Comments received on poems by amethyste
Nude
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it exhibitionism and illegal for a man to do this but no one complains if a woman does? A thought provoking read and well written.
April 21st, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it exhibitionism and illegal for a man to do this but no one complains if a woman does? A thought provoking read and well written.
April 21st, 2025 15:17
Nude
MinaH said:
This is a well written and interesting poem although I am a bit confused at the middle
April 21st, 2025 14:31
MinaH said:
This is a well written and interesting poem although I am a bit confused at the middle
April 21st, 2025 14:31
Humanity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Mother Nature, the queen of us all, enjoyed
April 21st, 2025 12:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Mother Nature, the queen of us all, enjoyed
April 21st, 2025 12:08
Picking up seashells
amethyste said:
Yes there is a very dear metaphor in here. Thank you for reading it. Hugs.
April 19th, 2025 15:03
amethyste said:
Yes there is a very dear metaphor in here. Thank you for reading it. Hugs.
April 19th, 2025 15:03
Picking up seashells
sorenbarrett said:
Gathering shells I have done many times. Yet in this poem I hear a metaphor as well. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Gathering shells I have done many times. Yet in this poem I hear a metaphor as well. Nicely written
April 19th, 2025 14:42
Almond seed
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of we are not aware of whats going on all around us and see everything, as we are blinkered in our own world, nicely written and expressed
April 17th, 2025 01:33
Poetic Licence said:
I got a sense of we are not aware of whats going on all around us and see everything, as we are blinkered in our own world, nicely written and expressed
April 17th, 2025 01:33
Almond seed
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with animals and even animals not on an equal level with ourselves. This poem seems to me a plea to see all living things on an equal level. Very nicely done
April 16th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with animals and even animals not on an equal level with ourselves. This poem seems to me a plea to see all living things on an equal level. Very nicely done
April 16th, 2025 16:59
Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very nicely written
April 15th, 2025 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very nicely written
April 15th, 2025 15:59
New worlds
sorenbarrett said:
We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A lovely short
April 14th, 2025 16:20
sorenbarrett said:
We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A lovely short
April 14th, 2025 16:20
I miss you
Poetic Licence said:
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
April 13th, 2025 02:02
Poetic Licence said:
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
April 13th, 2025 02:02
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
April 12th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
April 12th, 2025 14:22
The boy in the bus
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual drive in this poem drives an urge primal. Nicely said
April 11th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual drive in this poem drives an urge primal. Nicely said
April 11th, 2025 18:17
Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and human like. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and human like. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 17:44
I do
Poetic Licence said:
A few erotic and sexual words that say so much, nicely written
April 8th, 2025 06:12
Poetic Licence said:
A few erotic and sexual words that say so much, nicely written
April 8th, 2025 06:12
I do
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sensuous, sexual all three in one short piece, not necessarily the dick.
April 8th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sensuous, sexual all three in one short piece, not necessarily the dick.
April 8th, 2025 04:34
Waiting
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting is a horrible thing to have to do especially if you are expecting, nicely expressed write
April 7th, 2025 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
Waiting is a horrible thing to have to do especially if you are expecting, nicely expressed write
April 7th, 2025 02:35
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is the worst. A poem that captures this well.
April 6th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is the worst. A poem that captures this well.
April 6th, 2025 17:40
Humanity
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read, nature would probably be happy if humanity disappeared it would give it a better chance of survival, lovely write
April 1st, 2025 02:09
Poetic Licence said:
Loved this read, nature would probably be happy if humanity disappeared it would give it a better chance of survival, lovely write
April 1st, 2025 02:09
Dance in the dark
amethyste said:
Thank you for reading it. Much appreciated. Love and hugs.
March 30th, 2025 06:12
amethyste said:
Thank you for reading it. Much appreciated. Love and hugs.
March 30th, 2025 06:12
Calmed down
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like the calming influence of another be it a mother, father, or lover. Very nice
March 29th, 2025 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like the calming influence of another be it a mother, father, or lover. Very nice
March 29th, 2025 11:52
Sheep
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write on how and what we see above us, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 04:29
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write on how and what we see above us, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 04:29
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