Comments received on poems by whats write for me
A Dream of Despair
arqios said:
“Tendermercies” is such a wonderful word and attribute to lean into. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:16
arqios said:
“Tendermercies” is such a wonderful word and attribute to lean into. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:16
Beauty of the Book
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if it is really Eve who ate the apple, why is it called \"Adam\'s transgression\"? I wonder if there is more to the story
March 4th, 2025 12:59
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if it is really Eve who ate the apple, why is it called \"Adam\'s transgression\"? I wonder if there is more to the story
March 4th, 2025 12:59
Beauty of the Book
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LA, my friend, you’ve crafted a beautiful poetic summary of Genesis here. These verses totally capture the essence of creation, the fall, and the flood with vivid imagery and elegant rhyme. Just beautiful. Also, your final stanza is especially powerful, moving from the darkness of Cain’s dastardly deed to the hope of healing, restoration and wholeness symbolized by the rainbow. That transition from “the world turned stark” to “God’s promise of grace, unending love” faithfully encapsulates the overarching theme of redemption found in Genesis and the Bible as a whole. Again, my friend, well done on this! 🌹👏 An easy fave for me.
March 4th, 2025 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LA, my friend, you’ve crafted a beautiful poetic summary of Genesis here. These verses totally capture the essence of creation, the fall, and the flood with vivid imagery and elegant rhyme. Just beautiful. Also, your final stanza is especially powerful, moving from the darkness of Cain’s dastardly deed to the hope of healing, restoration and wholeness symbolized by the rainbow. That transition from “the world turned stark” to “God’s promise of grace, unending love” faithfully encapsulates the overarching theme of redemption found in Genesis and the Bible as a whole. Again, my friend, well done on this! 🌹👏 An easy fave for me.
March 4th, 2025 10:32
Beauty of the Book
arqios said:
For me one of the best opening portions or segments is the account of the world’s first tailor/dressmaker. But all of Genesis is quite amazing. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:42
arqios said:
For me one of the best opening portions or segments is the account of the world’s first tailor/dressmaker. But all of Genesis is quite amazing. 🙏🏻🕊
March 4th, 2025 06:42
Beauty of the Book
sorenbarrett said:
The rainbow has two ends one the forgiveness of God of men for their deeds and the other the forgiveness of men for God\'s destruction of the flood. Well worded this poem that is Biblical in its story. Nicely done.
March 4th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
The rainbow has two ends one the forgiveness of God of men for their deeds and the other the forgiveness of men for God\'s destruction of the flood. Well worded this poem that is Biblical in its story. Nicely done.
March 4th, 2025 06:00
The Light in Me
James Michael said:
Let God’s light shine on us all through the darkness.
Very well written!
March 2nd, 2025 21:25
James Michael said:
Let God’s light shine on us all through the darkness.
Very well written!
March 2nd, 2025 21:25
The Light in Me
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful spiritual poem here. Let the light inside us always shine for others, sound advice LA.
March 2nd, 2025 17:57
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful spiritual poem here. Let the light inside us always shine for others, sound advice LA.
March 2nd, 2025 17:57
The Light in Me
arqios said:
It’s just like the proof of the pudding, in many a way! Blessed Sunday to you LA 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:35
arqios said:
It’s just like the proof of the pudding, in many a way! Blessed Sunday to you LA 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:35
The Light in Me
sorenbarrett said:
Light often used as a symbol for truth and knowledge shines through here. A nice write biblical in form and well done.
March 2nd, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Light often used as a symbol for truth and knowledge shines through here. A nice write biblical in form and well done.
March 2nd, 2025 09:19
Faithful Eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. The miracle of each day followed by the miracle of each night. Well done my friend. Love this! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 21:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. The miracle of each day followed by the miracle of each night. Well done my friend. Love this! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 21:26
Faithful Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is indeed each sunrise and sunset are markers of faith and nature\'s faithfulness. A lovely write.
March 1st, 2025 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is indeed each sunrise and sunset are markers of faith and nature\'s faithfulness. A lovely write.
March 1st, 2025 14:48
Plan Éternel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written…Biblically inspired. Beautiful all around, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 21:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written…Biblically inspired. Beautiful all around, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 21:11
Plan Éternel
sorenbarrett said:
Well written in form of faith. The Bible has its own poetry.
February 28th, 2025 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Well written in form of faith. The Bible has its own poetry.
February 28th, 2025 10:22
Pop Tarts at Night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣 This made me laugh and laughter is the best medicine. It gets a fave, just for that reason alone. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 18:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣 This made me laugh and laughter is the best medicine. It gets a fave, just for that reason alone. Well done!
February 27th, 2025 18:15
Pop Tarts at Night
Distant View said:
An entertaining write! Thanks for the smile I\'ve now got!
February 27th, 2025 15:28
Distant View said:
An entertaining write! Thanks for the smile I\'ve now got!
February 27th, 2025 15:28
Pop Tarts at Night
Poetic Licence said:
Such a simple thing can bring the memories flooding back, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 11:12
Poetic Licence said:
Such a simple thing can bring the memories flooding back, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 11:12
Pop Tarts at Night
sorenbarrett said:
Many poems are songs and lyrics are part of the emotion music does the rest. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Many poems are songs and lyrics are part of the emotion music does the rest. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 09:27
Falls Relief
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣 Poo-phoria sounds like it might hold even more meaning than just the circumstances of our digestive system. This made me laugh and I love how a commercial randomly inspired this. Thanks for the laugh, much needed today!
February 26th, 2025 11:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤣 Poo-phoria sounds like it might hold even more meaning than just the circumstances of our digestive system. This made me laugh and I love how a commercial randomly inspired this. Thanks for the laugh, much needed today!
February 26th, 2025 11:17
Falls Relief
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read, although i have no idea what that word means, enjoyed the read
February 26th, 2025 08:55
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read, although i have no idea what that word means, enjoyed the read
February 26th, 2025 08:55
Falls Relief
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read off a funny word. The language is full of strange words. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read off a funny word. The language is full of strange words. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 08:08
The Mind’s Harvest: What You Choose to Reap in Meditation and Mindfulness
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 25th, 2025 16:50
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 25th, 2025 16:50
The Mind’s Harvest: What You Choose to Reap in Meditation and Mindfulness
Poetic Licence said:
Always read the instructions manual before using, a interesting and thought provoking write which i enjoyed reading
February 25th, 2025 14:52
Poetic Licence said:
Always read the instructions manual before using, a interesting and thought provoking write which i enjoyed reading
February 25th, 2025 14:52
The Mind’s Harvest: What You Choose to Reap in Meditation and Mindfulness
sorenbarrett said:
One should know how to use a tool before it is put into their hands. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
One should know how to use a tool before it is put into their hands. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 14:03
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