Comments received on poems by Kaz
Swanlight
soheil khodaparasti said:
A tender sense of enchantment and closeness.
September 28th, 2026 13:39
soheil khodaparasti said:
A tender sense of enchantment and closeness.
September 28th, 2026 13:39
Moonflower
soheil khodaparasti said:
The velvet blue night and fragrant petals create a very gentle nocturne.
September 28th, 2026 13:38
soheil khodaparasti said:
The velvet blue night and fragrant petals create a very gentle nocturne.
September 28th, 2026 13:38
Trace
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully expressed. A quiet reminder that love can transcend distance and leave something lasting within us.
September 28th, 2026 13:33
soheil khodaparasti said:
Beautifully expressed. A quiet reminder that love can transcend distance and leave something lasting within us.
September 28th, 2026 13:33
Storm Petrels
Fränz Müller said:
I can almost see this scene in my mind’s eye. Excellent.
September 23rd, 2026 05:54
Fränz Müller said:
I can almost see this scene in my mind’s eye. Excellent.
September 23rd, 2026 05:54
Storm Petrels
sorenbarrett said:
This haiku has a striking visual appeal from the image created a fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This haiku has a striking visual appeal from the image created a fave
September 23rd, 2026 04:17
Moonflower
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful image in haiku form. Well done
September 18th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful image in haiku form. Well done
September 18th, 2026 03:56
Swanlight
sorenbarrett said:
There is something ethereal, surreal, dream like in this format or a haiku and it has held my attention long enough to be a fave
September 17th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
There is something ethereal, surreal, dream like in this format or a haiku and it has held my attention long enough to be a fave
September 17th, 2026 04:35
Beyond Autumn
Fränz Müller said:
As the world slowly dies, as it does as winter creeps in, we need to hold onto those little hints of beauty that remain! Great work.
September 16th, 2026 08:41
Fränz Müller said:
As the world slowly dies, as it does as winter creeps in, we need to hold onto those little hints of beauty that remain! Great work.
September 16th, 2026 08:41
Beyond Autumn
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem carries a gentle ambiguity, particularly in the phrase “surpass the season.” It may suggest that the rosebud outlasts autumn, or that it transcends the limits of time and season. “Timeless” is similarly open to interpretation, as it could describe the rosebud itself or its emergence. This ambiguity adds depth without making the poem unclear.
September 16th, 2026 02:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem carries a gentle ambiguity, particularly in the phrase “surpass the season.” It may suggest that the rosebud outlasts autumn, or that it transcends the limits of time and season. “Timeless” is similarly open to interpretation, as it could describe the rosebud itself or its emergence. This ambiguity adds depth without making the poem unclear.
September 16th, 2026 02:27
Beyond Autumn
sorenbarrett said:
I have observed this and it is true and beautiful as well.
September 15th, 2026 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
I have observed this and it is true and beautiful as well.
September 15th, 2026 18:17
Iridescence
soheil khodaparasti said:
A delicate image of purity and transience.
September 15th, 2026 01:02
soheil khodaparasti said:
A delicate image of purity and transience.
September 15th, 2026 01:02
Shy flame
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful tension between quiet shyness and the intensity of creative passion.
September 15th, 2026 01:01
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful tension between quiet shyness and the intensity of creative passion.
September 15th, 2026 01:01
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