Comments received on poems by amethyste
Unlovable
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet with quaint imagery and great imagination.
April 20th, 2026 04:39
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet with quaint imagery and great imagination.
April 20th, 2026 04:39
Realiti questions
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection on society this poem speaks to alienation and pent up rage at overpopulation. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection on society this poem speaks to alienation and pent up rage at overpopulation. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 17:01
Laughter
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded the imagery is wonderful and playful
April 15th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded the imagery is wonderful and playful
April 15th, 2026 16:01
Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
This write is strong and shows good power. It speaks from darkness and the abyss
April 8th, 2026 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
This write is strong and shows good power. It speaks from darkness and the abyss
April 8th, 2026 15:38
Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
That sounds like a lonely place where even encounters are empty. Well written
April 7th, 2026 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
That sounds like a lonely place where even encounters are empty. Well written
April 7th, 2026 19:29
Albatros Victor
sorenbarrett said:
Nice the albatross can represent good or bad and I take it in this sense it is good. Well written
April 5th, 2026 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Nice the albatross can represent good or bad and I take it in this sense it is good. Well written
April 5th, 2026 15:47
Plastic
sorenbarrett said:
Wax and plastic fruit was never on my menu. I loved this poem and how it builds romantic expectations and then ends in disappointment. Salivating for fruit that turns out to be plastic is a was of time.
April 3rd, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Wax and plastic fruit was never on my menu. I loved this poem and how it builds romantic expectations and then ends in disappointment. Salivating for fruit that turns out to be plastic is a was of time.
April 3rd, 2026 15:59
Dimples
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts and then changes directions and I find that refreshing
March 31st, 2026 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts and then changes directions and I find that refreshing
March 31st, 2026 15:46
You
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual for sure and lustful as well it might be said to be lascivious. Well said
March 30th, 2026 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual for sure and lustful as well it might be said to be lascivious. Well said
March 30th, 2026 15:48
Conversation
Vipassana said:
can\'t say I really get--but I like it nonetheless!
March 29th, 2026 03:52
Vipassana said:
can\'t say I really get--but I like it nonetheless!
March 29th, 2026 03:52
Clock
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
Sea turtle
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
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