Comments received on poems by Kaz



Winter\'s Death
sorenbarrett said:

Very picturesque printing s vivid picture in the mind using tactile to evoke an even stronger image. Well done

August 27th, 2026 03:40

Cusp
sorenbarrett said:

I like this one. It is colorful and personifies the season although even as a person she can not feel. Nicely done and a fave

August 25th, 2026 04:12

Cusp
Paul Bell said:

Yes, the leaves will be falling soon, as the year closes in.
Yet, I think the season has already closed on this girl.

August 25th, 2026 03:12

Silent Bloom
Fränz Müller said:

Beauty and danger often live side by side…

August 23rd, 2026 15:56

Silent Bloom
Paul Bell said:

Yes, the rose isn\'t stupid, it knows how to protect its beauty, by surrounding its self with thorns.

August 23rd, 2026 14:32

Silent Bloom
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautiful meditation on the tension between longing and consequence, reminding us that beauty and danger can exist in the very same moment.

August 23rd, 2026 04:46

Silent Bloom
sorenbarrett said:

A great merging of metaphors to give new meaning. Nicely done

August 23rd, 2026 04:27

After the Rain
Butter said:

I enjoyed this one :3

August 21st, 2026 02:57

The Turning Rose
Butter said:

:3 what a wonderful peace

August 20th, 2026 03:53

The Shadow\'s Pearl
Fränz Müller said:

I imagine a victorian woman on a windswept seashore, with an ancient lighthouse in the distance, dark clouds gathering as she stoops down to pluck a pearl from the water’s edge.

August 19th, 2026 20:00

The Shadow\'s Pearl
soheil khodaparasti said:

This poem is beautiful—quiet, dreamlike, and mysterious.

August 19th, 2026 07:47

The Shadow\'s Pearl
sorenbarrett said:

Surreal and metaphoric it is thought provoking. Well done

August 19th, 2026 04:16

The Shadow\'s Pearl
Demar Desu said:

You are a fan of the ocean

August 19th, 2026 00:25

The Turning Rose
Fränz Müller said:

Beautiful!

August 18th, 2026 17:27

The Turning Rose
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautiful portrayal of the quiet transition from autumn to winter, capturing both the fading beauty of the petals and the promise of sweetness that remains.

August 18th, 2026 09:13

The Turning Rose
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images in so few words

August 18th, 2026 05:34

The Gothic key
soheil khodaparasti said:

A mysterious, gothic atmosphere. I like how the old key becomes a symbol of hope and new beginnings, opening her heart to new wonders.

August 14th, 2026 10:10

The Gothic key
Fränz Müller said:

I love this!

August 14th, 2026 07:34

The Gothic key
sorenbarrett said:

Mystical and magical it in metaphor opens a door. Nicely written Kaz.

August 14th, 2026 07:21

Beneath Aquarius
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture painted in this haiku of the cosmos and times. Well done

August 13th, 2026 04:02

Beneath Aquarius
Fränz Müller said:

Short and sweet, I like it.

August 12th, 2026 22:55

Beneath Aquarius
soheil khodaparasti said:

Brief, delicate, and magical—like a secret revealed by the night sky.

August 12th, 2026 22:53

Blue Silence
Paul Bell said:

Does the blue flame mean you\'re heading to heaven.

August 10th, 2026 16:46

Blue Silence
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautiful and mysterious poem.

August 10th, 2026 16:22

Blue Silence
sorenbarrett said:

This one requires thought and the question becomes what is the blue flame. Well done

August 10th, 2026 14:40

Stained Glass Dove
soheil khodaparasti said:

So much serenity and meaning captured in just a few lines.

August 8th, 2026 23:23

Stained Glass Dove
sorenbarrett said:

A great image created with a possible metaphor as well.

August 8th, 2026 19:14

Beyond Words
soheil khodaparasti said:

A beautiful reflection on how the heart feels what words cannot express.

August 7th, 2026 10:25

Beyond Words
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely said in so few words

August 7th, 2026 10:11

Threshold
soheil khodaparasti said:

Simple yet evocative imagery conveys the quiet hope of letting go and finding emotional release.

August 6th, 2026 01:14

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