Comments received on poems by Freddi



Time consuming
Poetic Licence said:

The pressures of life and how we are guilty of not making enough time for the important thing, ourselves, loved the read

March 1st, 2025 13:09

Time consuming
sorenbarrett said:

Great images and metaphor to describe the rush in our lives where we neglect ourselves. Well done

March 1st, 2025 11:36

Baker
Cassie58 said:

Lovely little poem. Filled with love. Good use of metaphor. I enjoyed reading you.

February 20th, 2025 14:23

Baker
Poetic Licence said:

A loving baker who cares about their poetry, cleverly stated in this lovely read

February 20th, 2025 11:45

Baker
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor and was well stated in poetic form

February 20th, 2025 11:21

Void
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 13th, 2025 20:47

Void
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, i think many of us at different stages have pondered the same thoughts, enjoyed the read

February 13th, 2025 18:30

Brother
Poetic Licence said:

That is a truly wonderful declaration of love for their brother, beautifully written, great read

February 13th, 2025 05:06

Drowning
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

February 8th, 2025 14:59

Steps
RSM0812 said:

From two to one. Or a whole to something else. Nice write.

February 8th, 2025 09:31

Drowning
Poetic Licence said:

That is a haunting and touching write, expressing pain and suffering through out.

February 8th, 2025 08:27

Steps
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely way to say i am looking after myself now, enjoyed the read

February 7th, 2025 12:17

Steps
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2025 10:54

Steps
arqios said:

Relatable and quite understood 🙏🏻🕊

February 7th, 2025 08:07

With closed eyes
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 5th, 2025 18:13

With closed eyes
Poetic Licence said:

I like this, with eyes closed we can anything at all and all is beautiful, yet when we open them the reality is different, enjoyed the read.

February 5th, 2025 16:04

With closed eyes
Cassie58 said:

My senses were stirred and then I opened my eyes. Nicely conveyed nature poetry.

February 5th, 2025 14:52

Masterpiece
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 29th, 2025 21:01

Lie
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 27th, 2025 10:54

Lie
Poetic Licence said:

Sometimes in order to get out the slump we are in, i think a lot of us tell ourselves the lies, sometimes though it is best just to be honest and say how you really feel, Enjoyed the read Poetically

January 27th, 2025 06:22

Weight
Poetic Licence said:

The hardest one of all to lift, enjoyed the read

January 27th, 2025 02:51

Weight
arqios said:

Quite the truth! Welcome to MPS 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

January 26th, 2025 16:09

Weight
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 26th, 2025 13:09