Comments received on poems by amethyste



I miss you
nephilim56 said:

I think weve all been where this poem goes, nice write

April 24th, 2025 07:23

I miss you
sorenbarrett said:

Short but sweet the search for what is missing that brings happiness and joy, Be it a person, thought or nature itself there is a wistfulness in this poem. Lovely

April 24th, 2025 06:03

Violets
sorenbarrett said:

Now there is a metaphor indeed. Lovely short.

April 23rd, 2025 05:48

Nude
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

April 21st, 2025 16:44

Nude
sorenbarrett said:

Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it exhibitionism and illegal for a man to do this but no one complains if a woman does? A thought provoking read and well written.

April 21st, 2025 15:17

Nude
MinaH said:

This is a well written and interesting poem although I am a bit confused at the middle

April 21st, 2025 14:31

Humanity
nephilim56 said:

Mother Nature, the queen of us all, enjoyed

April 21st, 2025 12:08

I miss you
nephilim56 said:

touching, a great write

April 20th, 2025 11:55

Picking up seashells
amethyste said:

Yes there is a very dear metaphor in here. Thank you for reading it. Hugs.

April 19th, 2025 15:03

Picking up seashells
sorenbarrett said:

Gathering shells I have done many times. Yet in this poem I hear a metaphor as well. Nicely written

April 19th, 2025 14:42

Almond seed
Poetic Licence said:

I got a sense of we are not aware of whats going on all around us and see everything, as we are blinkered in our own world, nicely written and expressed

April 17th, 2025 01:33

Almond seed
sorenbarrett said:

How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with animals and even animals not on an equal level with ourselves. This poem seems to me a plea to see all living things on an equal level. Very nicely done

April 16th, 2025 16:59

Ocean
sorenbarrett said:

We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very nicely written

April 15th, 2025 15:59

New worlds
sorenbarrett said:

We would all like a reset button on life but I haven\'t found it yet. A lovely short

April 14th, 2025 16:20

I miss you
Poetic Licence said:

Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed

April 13th, 2025 02:02

I miss you
sorenbarrett said:

Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.

April 12th, 2025 14:22

I miss you
Libellule said:

This aches

April 12th, 2025 13:53

The boy in the bus
sorenbarrett said:

Sexual drive in this poem drives an urge primal. Nicely said

April 11th, 2025 18:17

Jasmine
Poetic Licence said:

A flower with human quality\'s, enjoyable read

April 11th, 2025 02:14

Jasmine
amethyste said:

It was a collaboration with a friend. Hugs.

April 10th, 2025 17:47

Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:

A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and human like. Very nice

April 10th, 2025 17:44

I do
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

April 8th, 2025 09:47

I do
Poetic Licence said:

A few erotic and sexual words that say so much, nicely written

April 8th, 2025 06:12

I do
sorenbarrett said:

Erotic, sensuous, sexual all three in one short piece, not necessarily the dick.

April 8th, 2025 04:34

Waiting
Poetic Licence said:

Waiting is a horrible thing to have to do especially if you are expecting, nicely expressed write

April 7th, 2025 02:35

Waiting
sorenbarrett said:

Waiting is the worst. A poem that captures this well.

April 6th, 2025 17:40

Humanity
Poetic Licence said:

Loved this read, nature would probably be happy if humanity disappeared it would give it a better chance of survival, lovely write

April 1st, 2025 02:09

Humanity
sorenbarrett said:

Profoundly stated and poetically said.

March 31st, 2025 16:03

Dance in the dark
amethyste said:

Thank you for reading it. Much appreciated. Love and hugs.

March 30th, 2025 06:12

Dance in the dark
sorenbarrett said:

An image cast in so few words. Very nice

March 30th, 2025 04:26

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