Comments received on poems by amethyste



Twilight
sorenbarrett said:

An ethereal poem that speaks from the soul

July 2nd, 2025 13:38

Music
sorenbarrett said:

A euphoric state of love spoken of in this poem. Nicely said in so few words. Very nice

July 1st, 2025 16:23

Muse
Poetic Licence said:

Cleverly crafted, enjoyed the read

June 30th, 2025 23:50

Muse
sorenbarrett said:

Pain can be a magical muse. Good write

June 30th, 2025 17:48

Intimacy
sorenbarrett said:

The first part I remember but the last piece seems new. It answers the questions left by the first. Very good

June 29th, 2025 15:49

Heat
sorenbarrett said:

That\'s a thought that might be shared in a smile. Very nice

June 28th, 2025 17:18

Day & Night
sorenbarrett said:

Here is a depiction of the sensual and erotic call of night and day with a sense of animism it takes human form. Very nice

June 27th, 2025 07:52

Extasy
sorenbarrett said:

Betrayal without an answer. Forgive them for they know not what they do is the quote. And so it is with all of us we know not what we do. But that does not prevent the one harmed from protecting themself from further harm. A tragic and thought provoking poem a fave

June 25th, 2025 14:57

Oulu
Poetic Licence said:

Each language has its own voice and way of communicating, enjoyed the read

June 22nd, 2025 20:04

Oulu
sorenbarrett said:

And so it is that Finnish is one of the hardest languages to learn. You are right there are sounds that do not occur in other languages. A most interesting write.

June 22nd, 2025 16:55

Intrusive thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

The title tells it all with this poem. So many passing thoughts culminating in the end. Lovey

June 19th, 2025 17:54

I love you
Poetic Licence said:

What a lovely way to say i love you, enjoyed the read

June 16th, 2025 21:02

I love you
sorenbarrett said:

Short and yet sweet it calls out for love. Very nice

June 16th, 2025 16:04

City
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 16th, 2025 09:19

City
sorenbarrett said:

Now that makes me wonder about what problems are legit in the city and not elsewhere.

June 15th, 2025 15:40

Muse
sorenbarrett said:

A most intriguing poem of one to the muse. Nicely written

June 8th, 2025 17:19

Damn
RSM0812 said:

Great message. We are our own person and have the right to be who we are. Pleasing people too much will get a person taken advantage of.

June 8th, 2025 08:55

Damn
sorenbarrett said:

Being used is a common human tendency. A clever poem

June 7th, 2025 16:27

Boy
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that has a strong and inviting beginning with a most accepting approach to the relationship. Very nice

June 6th, 2025 15:26

Blue day
Poetic Licence said:

Takes your mind away for a little while, nicely expressed

June 5th, 2025 00:05

Blue day
sorenbarrett said:

Not so blue then, hopefully a better day. Good write

June 4th, 2025 16:11

Ranks
sorenbarrett said:

A thought provoking write the question becomes is it hard to visualize because it is too small, too large, too close or too far away? Well dome.

June 3rd, 2025 16:06

Cracks
sorenbarrett said:

I think that my thoughts fell through the cracks and were gathered up and put in the pocket of a corpse to be saved for a good day. Fun read

May 31st, 2025 17:32

God
Poetic Licence said:

A thought inspiring write around being understood and listened to, weather that be in religion or normal life, particularly when their prayers or requests are not delivered, enjoyed the read

May 30th, 2025 02:21

God
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor for prayer and people asking and not receiving and wondering why. Why would God speak any of our languages and why should we have the audacity to think he should? A most mind provoking poem well done a fave

May 29th, 2025 15:57

Strange dream
Poetic Licence said:

Were it belonged along with the message, nicely expressed

May 28th, 2025 02:05

Strange dream
sorenbarrett said:

And out the window it should go with the thought as well. Well done

May 27th, 2025 17:06

Destina
Poetic Licence said:

A true friend is priceless and rare, enjoyed the read

May 26th, 2025 02:17

Destina
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 25th, 2025 18:53

Destina
sorenbarrett said:

A great message and well said in so few words.

May 25th, 2025 17:28

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