Comments received on poems by whats write for me



Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love Weird Al. Great job!

February 16th, 2025 11:32

Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 16th, 2025 09:09

Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole
Cheeky Missy said:

Dishing up dinner already when I\'ve only had my cuppa tea nor any breakfast?! Haha, lovely! Excellently rendered with a seeming refrain to secure the point, complete with perfect imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you for sharing!

February 16th, 2025 09:01

Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole
sorenbarrett said:

Remember the days that the meal was the same every day and how hunger overcame the revulsion. A fun parody on a parody love Weird Al.

February 16th, 2025 08:55

Where is a Writers Place
arqios said:

Very engaging in form, style, and message… seems to me you already got those three! 🙏🏻🕊

February 15th, 2025 18:26

Where is a Writers Place
sorenbarrett said:

The firs line of this poem is what caught my attention it is clever in its poetic concept turned into rhyme. Lovely

February 15th, 2025 05:01

Where is a Writers Place
Poetic Licence said:

The more you chase the more let down you will be when it arrives, enjoyed the read

February 15th, 2025 03:20

Where is a Writers Place
Cheeky Missy said:

Winsomely rendered with a lilting rhythm and excellent imagery, not to mention a charming poignancy haunting it, beware whom you call since the lurid tales abound. Thank you for sharing.

February 15th, 2025 01:08

Made by His Hands
sorenbarrett said:

A nice declaration of faith. Nicely done

February 14th, 2025 18:24

Artistic Expession
Poetic Licence said:

And their faith dances to the beat, enjoyed the read

February 14th, 2025 16:37

Artistic Expession
sorenbarrett said:

Rhyme pervades this poem and provides a beat that carries it to the end.

February 14th, 2025 13:39

Victory’s Echo
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely dedication to the fantastic vehicle of the freeway and highways, enjoyed the read

February 13th, 2025 12:22

The Ghost of Valarie Karen
Poetic Licence said:

Such a sad and tragic story but beautifully written, pull at every heartstring

February 11th, 2025 12:38

The Ghost of Valarie Karen
sorenbarrett said:

Masterfully written with verse and great meter it is haunting and sad and deserves a fave

February 11th, 2025 09:35

The Ghost of Valarie Karen
Cassie58 said:

So very beautifully penned, yet the death of a child before it lived , so very tragic and haunting. This poem impacted me greatly.

February 11th, 2025 09:24

Made by His Hands
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

February 10th, 2025 22:05

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