Comments received on poems by Kaz
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done
July 16th, 2025 05:14
In shade
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
July 13th, 2025 13:38
Adrift
sorenbarrett said:
A great image cast in this short piece. It gives the image of a search for someone distant one is looking for. (Beware the light of a lighthouse it means there are rocks ahead)
July 6th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great image cast in this short piece. It gives the image of a search for someone distant one is looking for. (Beware the light of a lighthouse it means there are rocks ahead)
July 6th, 2025 03:47
Veil
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku that I continue to try to link together. A thought provoking write
July 3rd, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting haiku that I continue to try to link together. A thought provoking write
July 3rd, 2025 13:00
Veil
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but a sense of the sun banishing the demons of the night, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:53
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong but a sense of the sun banishing the demons of the night, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 12:53
Fly free
sorenbarrett said:
This is a masterful haiku that encapsulates the essence of the haiku, the observation of nature, the action and cutting word. most lovely a fave
June 30th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
This is a masterful haiku that encapsulates the essence of the haiku, the observation of nature, the action and cutting word. most lovely a fave
June 30th, 2025 09:20
Still bloom
Poetic Licence said:
The hidden beauty, or beauty within lovely write
June 27th, 2025 09:15
Poetic Licence said:
The hidden beauty, or beauty within lovely write
June 27th, 2025 09:15
Still bloom
sorenbarrett said:
Reflection on this haiku reveals hidden splendor. A lovely piece
June 27th, 2025 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Reflection on this haiku reveals hidden splendor. A lovely piece
June 27th, 2025 07:40
Within
Poetic Licence said:
As life the calm before the storm, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:35
Poetic Licence said:
As life the calm before the storm, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:35
Within
sorenbarrett said:
A great Haiku that speaks of this relationship between stillness and sound, the calm before the storm. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
A great Haiku that speaks of this relationship between stillness and sound, the calm before the storm. Lovely
June 26th, 2025 16:20
A Warriors Spirit
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images of a beautiful place, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:54
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful images of a beautiful place, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:54
Reflections
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure if haiku or senryu but beautiful in either case. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure if haiku or senryu but beautiful in either case. Very nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:13
Healing
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful blend of haiku and senryu. Most lovely
June 20th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful blend of haiku and senryu. Most lovely
June 20th, 2025 14:05
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful Haiku this one seems to incorporate all the elements that I know of Haiku the five seven five form the nature elements and the cutting word. Very nice.
June 18th, 2025 03:29
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful Haiku this one seems to incorporate all the elements that I know of Haiku the five seven five form the nature elements and the cutting word. Very nice.
June 18th, 2025 03:29
Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Love the mood left by the color and the image of the sea. Very nice
June 17th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
Love the mood left by the color and the image of the sea. Very nice
June 17th, 2025 03:57
Nightfall
NafisaSB said:
night time is the time when the inner feelings spill out, and the solace one seeks comes and wraps a blanket around you
well written
June 17th, 2025 00:37
NafisaSB said:
night time is the time when the inner feelings spill out, and the solace one seeks comes and wraps a blanket around you
well written
June 17th, 2025 00:37
Serene
Tony Grannell said:
How you have defined the word, serene in three beautiful lines is poetic art to behold. Just lovely.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 14:59
Tony Grannell said:
How you have defined the word, serene in three beautiful lines is poetic art to behold. Just lovely.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 14:59
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