Comments received on poems by amethyste
Slut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully bold and self-aware. The speaker’s hunger for poetry becomes physical, instinctive, and gloriously indiscriminate...a wicked little confession of complete devotion to the art. Outstanding write. 📜🖤🔥🙏
September 11th, 2026 07:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is wonderfully bold and self-aware. The speaker’s hunger for poetry becomes physical, instinctive, and gloriously indiscriminate...a wicked little confession of complete devotion to the art. Outstanding write. 📜🖤🔥🙏
September 11th, 2026 07:20
Slut
MendedFences27 said:
We all experience the want for a poem. Sometimes they come to us like a \"Slut\" to a rendezvous, and at other times it\'s like dragging an elephant through the desert. Your poem describes this desire perfectly. I\'m not sure of your choice of words, but they define the desire eloquently. Loved your poem. - Phil A
September 10th, 2026 13:04
MendedFences27 said:
We all experience the want for a poem. Sometimes they come to us like a \"Slut\" to a rendezvous, and at other times it\'s like dragging an elephant through the desert. Your poem describes this desire perfectly. I\'m not sure of your choice of words, but they define the desire eloquently. Loved your poem. - Phil A
September 10th, 2026 13:04
Slut
Paul Bell said:
I like this, it conjurs up a lot of different thoughts, a bit of erotica, a bit of wanting, a bit of, I don\'t give a shit.
The line, My suns shine. Should that be. My sins shine. Great poem.
September 10th, 2026 03:14
Paul Bell said:
I like this, it conjurs up a lot of different thoughts, a bit of erotica, a bit of wanting, a bit of, I don\'t give a shit.
The line, My suns shine. Should that be. My sins shine. Great poem.
September 10th, 2026 03:14
Slut
Dog days said:
Quite a nice poem but I didn\'t really get why you said all I want is a poem
September 10th, 2026 00:55
Dog days said:
Quite a nice poem but I didn\'t really get why you said all I want is a poem
September 10th, 2026 00:55
Verse
sorenbarrett said:
I hear fear in this poem of despair and looking for help. Well done
September 4th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
I hear fear in this poem of despair and looking for help. Well done
September 4th, 2026 07:59
Hide and seek
Fränz Müller said:
As our moods change, we change, sometimes into seemingly wholly different people.
August 24th, 2026 18:53
Fränz Müller said:
As our moods change, we change, sometimes into seemingly wholly different people.
August 24th, 2026 18:53
Glitters
Paul Bell said:
From surreal to real.
If only we could do this in every situation.
August 22nd, 2026 04:17
Paul Bell said:
From surreal to real.
If only we could do this in every situation.
August 22nd, 2026 04:17
Glitters
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and metaphoric it shines with moon light. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal and metaphoric it shines with moon light. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 03:44
Yawn
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a thought that I have experienced and it feels as if it is so.
August 17th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a thought that I have experienced and it feels as if it is so.
August 17th, 2026 19:32
Homeless
sorenbarrett said:
A sharp comment on the feeling of the situation. Nicely said
August 10th, 2026 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
A sharp comment on the feeling of the situation. Nicely said
August 10th, 2026 12:41
Self love
sorenbarrett said:
Narcises was a thirsty guy and his image was quite quenching. A good read
July 20th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Narcises was a thirsty guy and his image was quite quenching. A good read
July 20th, 2026 20:10
Grey
sorenbarrett said:
Poems spring from even ugly places and this was twisted to the positive well done
June 22nd, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Poems spring from even ugly places and this was twisted to the positive well done
June 22nd, 2026 16:21
Frozen ice
sorenbarrett said:
Communication the key to any relationship. Well written
June 15th, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
Communication the key to any relationship. Well written
June 15th, 2026 17:23
Ashtray
sorenbarrett said:
I will have to give that one some thought for I have not seen an ashtray in a good long time ever since smoking became prohibited indoors. A fun read
June 8th, 2026 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
I will have to give that one some thought for I have not seen an ashtray in a good long time ever since smoking became prohibited indoors. A fun read
June 8th, 2026 14:21
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