Comments received on poems by amethyste



Sophie
sorenbarrett said:

In this piece it is shown that things are not always what they appear to be. A lovely write and fable

May 18th, 2025 18:05

My boyfriend\'s cat
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

May 15th, 2025 13:02

My boyfriend\'s cat
sorenbarrett said:

A touch can mean more than anything else. A very nice write of something beyond words.

May 15th, 2025 12:56

Leopard
sorenbarrett said:

Well described, sensuous and an admiration of the human body. I can hear the pride in owning it. Lovely

May 14th, 2025 16:52

Earthquake
sorenbarrett said:

What a great metaphor and such a true thing said in the last two lines. So well said.

May 13th, 2025 17:23

Work
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of power and lack of flexibility that has its own karma. A common thing we have all seen. Nicely told.

May 12th, 2025 16:48

Hush
Poetic Licence said:

The implications of this are wonderful, very nicely done

May 12th, 2025 02:09

Hush
sorenbarrett said:

I loved it, are we not all made of mud? A fave

May 11th, 2025 14:46

Night
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of inner feelings running on the sensuous side, enjoyed the read

May 11th, 2025 02:24

Night
sorenbarrett said:

Deep feelings that are naturally sensuous and seductive. Well written

May 10th, 2025 16:07

Poem
Poetic Licence said:

Is that a tender way of saying goodbye, nicely composed

May 10th, 2025 02:26

Poem
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and worrisome that there might not be any more poetry. A most interesting write.

May 9th, 2025 16:32

I miss you
RSM0812 said:

It\'s hard to loose someone. Hopefully the wall doesn\'t talk back. Lol

May 8th, 2025 06:18

You
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely written piece, touch of romance, enjoyed the read

May 7th, 2025 02:13

You
Salvia.S said:

Short but lovely. Nicely done!!!

May 6th, 2025 21:53

You
sorenbarrett said:

A good metaphor for a romantic subject. Nicely said

May 6th, 2025 15:30

You
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 5th, 2025 17:18

You
sorenbarrett said:

As short as the time that it took to miss the one you love. Well written.

May 5th, 2025 16:32

Night
sorenbarrett said:

Ah to catch such a thing and bottle it, can it tie it down. A fun read

May 4th, 2025 16:20

To stare
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of desire and passion. Nicely written

May 3rd, 2025 16:19

Love
Salvia.S said:

Lovely!!!

May 2nd, 2025 22:00

Love
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor for love in the scents mentioned. A most well written poem so much more cultured and sophisticated that the typical love poem a fave

May 2nd, 2025 14:36

Genuine
sunshine777 said:

Perfectly honest

May 1st, 2025 14:32

Genuine
Salvia.S said:

Your words are a reflection of your true self, and that\'s beautiful!!

May 1st, 2025 01:59

Genuine
sorenbarrett said:

Simple, raw, truth is pouring out of this poem\'s short lines. Poems are the people that write them. A fave

April 30th, 2025 17:00

Jasmine
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful write!!!

April 29th, 2025 21:45

Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:

The analogy is a good one it is sensuous and alluring. We would all like to be that free. A very nice write

April 29th, 2025 16:23

Awkward
sorenbarrett said:

So many people try to give advice on things that they have no idea about. That is with the concrete and logical let alone the emotional. Good write

April 27th, 2025 12:34

The plum tree and the boy
sorenbarrett said:

I sense a metaphor in this poem. Maybe more than one. The one that I get is that beauty is admired by many, most afraid to disturb the beauty stand at a distance and look, it takes innocence to reach out and touch it. It may well be that beauty today will fall tomorrow and give fruit which too will fall with age. A most lovely story

April 26th, 2025 16:30

Jasmine
amethyste said:

Thank you for taking time and reading it. Love and hugs.

April 25th, 2025 15:02

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