Comments received on poems by amethyste
April
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose that they do. They certainly bloom that time of year and this may be a metaphor as well. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose that they do. They certainly bloom that time of year and this may be a metaphor as well. Nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:40
Underneath water
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in different ways leaving it enigmatic and most poetic. Well worded
November 6th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This may be taken in different ways leaving it enigmatic and most poetic. Well worded
November 6th, 2025 04:26
Pomegranate flowers
sorenbarrett said:
A stunning and most colorful image. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
A stunning and most colorful image. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 17:36
I tried
NinjaGirl said:
Yes. And it goes on. I like this poem a lot, well done
November 3rd, 2025 22:24
NinjaGirl said:
Yes. And it goes on. I like this poem a lot, well done
November 3rd, 2025 22:24
I tried
sorenbarrett said:
An echo in a poem and an emphasis as well. Most interesting.
November 3rd, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
An echo in a poem and an emphasis as well. Most interesting.
November 3rd, 2025 18:09
Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice. I would say all three. Good read
November 2nd, 2025 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting choice. I would say all three. Good read
November 2nd, 2025 19:03
God in you
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one. It is probably why people refer to themselves as (I am)
November 1st, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one. It is probably why people refer to themselves as (I am)
November 1st, 2025 18:29
Fishnet
Rocky Lagou said:
Same. I capture a moment, a poem, a thought. And then it’s gone.
November 1st, 2025 01:25
Rocky Lagou said:
Same. I capture a moment, a poem, a thought. And then it’s gone.
November 1st, 2025 01:25
Heart fibrilation
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with a hurried sense to meet. Well written
October 30th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with a hurried sense to meet. Well written
October 30th, 2025 18:16
Poetry is madness
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a therapy and an end in and of itself. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a therapy and an end in and of itself. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 16:29
Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem poses a race and giving. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 17:45
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem poses a race and giving. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 17:45
A path to the moon
sorenbarrett said:
Some feel that they are on the moon when romance strikes and the moon has always been associated with love
October 26th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Some feel that they are on the moon when romance strikes and the moon has always been associated with love
October 26th, 2025 17:24
In the forest
sorenbarrett said:
I am still trying to link these together and I like that
October 25th, 2025 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
I am still trying to link these together and I like that
October 25th, 2025 16:43
Bees
Friendship said:
Well said, your poem reflects on the universal pursuit of desires and the repetitive nature of life, likening human experiences to the relentless quest of bees for flowers. The fog of stillness suggests a sense of introspection and existential contemplation.
October 25th, 2025 09:41
Friendship said:
Well said, your poem reflects on the universal pursuit of desires and the repetitive nature of life, likening human experiences to the relentless quest of bees for flowers. The fog of stillness suggests a sense of introspection and existential contemplation.
October 25th, 2025 09:41
Bees
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this. We are all chasing something indeed. We go through mindless actions waiting to find it. A well thought out write
October 24th, 2025 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this. We are all chasing something indeed. We go through mindless actions waiting to find it. A well thought out write
October 24th, 2025 16:26
If only
sorenbarrett said:
If only indeed. A wish a dream but alas \'tis but that in a world of electronic communication and deception. Very nicely written
October 21st, 2025 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
If only indeed. A wish a dream but alas \'tis but that in a world of electronic communication and deception. Very nicely written
October 21st, 2025 16:27
Ylang ylang
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting it had a metallic feel to it somehow.
October 20th, 2025 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting it had a metallic feel to it somehow.
October 20th, 2025 17:12
Smoking a cigarette
sorenbarrett said:
Burning at the end and smoked despite any warning. A great write
October 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
Burning at the end and smoked despite any warning. A great write
October 17th, 2025 16:00
Knock knock
sorenbarrett said:
Was that me knocking. Hello I guess. Most interesting this short. A window to the matrix?
October 16th, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Was that me knocking. Hello I guess. Most interesting this short. A window to the matrix?
October 16th, 2025 18:29
Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can see that. How many heads I would like to dig into. Very nice
October 15th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can see that. How many heads I would like to dig into. Very nice
October 15th, 2025 15:57
Ylang ylang
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that seems to say whatever helps is the way to go.
October 12th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that seems to say whatever helps is the way to go.
October 12th, 2025 12:26
Grey
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that puzzles me and I like that. Well done
October 11th, 2025 15:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that puzzles me and I like that. Well done
October 11th, 2025 15:33
Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:
Visceral this poem leaving the feeling of being cleansed by the light of night. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Visceral this poem leaving the feeling of being cleansed by the light of night. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 18:07
Moonlight
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed that thought, bathe in the moonlight, pleasure to read
October 10th, 2025 17:00
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed that thought, bathe in the moonlight, pleasure to read
October 10th, 2025 17:00
« Return to the profile of amethyste
