Comments received on poems by amethyste
Leopard moon
sorenbarrett said:
The craters seem as spots in a full moon. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
The craters seem as spots in a full moon. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 16:45
Devil smile
Soman Ragavan said:
A smile is a most dangerous weapon. It can conquer with little effort, it can put you off your guard, it can disarm you and lead to your downfall.
\"A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities. \"
--Herman Melville (1819-1891)
“The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose.
An evil soul producing holy witness
Is like a villain with smiling cheek,
A goodly apple rotten at heart;
O, what a goodly outside falsehood hath !”
--Shakespeare : The Merchant of Venice, Act 1, Scene 3, lines 91 –95
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October 6th, 2025 20:52
Soman Ragavan said:
A smile is a most dangerous weapon. It can conquer with little effort, it can put you off your guard, it can disarm you and lead to your downfall.
\"A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities. \"
--Herman Melville (1819-1891)
“The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose.
An evil soul producing holy witness
Is like a villain with smiling cheek,
A goodly apple rotten at heart;
O, what a goodly outside falsehood hath !”
--Shakespeare : The Merchant of Venice, Act 1, Scene 3, lines 91 –95
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October 6th, 2025 20:52
Pink jasmine
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the intimate connection between language and perception, highlighting how words can evoke strong emotions and vivid imagery in someone\'s mind. It suggests a desire for deeper communication and understanding through the act of creating art with words.
October 4th, 2025 10:05
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the intimate connection between language and perception, highlighting how words can evoke strong emotions and vivid imagery in someone\'s mind. It suggests a desire for deeper communication and understanding through the act of creating art with words.
October 4th, 2025 10:05
Pink jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
Jasmin such a beautiful scent evoking a tone for this write. Most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
Jasmin such a beautiful scent evoking a tone for this write. Most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 15:34
White balconies
sorenbarrett said:
A sexual poem of desire, sensual and erotic it pulses with energy.
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
A sexual poem of desire, sensual and erotic it pulses with energy.
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
Encryption of light
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one make the mind sweat, and the brain burn until thoughts turn turbid. Well done
October 1st, 2025 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one make the mind sweat, and the brain burn until thoughts turn turbid. Well done
October 1st, 2025 16:21
Bad memories
sorenbarrett said:
They can not be deleted only painted over. A thought provoking write well done and a fave
September 29th, 2025 17:45
sorenbarrett said:
They can not be deleted only painted over. A thought provoking write well done and a fave
September 29th, 2025 17:45
Glitch
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a question that seems a common one that many people ask. My answer is that the world does not care but some people do. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a question that seems a common one that many people ask. My answer is that the world does not care but some people do. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 16:03
Scars
RSM0812 said:
This shory piece explains the unfortunate nature of some people. They usually don\'t even know they are doing it most of the time. Nice short ✍️
September 24th, 2025 20:36
RSM0812 said:
This shory piece explains the unfortunate nature of some people. They usually don\'t even know they are doing it most of the time. Nice short ✍️
September 24th, 2025 20:36
Doubts
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be deceived by first impressions. Good write
September 23rd, 2025 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be deceived by first impressions. Good write
September 23rd, 2025 16:04
Angry
sorenbarrett said:
Anger has a home with no windows. A poem with so few lines but most focused
September 22nd, 2025 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
Anger has a home with no windows. A poem with so few lines but most focused
September 22nd, 2025 15:32
A little plant
sorenbarrett said:
I can picture this so well. It is beautiful and something I see every time I walk through the forest. Lovsly
September 21st, 2025 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
I can picture this so well. It is beautiful and something I see every time I walk through the forest. Lovsly
September 21st, 2025 15:02
Weird
sorenbarrett said:
The poem left the feeling of weird and one questions what is contained in hollows and walls. But with weird one can not define it or it would not be weird. Nice
September 19th, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
The poem left the feeling of weird and one questions what is contained in hollows and walls. But with weird one can not define it or it would not be weird. Nice
September 19th, 2025 19:43
Humble
sorenbarrett said:
Humility a virtue but when it becomes overwhelming it can be debilitating. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
Humility a virtue but when it becomes overwhelming it can be debilitating. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 14:00
Flame
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is no handle, corners or shape to a flame. Nicely doen
September 13th, 2025 16:05
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is no handle, corners or shape to a flame. Nicely doen
September 13th, 2025 16:05
Angle
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting wording in this poem that takes the mind on a journey
September 12th, 2025 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting wording in this poem that takes the mind on a journey
September 12th, 2025 16:04
Seed
sorenbarrett said:
This read was mind provoking and as the chord unwound the idea was birthed. Well done
September 11th, 2025 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
This read was mind provoking and as the chord unwound the idea was birthed. Well done
September 11th, 2025 18:45
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