Comments received on poems by Zephyrschild
Bipolar soul
Cheeky Missy said:
This, I now realize, is quintessentially you. Initially recalling your reading it aloud to me, the words filtered through and opened an uncomfortable reality, especially with the killer conclusion, for how can a truly bipolar individual be \"...the same. Evermore\"? By contrast, seems the ones I\'ve known are so variable I cannot pin them down. Besides, there was a sense of stability in the unchanging stasis. I dunno, chew me out. It\'s just that I was struck forcibly with a rather novel perspective reading it just now. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:21
Cheeky Missy said:
This, I now realize, is quintessentially you. Initially recalling your reading it aloud to me, the words filtered through and opened an uncomfortable reality, especially with the killer conclusion, for how can a truly bipolar individual be \"...the same. Evermore\"? By contrast, seems the ones I\'ve known are so variable I cannot pin them down. Besides, there was a sense of stability in the unchanging stasis. I dunno, chew me out. It\'s just that I was struck forcibly with a rather novel perspective reading it just now. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:21
Dear Major Depression
Cheeky Missy said:
[You ARE sending me my own copy of this, the others and all, yes ALL the rest, thankfully]
Ah, if only it were that easy. Besides, what\'s yours to mine, eh? Speaking of which, I should shake mine off.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
[You ARE sending me my own copy of this, the others and all, yes ALL the rest, thankfully]
Ah, if only it were that easy. Besides, what\'s yours to mine, eh? Speaking of which, I should shake mine off.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 22:50
Flailing neurotransmitters
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay, that was rather a tongue-twister, and left me scrambling to catch up despite its brevity. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 22:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay, that was rather a tongue-twister, and left me scrambling to catch up despite its brevity. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 22:29
Flailing neurotransmitters
sorenbarrett said:
That is quite the contest and winner takes all? A verse of rhyme that fits and carries one into the fight.
July 13th, 2025 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
That is quite the contest and winner takes all? A verse of rhyme that fits and carries one into the fight.
July 13th, 2025 16:32
Breathe yourself into being
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic cleansing of the body and mind to help the healing, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 13:22
Poetic Licence said:
A poetic cleansing of the body and mind to help the healing, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 13:22
Breathe yourself into being
sorenbarrett said:
A meditative poem of imagery to aid in physical health. Nicely worded. Wonderful
June 4th, 2025 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
A meditative poem of imagery to aid in physical health. Nicely worded. Wonderful
June 4th, 2025 12:16
Bipolar soul
sorenbarrett said:
I hear anger, distrust, suspicion, hurt in this write of past relationship. Strong and written with powerful words is shouts its message.
April 16th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
I hear anger, distrust, suspicion, hurt in this write of past relationship. Strong and written with powerful words is shouts its message.
April 16th, 2025 04:23
Bipolar soul
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is very detailed, it seems to burst open into a new image and a new layer each time like the life of a thousand butterflies. I enjoyed the creativity!
April 16th, 2025 02:54
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem is very detailed, it seems to burst open into a new image and a new layer each time like the life of a thousand butterflies. I enjoyed the creativity!
April 16th, 2025 02:54
Bipolar soul
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write about to many,a very relatable subject, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 02:16
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully written write about to many,a very relatable subject, nicely expressed and written
April 16th, 2025 02:16
Dear Major Depression
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is a very positive way of saying to goodbye to depression, well written
February 7th, 2025 12:39
Poetic Licence said:
I think that is a very positive way of saying to goodbye to depression, well written
February 7th, 2025 12:39
Dear Major Depression
NinjaGirl said:
You don\'t struggle with depression. Depression struggles with you 💪💪👹👹
February 7th, 2025 12:30
NinjaGirl said:
You don\'t struggle with depression. Depression struggles with you 💪💪👹👹
February 7th, 2025 12:30
Summer Lilacs
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing, that paints many images as you read through it, very well written
January 27th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful piece of writing, that paints many images as you read through it, very well written
January 27th, 2025 02:57
