Comments received on poems by Kaz
Modern haiku
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one it makes the mind revolve just as the earth and moon do around the sun
September 2nd, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one it makes the mind revolve just as the earth and moon do around the sun
September 2nd, 2025 04:15
Fragments
sorenbarrett said:
At first glance this appears just another frozen crystle but upon further examination it holds frozen inside it rays of truth. The more times I read it the more it revealed. We do freeze love in time for good or bad, in joy and sadness, rejoicing or mourning its loss. Put in a freezer to retrieve latter. We reflect on ice shards cold and distanced by time but they do drift near in warm seasons for many possible reasons, closing of proximity, renewal of relationships, fond memories and many more. A lovely read and a fave
August 26th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
At first glance this appears just another frozen crystle but upon further examination it holds frozen inside it rays of truth. The more times I read it the more it revealed. We do freeze love in time for good or bad, in joy and sadness, rejoicing or mourning its loss. Put in a freezer to retrieve latter. We reflect on ice shards cold and distanced by time but they do drift near in warm seasons for many possible reasons, closing of proximity, renewal of relationships, fond memories and many more. A lovely read and a fave
August 26th, 2025 04:44
Fragments
MatPie said:
Love is still while the world keeps on moving. Lovely!
August 26th, 2025 00:55
MatPie said:
Love is still while the world keeps on moving. Lovely!
August 26th, 2025 00:55
Tempered by the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
How some things so common can stand out and even the worthless can be beautiful and cherrished
August 25th, 2025 15:16
sorenbarrett said:
How some things so common can stand out and even the worthless can be beautiful and cherrished
August 25th, 2025 15:16
Little bird
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines a sublime haiku deserving a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines a sublime haiku deserving a fave
August 22nd, 2025 04:24
The quiet pond
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that speaks in metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful haiku that speaks in metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 15th, 2025 19:39
Mystical
sorenbarrett said:
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39
Still
sorenbarrett said:
I like how this poem uses night as if it were a cool breeze. A fave
August 1st, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
I like how this poem uses night as if it were a cool breeze. A fave
August 1st, 2025 20:49
Still
peto said:
I\'ve read a few of these from you
You have this format mastered
Excellent writing
August 1st, 2025 19:58
peto said:
I\'ve read a few of these from you
You have this format mastered
Excellent writing
August 1st, 2025 19:58
A rose
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting for the heart to bloom, beautiful write, enjoyed
July 30th, 2025 13:41
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting for the heart to bloom, beautiful write, enjoyed
July 30th, 2025 13:41
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
In shade
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
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