Comments received on poems by amethyste
Heart fibrilation
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with a hurried sense to meet. Well written
October 30th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and with a hurried sense to meet. Well written
October 30th, 2025 18:16
Poetry is madness
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a therapy and an end in and of itself. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry a therapy and an end in and of itself. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 16:29
Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem poses a race and giving. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 17:45
sorenbarrett said:
Mysterious this poem poses a race and giving. Nicely written
October 27th, 2025 17:45
A path to the moon
sorenbarrett said:
Some feel that they are on the moon when romance strikes and the moon has always been associated with love
October 26th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
Some feel that they are on the moon when romance strikes and the moon has always been associated with love
October 26th, 2025 17:24
In the forest
sorenbarrett said:
I am still trying to link these together and I like that
October 25th, 2025 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
I am still trying to link these together and I like that
October 25th, 2025 16:43
Bees
Friendship said:
Well said, your poem reflects on the universal pursuit of desires and the repetitive nature of life, likening human experiences to the relentless quest of bees for flowers. The fog of stillness suggests a sense of introspection and existential contemplation.
October 25th, 2025 09:41
Friendship said:
Well said, your poem reflects on the universal pursuit of desires and the repetitive nature of life, likening human experiences to the relentless quest of bees for flowers. The fog of stillness suggests a sense of introspection and existential contemplation.
October 25th, 2025 09:41
Bees
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this. We are all chasing something indeed. We go through mindless actions waiting to find it. A well thought out write
October 24th, 2025 16:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this. We are all chasing something indeed. We go through mindless actions waiting to find it. A well thought out write
October 24th, 2025 16:26
If only
sorenbarrett said:
If only indeed. A wish a dream but alas \'tis but that in a world of electronic communication and deception. Very nicely written
October 21st, 2025 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
If only indeed. A wish a dream but alas \'tis but that in a world of electronic communication and deception. Very nicely written
October 21st, 2025 16:27
Ylang ylang
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting it had a metallic feel to it somehow.
October 20th, 2025 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting it had a metallic feel to it somehow.
October 20th, 2025 17:12
Smoking a cigarette
sorenbarrett said:
Burning at the end and smoked despite any warning. A great write
October 17th, 2025 16:00
sorenbarrett said:
Burning at the end and smoked despite any warning. A great write
October 17th, 2025 16:00
Knock knock
sorenbarrett said:
Was that me knocking. Hello I guess. Most interesting this short. A window to the matrix?
October 16th, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Was that me knocking. Hello I guess. Most interesting this short. A window to the matrix?
October 16th, 2025 18:29
Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can see that. How many heads I would like to dig into. Very nice
October 15th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I can see that. How many heads I would like to dig into. Very nice
October 15th, 2025 15:57
Ylang ylang
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that seems to say whatever helps is the way to go.
October 12th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that seems to say whatever helps is the way to go.
October 12th, 2025 12:26
Grey
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that puzzles me and I like that. Well done
October 11th, 2025 15:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that puzzles me and I like that. Well done
October 11th, 2025 15:33
Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:
Visceral this poem leaving the feeling of being cleansed by the light of night. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Visceral this poem leaving the feeling of being cleansed by the light of night. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 18:07
Moonlight
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed that thought, bathe in the moonlight, pleasure to read
October 10th, 2025 17:00
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed that thought, bathe in the moonlight, pleasure to read
October 10th, 2025 17:00
Leopard moon
sorenbarrett said:
The craters seem as spots in a full moon. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
The craters seem as spots in a full moon. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 16:45
Devil smile
Soman Ragavan said:
A smile is a most dangerous weapon. It can conquer with little effort, it can put you off your guard, it can disarm you and lead to your downfall.
\"A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities. \"
--Herman Melville (1819-1891)
“The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose.
An evil soul producing holy witness
Is like a villain with smiling cheek,
A goodly apple rotten at heart;
O, what a goodly outside falsehood hath !”
--Shakespeare : The Merchant of Venice, Act 1, Scene 3, lines 91 –95
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October 6th, 2025 20:52
Soman Ragavan said:
A smile is a most dangerous weapon. It can conquer with little effort, it can put you off your guard, it can disarm you and lead to your downfall.
\"A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities. \"
--Herman Melville (1819-1891)
“The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose.
An evil soul producing holy witness
Is like a villain with smiling cheek,
A goodly apple rotten at heart;
O, what a goodly outside falsehood hath !”
--Shakespeare : The Merchant of Venice, Act 1, Scene 3, lines 91 –95
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October 6th, 2025 20:52
Pink jasmine
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the intimate connection between language and perception, highlighting how words can evoke strong emotions and vivid imagery in someone\'s mind. It suggests a desire for deeper communication and understanding through the act of creating art with words.
October 4th, 2025 10:05
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the intimate connection between language and perception, highlighting how words can evoke strong emotions and vivid imagery in someone\'s mind. It suggests a desire for deeper communication and understanding through the act of creating art with words.
October 4th, 2025 10:05
Pink jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
Jasmin such a beautiful scent evoking a tone for this write. Most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
Jasmin such a beautiful scent evoking a tone for this write. Most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 15:34
White balconies
sorenbarrett said:
A sexual poem of desire, sensual and erotic it pulses with energy.
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
A sexual poem of desire, sensual and erotic it pulses with energy.
October 2nd, 2025 16:02
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