Comments received on poems by Kaz
Bluebirds
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image and a great metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 30th, 2026 18:49
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image and a great metaphor as well. Nicely done
August 30th, 2026 18:49
Lustre
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image cast in these words. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful image cast in these words. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:24
Back to Myth
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one it has such a mystical feel to it. Most lovely and a fave
August 28th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one it has such a mystical feel to it. Most lovely and a fave
August 28th, 2026 04:14
Winter\'s Death
sorenbarrett said:
Very picturesque printing s vivid picture in the mind using tactile to evoke an even stronger image. Well done
August 27th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very picturesque printing s vivid picture in the mind using tactile to evoke an even stronger image. Well done
August 27th, 2026 03:40
Cusp
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one. It is colorful and personifies the season although even as a person she can not feel. Nicely done and a fave
August 25th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one. It is colorful and personifies the season although even as a person she can not feel. Nicely done and a fave
August 25th, 2026 04:12
Cusp
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the leaves will be falling soon, as the year closes in.
Yet, I think the season has already closed on this girl.
August 25th, 2026 03:12
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the leaves will be falling soon, as the year closes in.
Yet, I think the season has already closed on this girl.
August 25th, 2026 03:12
Silent Bloom
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the rose isn\'t stupid, it knows how to protect its beauty, by surrounding its self with thorns.
August 23rd, 2026 14:32
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the rose isn\'t stupid, it knows how to protect its beauty, by surrounding its self with thorns.
August 23rd, 2026 14:32
Silent Bloom
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful meditation on the tension between longing and consequence, reminding us that beauty and danger can exist in the very same moment.
August 23rd, 2026 04:46
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful meditation on the tension between longing and consequence, reminding us that beauty and danger can exist in the very same moment.
August 23rd, 2026 04:46
Silent Bloom
sorenbarrett said:
A great merging of metaphors to give new meaning. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A great merging of metaphors to give new meaning. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2026 04:27
The Shadow\'s Pearl
Fränz Müller said:
I imagine a victorian woman on a windswept seashore, with an ancient lighthouse in the distance, dark clouds gathering as she stoops down to pluck a pearl from the water’s edge.
August 19th, 2026 20:00
Fränz Müller said:
I imagine a victorian woman on a windswept seashore, with an ancient lighthouse in the distance, dark clouds gathering as she stoops down to pluck a pearl from the water’s edge.
August 19th, 2026 20:00
The Shadow\'s Pearl
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem is beautiful—quiet, dreamlike, and mysterious.
August 19th, 2026 07:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
This poem is beautiful—quiet, dreamlike, and mysterious.
August 19th, 2026 07:47
The Shadow\'s Pearl
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and metaphoric it is thought provoking. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and metaphoric it is thought provoking. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:16
The Turning Rose
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful portrayal of the quiet transition from autumn to winter, capturing both the fading beauty of the petals and the promise of sweetness that remains.
August 18th, 2026 09:13
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful portrayal of the quiet transition from autumn to winter, capturing both the fading beauty of the petals and the promise of sweetness that remains.
August 18th, 2026 09:13
The Gothic key
soheil khodaparasti said:
A mysterious, gothic atmosphere. I like how the old key becomes a symbol of hope and new beginnings, opening her heart to new wonders.
August 14th, 2026 10:10
soheil khodaparasti said:
A mysterious, gothic atmosphere. I like how the old key becomes a symbol of hope and new beginnings, opening her heart to new wonders.
August 14th, 2026 10:10
The Gothic key
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical and magical it in metaphor opens a door. Nicely written Kaz.
August 14th, 2026 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Mystical and magical it in metaphor opens a door. Nicely written Kaz.
August 14th, 2026 07:21
Beneath Aquarius
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this haiku of the cosmos and times. Well done
August 13th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in this haiku of the cosmos and times. Well done
August 13th, 2026 04:02
Beneath Aquarius
soheil khodaparasti said:
Brief, delicate, and magical—like a secret revealed by the night sky.
August 12th, 2026 22:53
soheil khodaparasti said:
Brief, delicate, and magical—like a secret revealed by the night sky.
August 12th, 2026 22:53
Stained Glass Dove
soheil khodaparasti said:
So much serenity and meaning captured in just a few lines.
August 8th, 2026 23:23
soheil khodaparasti said:
So much serenity and meaning captured in just a few lines.
August 8th, 2026 23:23
Stained Glass Dove
sorenbarrett said:
A great image created with a possible metaphor as well.
August 8th, 2026 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
A great image created with a possible metaphor as well.
August 8th, 2026 19:14
Beyond Words
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reflection on how the heart feels what words cannot express.
August 7th, 2026 10:25
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful reflection on how the heart feels what words cannot express.
August 7th, 2026 10:25
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