Comments received on poems by Kaz
The quiet pond
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that speaks in metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that speaks in metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 19:39
Mystical
sorenbarrett said:
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39
Still
sorenbarrett said:
I like how this poem uses night as if it were a cool breeze. A fave
August 1st, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
I like how this poem uses night as if it were a cool breeze. A fave
August 1st, 2025 20:49
Still
peto said:
I\'ve read a few of these from you
You have this format mastered
Excellent writing
August 1st, 2025 19:58
peto said:
I\'ve read a few of these from you
You have this format mastered
Excellent writing
August 1st, 2025 19:58
A rose
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting for the heart to bloom, beautiful write, enjoyed
July 30th, 2025 13:41
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting for the heart to bloom, beautiful write, enjoyed
July 30th, 2025 13:41
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
In shade
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
Adrift
sorenbarrett said:
A great image cast in this short piece. It gives the image of a search for someone distant one is looking for. (Beware the light of a lighthouse it means there are rocks ahead)
July 6th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great image cast in this short piece. It gives the image of a search for someone distant one is looking for. (Beware the light of a lighthouse it means there are rocks ahead)
July 6th, 2025 03:47
Veil
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku that I continue to try to link together. A thought provoking write
July 3rd, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku that I continue to try to link together. A thought provoking write
July 3rd, 2025 13:00
Veil
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but a sense of the sun banishing the demons of the night, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:53
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but a sense of the sun banishing the demons of the night, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:53
Fly free
sorenbarrett said:
This is a masterful haiku that encapsulates the essence of the haiku, the observation of nature, the action and cutting word. most lovely a fave
June 30th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
This is a masterful haiku that encapsulates the essence of the haiku, the observation of nature, the action and cutting word. most lovely a fave
June 30th, 2025 09:20
Still bloom
Poetic Licence said:
The hidden beauty, or beauty within lovely write
June 27th, 2025 09:15
Poetic Licence said:
The hidden beauty, or beauty within lovely write
June 27th, 2025 09:15
Still bloom
sorenbarrett said:
Reflection on this haiku reveals hidden splendor. A lovely piece
June 27th, 2025 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Reflection on this haiku reveals hidden splendor. A lovely piece
June 27th, 2025 07:40
Within
Poetic Licence said:
As life the calm before the storm, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:35
Poetic Licence said:
As life the calm before the storm, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:35
Within
sorenbarrett said:
A great Haiku that speaks of this relationship between stillness and sound, the calm before the storm. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great Haiku that speaks of this relationship between stillness and sound, the calm before the storm. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:20
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