Comments received on poems by amethyste
Intrusive thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
The title tells it all with this poem. So many passing thoughts culminating in the end. Lovey
June 19th, 2025 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
The title tells it all with this poem. So many passing thoughts culminating in the end. Lovey
June 19th, 2025 17:54
I love you
Poetic Licence said:
What a lovely way to say i love you, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:02
Poetic Licence said:
What a lovely way to say i love you, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:02
I love you
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet sweet it calls out for love. Very nice
June 16th, 2025 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet sweet it calls out for love. Very nice
June 16th, 2025 16:04
City
sorenbarrett said:
Now that makes me wonder about what problems are legit in the city and not elsewhere.
June 15th, 2025 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
Now that makes me wonder about what problems are legit in the city and not elsewhere.
June 15th, 2025 15:40
Muse
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing poem of one to the muse. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 17:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing poem of one to the muse. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 17:19
Damn
RSM0812 said:
Great message. We are our own person and have the right to be who we are. Pleasing people too much will get a person taken advantage of.
June 8th, 2025 08:55
RSM0812 said:
Great message. We are our own person and have the right to be who we are. Pleasing people too much will get a person taken advantage of.
June 8th, 2025 08:55
Boy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has a strong and inviting beginning with a most accepting approach to the relationship. Very nice
June 6th, 2025 15:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has a strong and inviting beginning with a most accepting approach to the relationship. Very nice
June 6th, 2025 15:26
Blue day
Poetic Licence said:
Takes your mind away for a little while, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:05
Poetic Licence said:
Takes your mind away for a little while, nicely expressed
June 5th, 2025 00:05
Blue day
sorenbarrett said:
Not so blue then, hopefully a better day. Good write
June 4th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Not so blue then, hopefully a better day. Good write
June 4th, 2025 16:11
Ranks
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking write the question becomes is it hard to visualize because it is too small, too large, too close or too far away? Well dome.
June 3rd, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking write the question becomes is it hard to visualize because it is too small, too large, too close or too far away? Well dome.
June 3rd, 2025 16:06
Cracks
sorenbarrett said:
I think that my thoughts fell through the cracks and were gathered up and put in the pocket of a corpse to be saved for a good day. Fun read
May 31st, 2025 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
I think that my thoughts fell through the cracks and were gathered up and put in the pocket of a corpse to be saved for a good day. Fun read
May 31st, 2025 17:32
God
Poetic Licence said:
A thought inspiring write around being understood and listened to, weather that be in religion or normal life, particularly when their prayers or requests are not delivered, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:21
Poetic Licence said:
A thought inspiring write around being understood and listened to, weather that be in religion or normal life, particularly when their prayers or requests are not delivered, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:21
God
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for prayer and people asking and not receiving and wondering why. Why would God speak any of our languages and why should we have the audacity to think he should? A most mind provoking poem well done a fave
May 29th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for prayer and people asking and not receiving and wondering why. Why would God speak any of our languages and why should we have the audacity to think he should? A most mind provoking poem well done a fave
May 29th, 2025 15:57
Strange dream
Poetic Licence said:
Were it belonged along with the message, nicely expressed
May 28th, 2025 02:05
Poetic Licence said:
Were it belonged along with the message, nicely expressed
May 28th, 2025 02:05
Strange dream
sorenbarrett said:
And out the window it should go with the thought as well. Well done
May 27th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
And out the window it should go with the thought as well. Well done
May 27th, 2025 17:06
Destina
Poetic Licence said:
A true friend is priceless and rare, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 02:17
Poetic Licence said:
A true friend is priceless and rare, enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 02:17
Sleeping with you
Poetic Licence said:
Evocative and straight to the point, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
Evocative and straight to the point, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 02:23
Sleeping with you
sorenbarrett said:
Short and seductive this poem pulls no punches. Well done
May 23rd, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Short and seductive this poem pulls no punches. Well done
May 23rd, 2025 15:39
Nothing
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write expressing that sometimes it is best just to give a simple answer but also highlighting someone only understanding something in monetary terms, which alot of people do , nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 12:34
Poetic Licence said:
A clever write expressing that sometimes it is best just to give a simple answer but also highlighting someone only understanding something in monetary terms, which alot of people do , nicely expressed and written
May 22nd, 2025 12:34
Nothing
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Well written. Sometimes it\'s better to remain silent when others can\'t understand. This piece expresses that feeling beautifully.
May 22nd, 2025 12:21
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Well written. Sometimes it\'s better to remain silent when others can\'t understand. This piece expresses that feeling beautifully.
May 22nd, 2025 12:21
Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes that\'s the best answer. People don\'t understand. Well done
May 22nd, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes that\'s the best answer. People don\'t understand. Well done
May 22nd, 2025 10:52
Sophie
sorenbarrett said:
In this piece it is shown that things are not always what they appear to be. A lovely write and fable
May 18th, 2025 18:05
sorenbarrett said:
In this piece it is shown that things are not always what they appear to be. A lovely write and fable
May 18th, 2025 18:05
My boyfriend\'s cat
sorenbarrett said:
A touch can mean more than anything else. A very nice write of something beyond words.
May 15th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
A touch can mean more than anything else. A very nice write of something beyond words.
May 15th, 2025 12:56
Leopard
sorenbarrett said:
Well described, sensuous and an admiration of the human body. I can hear the pride in owning it. Lovely
May 14th, 2025 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
Well described, sensuous and an admiration of the human body. I can hear the pride in owning it. Lovely
May 14th, 2025 16:52
Earthquake
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor and such a true thing said in the last two lines. So well said.
May 13th, 2025 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor and such a true thing said in the last two lines. So well said.
May 13th, 2025 17:23
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