Comments received on poems by amethyste
Clock
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
The glass face shows the time underneath. The gears lay hidden. Well done
March 16th, 2026 19:32
Sea turtle
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
Vipassana said:
beautifully written. deceptively simple. thanks for writing it.
February 16th, 2026 20:27
Conversation
sorenbarrett said:
Tock Tock .... Talk Talk the moon Isis all that is, was, or ever will be. A lovely piece
February 9th, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
Tock Tock .... Talk Talk the moon Isis all that is, was, or ever will be. A lovely piece
February 9th, 2026 16:23
Tuck tuck
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of words. It seems maybe a typo. Are you sure it didn\'t start with an F? Good write
February 3rd, 2026 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice of words. It seems maybe a typo. Are you sure it didn\'t start with an F? Good write
February 3rd, 2026 17:06
Drugs
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Depends on how much you are willing to give....
January 28th, 2026 23:22
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Depends on how much you are willing to give....
January 28th, 2026 23:22
Warm hand
sorenbarrett said:
That would be enough on almost any night. Well done
January 28th, 2026 19:12
sorenbarrett said:
That would be enough on almost any night. Well done
January 28th, 2026 19:12
Drugs
sorenbarrett said:
With a muse as a supplier and thoughts for payment poems become an addiction. Well I know being a junky. Well done
January 27th, 2026 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
With a muse as a supplier and thoughts for payment poems become an addiction. Well I know being a junky. Well done
January 27th, 2026 17:25
Give me more
sorenbarrett said:
A most alluring write that poses the question of what more do I have to give. Lovely
January 26th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most alluring write that poses the question of what more do I have to give. Lovely
January 26th, 2026 17:36
Give me more
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the theme of inspiration and the longing for creative rejuvenation. The poet expresses a sense of desperation and yearning for artistic stimulation from another person, whom they perceive as a source of inspiration.
January 26th, 2026 16:23
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the theme of inspiration and the longing for creative rejuvenation. The poet expresses a sense of desperation and yearning for artistic stimulation from another person, whom they perceive as a source of inspiration.
January 26th, 2026 16:23
Chasing a butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Time does slow in the memory of moments. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
Time does slow in the memory of moments. A lovely write
January 21st, 2026 17:15
Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
A most sexual invitation to one\'s lover in this poem. A strong write
January 19th, 2026 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
A most sexual invitation to one\'s lover in this poem. A strong write
January 19th, 2026 18:48
Flowers
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting question. Why do we love anything at all? Attraction the is nonsurvival related is a good question. Well done
January 15th, 2026 19:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting question. Why do we love anything at all? Attraction the is nonsurvival related is a good question. Well done
January 15th, 2026 19:33
Flowers
lunarchloedip said:
i quite enjoy a good belt actually 🙃 but love this.
\"Why does a piece of the abyss,
Like this other specific piece of abyss?\"
perfectly worded. thanks for sharing!
January 15th, 2026 19:10
lunarchloedip said:
i quite enjoy a good belt actually 🙃 but love this.
\"Why does a piece of the abyss,
Like this other specific piece of abyss?\"
perfectly worded. thanks for sharing!
January 15th, 2026 19:10
Yearn for you
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Unapologetic and raw. What a beautiful teasing tempo. I can feel the desire coming off the words. Reminds Me of good times.....
January 14th, 2026 00:45
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
Unapologetic and raw. What a beautiful teasing tempo. I can feel the desire coming off the words. Reminds Me of good times.....
January 14th, 2026 00:45
Yearn for you
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, this poem speaks of intimacies leading to better things.
January 13th, 2026 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual, sexual, this poem speaks of intimacies leading to better things.
January 13th, 2026 16:56
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
It is the twist that gets the fave in this poem where oranges and apricots turn to plastic
January 10th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
It is the twist that gets the fave in this poem where oranges and apricots turn to plastic
January 10th, 2026 08:26
Why do you do something
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about defining the reasons for the existent. Well stated
January 8th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about defining the reasons for the existent. Well stated
January 8th, 2026 19:11
Gloomy day
William Hromada said:
I see a man trying to be better daily! What do you see?
January 8th, 2026 15:53
William Hromada said:
I see a man trying to be better daily! What do you see?
January 8th, 2026 15:53
Missing you
William Hromada said:
I feel like that a lot, anxiety I need to lose
January 8th, 2026 15:49
William Hromada said:
I feel like that a lot, anxiety I need to lose
January 8th, 2026 15:49
Eagles
sorenbarrett said:
An observer as leaf, or ghost a fly on the wall. Very nice
January 7th, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
An observer as leaf, or ghost a fly on the wall. Very nice
January 7th, 2026 17:54
She was beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell her fragrance it is sweet. Very fruity.
January 6th, 2026 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell her fragrance it is sweet. Very fruity.
January 6th, 2026 16:48
Sea turtle
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is intensely familiar. As if you based your turtles life on My own. I can relate and appreciate this poem, since it gravitates towards My own desire to have a life that wasn\'t given to Me, nor will I ever be allowed to have. Beautiful and captivating in its innocence.
I may have just twisted it to fill My own desired outcome of what it represents, but that\'s the beauty of art. 😉🫶🏼
January 6th, 2026 11:34
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
That is intensely familiar. As if you based your turtles life on My own. I can relate and appreciate this poem, since it gravitates towards My own desire to have a life that wasn\'t given to Me, nor will I ever be allowed to have. Beautiful and captivating in its innocence.
I may have just twisted it to fill My own desired outcome of what it represents, but that\'s the beauty of art. 😉🫶🏼
January 6th, 2026 11:34
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