

Endless Nights
Poetic Licence said:

The pain of separation and the loneliness it brings, at times feels all to much. You feel that as you read a very well written poem.

February 13th, 2025 06:17

Endless Nights
sorenbarrett said:

Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely writen with striking imagery and carefully chosen words.

February 13th, 2025 03:59

Endless Nights
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

February 13th, 2025 03:31