Comments received on poems by MKS
The Deer
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely constructed write, with a message that pulls together at the end, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:31
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely constructed write, with a message that pulls together at the end, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:31
The Deer
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written this poem has good rhyme and very nice meter as well as a definite message that is sent in the last stanza tying all together. Very nicely done
April 12th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written this poem has good rhyme and very nice meter as well as a definite message that is sent in the last stanza tying all together. Very nicely done
April 12th, 2025 04:14
Mr. Earls
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem that twists the meaning and gives a fresh feel. (Mr. Earls had conquered love And eagerly waited to join her above) a wonderful line.
April 8th, 2025 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem that twists the meaning and gives a fresh feel. (Mr. Earls had conquered love And eagerly waited to join her above) a wonderful line.
April 8th, 2025 16:35
Waves Of Grain
Poetic Licence said:
Highlights to me there are people who suffer immense tradegy in their life\'s, but somehow they find the strength to carry on. The write highlights the cycle of nature in a touching way enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
Highlights to me there are people who suffer immense tradegy in their life\'s, but somehow they find the strength to carry on. The write highlights the cycle of nature in a touching way enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:29
Waves Of Grain
sorenbarrett said:
The harsh reality of the times. Nature can be cruel and it happens to all equally. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 17:46
sorenbarrett said:
The harsh reality of the times. Nature can be cruel and it happens to all equally. Lovely
March 24th, 2025 17:46
Silent Footsteps
RSM0812 said:
Nice. I like the last line very much. Short and sweet with great imagery.
March 23rd, 2025 05:35
RSM0812 said:
Nice. I like the last line very much. Short and sweet with great imagery.
March 23rd, 2025 05:35
Silent Footsteps
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, highlighting how false and blinkered society can be, nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, highlighting how false and blinkered society can be, nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:03
Silent Footsteps
sorenbarrett said:
Only four lines to convey the falseness of social conventions and how cursory the pleasantries of society are. Very well done a fave
March 22nd, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Only four lines to convey the falseness of social conventions and how cursory the pleasantries of society are. Very well done a fave
March 22nd, 2025 05:26
The Lion
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever take on not everything is always as it appears, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 03:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever take on not everything is always as it appears, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 03:22
The Lion
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard of a wolf in sheep\'s clothing but a sheep in lion\'s clothing I have never heard. A great metaphor and the meaning is clear. Not everything is as it appears and the mightiest may be the lion of the wizard of Ozz. Well written and cleverly worded with good rhyme a fave
March 21st, 2025 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard of a wolf in sheep\'s clothing but a sheep in lion\'s clothing I have never heard. A great metaphor and the meaning is clear. Not everything is as it appears and the mightiest may be the lion of the wizard of Ozz. Well written and cleverly worded with good rhyme a fave
March 21st, 2025 16:47
Guiltless Death
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of someone working thenselves to the bone and dying for nothing, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 03:05
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of someone working thenselves to the bone and dying for nothing, enjoyed the read
March 21st, 2025 03:05
Guiltless Death
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing comparisons and thought provoking ideas in this poem. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing comparisons and thought provoking ideas in this poem. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 13:01
George Escram
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about sometimes we let fear over come us and the impact it can have, as they say the greatest fear you can have is fear itself, nicely expressed and written
March 19th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write about sometimes we let fear over come us and the impact it can have, as they say the greatest fear you can have is fear itself, nicely expressed and written
March 19th, 2025 06:43
George Escram
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about fear and its paralyzing aspects but how in reality it is the fear itself that we fear. Lovely
March 19th, 2025 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about fear and its paralyzing aspects but how in reality it is the fear itself that we fear. Lovely
March 19th, 2025 03:31
