Comments received on poems by amethyste
You
sorenbarrett said:
As short as the time that it took to miss the one you love. Well written.
May 5th, 2025 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
As short as the time that it took to miss the one you love. Well written.
May 5th, 2025 16:32
Night
sorenbarrett said:
Ah to catch such a thing and bottle it, can it tie it down. A fun read
May 4th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
Ah to catch such a thing and bottle it, can it tie it down. A fun read
May 4th, 2025 16:20
Love
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for love in the scents mentioned. A most well written poem so much more cultured and sophisticated that the typical love poem a fave
May 2nd, 2025 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for love in the scents mentioned. A most well written poem so much more cultured and sophisticated that the typical love poem a fave
May 2nd, 2025 14:36
Genuine
Salvia.S said:
Your words are a reflection of your true self, and that\'s beautiful!!
May 1st, 2025 01:59
Salvia.S said:
Your words are a reflection of your true self, and that\'s beautiful!!
May 1st, 2025 01:59
Genuine
sorenbarrett said:
Simple, raw, truth is pouring out of this poem\'s short lines. Poems are the people that write them. A fave
April 30th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
Simple, raw, truth is pouring out of this poem\'s short lines. Poems are the people that write them. A fave
April 30th, 2025 17:00
Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy is a good one it is sensuous and alluring. We would all like to be that free. A very nice write
April 29th, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
The analogy is a good one it is sensuous and alluring. We would all like to be that free. A very nice write
April 29th, 2025 16:23
Awkward
sorenbarrett said:
So many people try to give advice on things that they have no idea about. That is with the concrete and logical let alone the emotional. Good write
April 27th, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
So many people try to give advice on things that they have no idea about. That is with the concrete and logical let alone the emotional. Good write
April 27th, 2025 12:34
The plum tree and the boy
sorenbarrett said:
I sense a metaphor in this poem. Maybe more than one. The one that I get is that beauty is admired by many, most afraid to disturb the beauty stand at a distance and look, it takes innocence to reach out and touch it. It may well be that beauty today will fall tomorrow and give fruit which too will fall with age. A most lovely story
April 26th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
I sense a metaphor in this poem. Maybe more than one. The one that I get is that beauty is admired by many, most afraid to disturb the beauty stand at a distance and look, it takes innocence to reach out and touch it. It may well be that beauty today will fall tomorrow and give fruit which too will fall with age. A most lovely story
April 26th, 2025 16:30
Jasmine
amethyste said:
Thank you for taking time and reading it. Love and hugs.
April 25th, 2025 15:02
amethyste said:
Thank you for taking time and reading it. Love and hugs.
April 25th, 2025 15:02
Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of things. Some are amazing. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of things. Some are amazing. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:32
I miss you
nephilim56 said:
I think weve all been where this poem goes, nice write
April 24th, 2025 07:23
nephilim56 said:
I think weve all been where this poem goes, nice write
April 24th, 2025 07:23
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
Short but sweet the search for what is missing that brings happiness and joy, Be it a person, thought or nature itself there is a wistfulness in this poem. Lovely
April 24th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Short but sweet the search for what is missing that brings happiness and joy, Be it a person, thought or nature itself there is a wistfulness in this poem. Lovely
April 24th, 2025 06:03
Nude
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it exhibitionism and illegal for a man to do this but no one complains if a woman does? A thought provoking read and well written.
April 21st, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it exhibitionism and illegal for a man to do this but no one complains if a woman does? A thought provoking read and well written.
April 21st, 2025 15:17
Nude
MinaH said:
This is a well written and interesting poem although I am a bit confused at the middle
April 21st, 2025 14:31
MinaH said:
This is a well written and interesting poem although I am a bit confused at the middle
April 21st, 2025 14:31
Picking up seashells
amethyste said:
Yes there is a very dear metaphor in here. Thank you for reading it. Hugs.
April 19th, 2025 15:03
amethyste said:
Yes there is a very dear metaphor in here. Thank you for reading it. Hugs.
April 19th, 2025 15:03
Picking up seashells
sorenbarrett said:
Gathering shells I have done many times. Yet in this poem I hear a metaphor as well. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Gathering shells I have done many times. Yet in this poem I hear a metaphor as well. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:42
Almond seed
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of we are not aware of whats going on all around us and see everything, as we are blinkered in our own world, nicely written and expressed
April 17th, 2025 01:33
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of we are not aware of whats going on all around us and see everything, as we are blinkered in our own world, nicely written and expressed
April 17th, 2025 01:33
Almond seed
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with animals and even animals not on an equal level with ourselves. This poem seems to me a plea to see all living things on an equal level. Very nicely done
April 16th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with animals and even animals not on an equal level with ourselves. This poem seems to me a plea to see all living things on an equal level. Very nicely done
April 16th, 2025 16:59
Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very nicely written
April 15th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very nicely written
April 15th, 2025 15:59
New worlds
sorenbarrett said:
We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A lovely short
April 14th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A lovely short
April 14th, 2025 16:20
I miss you
Poetic Licence said:
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
April 13th, 2025 02:02
Poetic Licence said:
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
April 13th, 2025 02:02
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
April 12th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
April 12th, 2025 14:22
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