Comments received on poems by amethyste



Love
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful statement of a pictured event. Lovely

November 21st, 2025 17:10

You
William Hromada said:

Beautiful

November 21st, 2025 14:40

You
sorenbarrett said:

A sense of being attracted to beauty and awaiting it to reappear. Well done

November 20th, 2025 19:09

Excuse
sorenbarrett said:

Charming, a poem that left me with a smile. Nicely done

November 19th, 2025 16:51

Erection
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:

That is very vivid and deeply personal. Rather intimate being so short and uncompromising. Thanks for that perspective.

November 17th, 2025 10:32

Fully dimensional
sorenbarrett said:

What a wonderful thing to do create oneself in poetry. Lovely

November 15th, 2025 16:13

Violent
sorenbarrett said:

Yes why the city, is it more people or more stress. Mind provoking

November 14th, 2025 16:32

Boredom
sorenbarrett said:

Gasoline and a light what a way to go. A good read

November 10th, 2025 18:29

Fame
sorenbarrett said:

Age matters not, we all have to grow up at some point of die an infant death. A poignant write

November 9th, 2025 13:49

True to my soul
sorenbarrett said:

A powerful statement. I believe we all do. I feel that everyone does the best they can knowing what they know at the time and with the tools that they have to work with. Why would we not? It is just that some people have more to work with than others do. A lovely write

November 8th, 2025 17:30

Sunny days
sorenbarrett said:

Great metaphor nicely placed in this poem.

November 7th, 2025 16:05

April
sorenbarrett said:

I suppose that they do. They certainly bloom that time of year and this may be a metaphor as well. Nicely done

November 6th, 2025 20:40

Underneath water
sorenbarrett said:

This may be taken in different ways leaving it enigmatic and most poetic. Well worded

November 6th, 2025 04:26

Pomegranate flowers
sorenbarrett said:

A stunning and most colorful image. Nicely done

November 4th, 2025 17:36

I tried
NinjaGirl said:

Yes. And it goes on. I like this poem a lot, well done

November 3rd, 2025 22:24

I tried
sorenbarrett said:

An echo in a poem and an emphasis as well. Most interesting.

November 3rd, 2025 18:09

Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

An interesting choice. I would say all three. Good read

November 2nd, 2025 19:03

God in you
sorenbarrett said:

Love this one. It is probably why people refer to themselves as (I am)

November 1st, 2025 18:29

Fishnet
Rocky Lagou said:

Same. I capture a moment, a poem, a thought. And then it’s gone.

November 1st, 2025 01:25

Fishnet
shadowbones said:

I like your poem

October 31st, 2025 22:58

Fishnet
sorenbarrett said:

Clever write. Well done.

October 31st, 2025 17:25

Heart fibrilation
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and with a hurried sense to meet. Well written

October 30th, 2025 18:16

Poetry is madness
sorenbarrett said:

Poetry a therapy and an end in and of itself. Lovely

October 29th, 2025 16:29

Stillness
sorenbarrett said:

Mysterious this poem poses a race and giving. Nicely written

October 27th, 2025 17:45

A path to the moon
sorenbarrett said:

Some feel that they are on the moon when romance strikes and the moon has always been associated with love

October 26th, 2025 17:24

In the forest
sorenbarrett said:

I am still trying to link these together and I like that

October 25th, 2025 16:43

Bees
Friendship said:

Well said, your poem reflects on the universal pursuit of desires and the repetitive nature of life, likening human experiences to the relentless quest of bees for flowers. The fog of stillness suggests a sense of introspection and existential contemplation.

October 25th, 2025 09:41

Bees
sorenbarrett said:

There is deeper meaning in this. We are all chasing something indeed. We go through mindless actions waiting to find it. A well thought out write

October 24th, 2025 16:26

Erection
sorenbarrett said:

Sexual, erotic and sensual clearly stated.

October 22nd, 2025 16:14

If only
sorenbarrett said:

If only indeed. A wish a dream but alas \'tis but that in a world of electronic communication and deception. Very nicely written

October 21st, 2025 16:27

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