Comments received on poems by amethyste
Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
This write is strong and shows good power. It speaks from darkness and the abyss
April 8th, 2026 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
This write is strong and shows good power. It speaks from darkness and the abyss
April 8th, 2026 15:38
Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
That sounds like a lonely place where even encounters are empty. Well written
April 7th, 2026 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
That sounds like a lonely place where even encounters are empty. Well written
April 7th, 2026 19:29
Albatros Victor
sorenbarrett said:
Nice the albatross can represent good or bad and I take it in this sense it is good. Well written
April 5th, 2026 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Nice the albatross can represent good or bad and I take it in this sense it is good. Well written
April 5th, 2026 15:47
Plastic
sorenbarrett said:
Wax and plastic fruit was never on my menu. I loved this poem and how it builds romantic expectations and then ends in disappointment. Salivating for fruit that turns out to be plastic is a was of time.
April 3rd, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Wax and plastic fruit was never on my menu. I loved this poem and how it builds romantic expectations and then ends in disappointment. Salivating for fruit that turns out to be plastic is a was of time.
April 3rd, 2026 15:59
Dimples
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts and then changes directions and I find that refreshing
March 31st, 2026 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts and then changes directions and I find that refreshing
March 31st, 2026 15:46
You
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual for sure and lustful as well it might be said to be lascivious. Well said
March 30th, 2026 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual for sure and lustful as well it might be said to be lascivious. Well said
March 30th, 2026 15:48
Conversation
Vipassana said:
can\'t say I really get--but I like it nonetheless!
March 29th, 2026 03:52
Vipassana said:
can\'t say I really get--but I like it nonetheless!
March 29th, 2026 03:52
Clock
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
Sea turtle
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
Conversation
sorenbarrett said:
Tock Tock .... Talk Talk the moon Isis all that is, was, or ever will be. A lovely piece
February 9th, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
Tock Tock .... Talk Talk the moon Isis all that is, was, or ever will be. A lovely piece
February 9th, 2026 16:23
Tuck tuck
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of words. It seems maybe a typo. Are you sure it didn\'t start with an F? Good write
February 3rd, 2026 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of words. It seems maybe a typo. Are you sure it didn\'t start with an F? Good write
February 3rd, 2026 17:06
Drugs
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Depends on how much you are willing to give....
January 28th, 2026 23:22
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Depends on how much you are willing to give....
January 28th, 2026 23:22
Warm hand
sorenbarrett said:
That would be enough on almost any night. Well done
January 28th, 2026 19:12
sorenbarrett said:
That would be enough on almost any night. Well done
January 28th, 2026 19:12
Drugs
sorenbarrett said:
With a muse as a supplier and thoughts for payment poems become an addiction. Well I know being a junky. Well done
January 27th, 2026 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
With a muse as a supplier and thoughts for payment poems become an addiction. Well I know being a junky. Well done
January 27th, 2026 17:25
Give me more
sorenbarrett said:
A most alluring write that poses the question of what more do I have to give. Lovely
January 26th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most alluring write that poses the question of what more do I have to give. Lovely
January 26th, 2026 17:36
Give me more
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the theme of inspiration and the longing for creative rejuvenation. The poet expresses a sense of desperation and yearning for artistic stimulation from another person, whom they perceive as a source of inspiration.
January 26th, 2026 16:23
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the theme of inspiration and the longing for creative rejuvenation. The poet expresses a sense of desperation and yearning for artistic stimulation from another person, whom they perceive as a source of inspiration.
January 26th, 2026 16:23
Chasing a butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Time does slow in the memory of moments. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
Time does slow in the memory of moments. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 17:15
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